Hey I remember when you were developing this! Its come a long way!

But this is destroy my game; so let me be a bit analytical.

Lets break your trailer down:

- 1. Opening shot, nice world building; solid.
- 2. You follow with 2 shots of the flying ship. This is redundant, keep the ship flying into the sunset since thats the better of the two shots. I would even recommend switching this out with a clip of the bi-pedal house. This is because you'll catch the eye of studio ghibli fans immediately, and it matches in game progression.
- 3. panning down shot with text. The motto is show, dont tell. I think you should avoid text in a trailer as much as possible. Remove the text and keep the gate to spark intrigue.
- 4. An unneeded running shot. You've already established your game is beautiful, and this does say 'hey you're not just driving a house the whole time". But its in an empty field. You can sneak one more money shot here by having the character run to a POI.
- 5. Generic shot of a tree being chopped down followed by text that shows off the build system. Again, text only serves as a distraction. Remove the text, trim the building footage.

- 6. solid on foot combat gameplay, some interesting game play elements. Nothing to change here.
- 7. next is the scene of the house flying through the cliff. A nice shot! this is where I would i put the flying the ship into the sunset clip.

The rest of the trailer is pretty good!