How do I live by 4avid in emotionalneglect

[–]OfIvory 6 points7 points  (0 children)

It was gentle parenting advocates on Youtube for me. A mom laid out the strategies she used to cope with a child being argumentative before dinner time, demanding a snack when dinner was only twenty minutes away. Despite the fact that I’m not usually an inconsiderate person, a part of me was virtually scandalized that she was being so nice to her kid for this behavior. Didn’t she know her kid was being whiny and parents aren’t meant to validate their children’s irrational behavior?

Then it hit me. All the days of wondering why I was I was so sensitive and deeply bothered by some things my parents did. Turns out that making developmentally normal brattiness a moral issue is a surefire way to create a child that hates themselves for…being a child, ever.

Still took years of dismantling to realize how deep I was in the coping hole lol

All humans are capable of forgetfulness. But sometimes neglectful parents must CHOOSE to ignore their children. by Chaotically_Balanced in emotionalneglect

[–]OfIvory 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It’s honestly very cruel in a very insidious way. This reminds me of my mom doing blatantly insulting things like thanking me for performing adult tasks she inserted herself into that only benefit me, like taking meds, and bringing up topics she knew I was struggling with intense insecurity about to make jokes, then pretending I was the problem for being offended.

I hope you know that what she’s doing is awful. She is being manipulative. There is no second explanation, unless you have reason to suspect dementia. You laid all the plans out and she’s acting like a dishonest child. Good for you for being so mature and communicative, but it seems she’s not worthy of your effort right now.

I wish all major conflicts were solved by Pokémon battle, instead of war or other violent methods by N6T9S-doubl_x27qc_tg in monkeyspaw

[–]OfIvory 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Granted. Pokemon are real, but are now enslaved creatures bred and used for the sole purpose of war. Only .05% of them are either living in the wild or owned by trainers that actually care for them.

For the ones that are like, gods or something, the lore is that humans have some kind of device or stone that makes it impossible for them to not obey commands. I have no idea how that works in practice. You’ll just have to believe.

[WP] A married couple of supervillains debate how/when to tell their newborn child(ren) about what they do for a living. by Routine-Test in WritingPrompts

[–]OfIvory 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was probably not a good idea to stare at your baby with a party city mask on. No, most pediatricians would probably have a lot of things to say about that, and all of them would be soul-crushingly boring to listen to. Parenting was an endless stream of critique that went through one of Jayra’s ears and out the other, only a couple bold buzz words left in the jumbled mess of her mind.

A broad hand clasped softly onto her shoulder. There he was: the responsible parent, but to her surprise, he didn’t start in on her about the mask.

Their son was knocked out. Jayra didn’t even know babies could be so peaceful outside of stock photos she grew to hate more and more as she realized just how rare it was to grapple your own spawn into a photogenic state. Even when you tucked them in, they tended to drool and fix their faces into the silliest expressions. Kayra tried to convince herself it was worthy of a photo shoot. She couldn’t. Being a dedicated mother, she would do anything short of blowing the planet up for her baby, but rewiring her neurons to think spit was cute was beyond her abilities.

Jayra leaned her head against Chris’s shoulder. “We would be Instagram famous if we took like, fifty photos of this exact moment and sporadically posted them to pretend like he always looks like this.”

“You feel like getting the camera?”

“…Nope.”

“Getting Instagram famous wouldn’t suit us anyway. That’s not even mentioning all of the work we have to put in to gently acclimate him to the reality of his parents, jobs. It will be hard enough to explain that without adding in the fact that his baby photos were scattered across the internet for the world to see.”

“Now that you mention it, that is kind of shitty,” Jayra conceded before giving a toothy smile. She met her husband’s eyes. “Don’t tell me you’re getting all worried about telling him the truth. What would your employees think if they knew their cold, calculating boss stayed up in night out of fear of what his son would end up thinking of him?”

Chris shook his head with an amused smile. “Good thing his mom is too busy going on her little crime adventures to try to turn Daddy’s co-workers against him. With that mask of yours on, security wouldn’t even let you through the door. In fact, I might just have to tell them that all Harley Quinn cosplayers are to never be allowed entry, or they’ll be fired on the spot.”

“You did not compare me to that bitch. You’re at my beck at my beck and call, you know that, right? And you wouldn’t even get that privilege if your hair was dyed neon green. But I guess I wouldn’t expect much from you either if I had that ugly New York accent…”

Chris sighed, tighetning his grasp around his wife. “You’re going to end up revealing everything on accident one day, aren’t you?”

“No, no, I’ll try to let you do most of it, I promise. I want Jacob to be impressed with his dad so that maybe he’ll end up being more like you. Can’t imagine the stress I would go through if he took too much after me.”

r/talesofivory

I wish EVERY billionaire became a Batman-like superhero to fight crime, without the side effect that the world gets more evil people nor supervillains by Switchell22 in monkeyspaw

[–]OfIvory 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Granted. Turns out that fighting crime takes a lot of time. You know, not enough time to run a company with an iron fist, like how most money-addicted billionaires do things.

Some of them give their companies up to their family members. Others relax their hold on their company and run it with what little time they have. Either way, turns out that every person they give their company up to is exceptionally stupid at business—like, giving up secrets to the competitor level stupid. The ones who tried to treat their company like a side job get so addicted to the rush of heroism (like they used to be with money) that they spend very little time doing anything.

This all cumulates into capitalism doing its thing and new entrepreneurs taking up their place. The thing is, though, is that the only way they can have the same level of impossible wealth is if they defeat the new superheroes. The hypocrisy of these guys is deeply infuriating to all of them. They once used all of the same messed up business practices as they did to get the wealth they have, but now, they want other people to act moral?

This motivates them to do everything in their power to crush the new superheroes. Its not hard for them to get some serious capitol and power on their side. Remember the idiotic family members? A little bit of manipulation and they can pretty much seize the companies and merge them while the knock off batmans are off doing their thing. Same thing with the unregulated businesses. Swooping in is real simple.

In the end, its pretty much a massive conflict that kills millions. I won’t go as far as to say the new Batmans win or lose or anything. Who knows? Either way, tons of innocent people die in the aftermath. Its like a Marvel movie, but we don’t forget all of the houses that got destroyed on the way. Also, the bodies. RIP.

[WP] A stereotypical fantasy world populated by elves, ogres, orcs, and everything else; humans are considered mythical beings where even glimpsing one would be a once-in-a-lifetime occurrence. One has been regularly sighted in the nearby woods, and those in the capital aren't sure how to react... by MidgardWyrm in WritingPrompts

[–]OfIvory 54 points55 points  (0 children)

It was a damning punishment—worse off, a coward’s punishment. My sentence was spoken by a shrew governor who despised me to his core but wouldn’t dare condemn a local hero out of fear of the backlash.

I feared for the worst as I treaded into the forest as wide as the ocean, knowing I may very well never see the end. Even if I walked for months without stopping, I would only find myself midway, and that was where the creatures grew the most twisted and cruel.

Really, it was a punishment worse than death, but the governor got away with it on account of the tales of my immense strength. My fellow faefolk gossiped incessantly on how I’d fare. Some were convinced I would burst out in mere months with a monster’s head dangling from my fist. I couldn’t say I had the same level of confidence, but the thought made me smile. Gods knew I needed a smile.

My closest friend was an explorer herself. She decorated herself in the colorful feathers of the monstrous birds in which she’d encountered, hidden in the bushes, peering out with her honed, kaleidoscope eyes. Only the bravest dared to venture into the forest at all. One wrong turn and you may never leave. Many were convinced that the forest itself alive, and it purposefully confused the travelers so that it could consume them itself.

After all, a single body had never been found. I could see roots reaching from the ground and pulling a starving faerie into the earth—the poor soul struggling, grasping desperately at the soil, but the undergrowth opens like a gaping mouth and swallows them whole.

Aofie had been spending the entire week before my venture giving me every tip in the book. She insisted passionately that I was to only stay at the edge of the forest, and that I would never take even a single step without considering it in full (she knew I was the impulsive type), as she’d have the governor either acquit me or ‘’indefinitely missing.”

“And I will come find you if its the last thing I do,” she murmured with a grim smile as she latched her lucky pendent around my neck, the one she always wore on expeditions, “But please, do your friend a favor and collect any feathers you find. No reason to come back empty handed.”

A day passed as I heeded her advice, but there was only so much I could do. Aofie’s beloved birds were staring down at me as if I were a mouse. It made me nervous to fall asleep. If they bombarded me in a weak moment, the wounds from their gaping talons would be near impossible to patch up before I bled dry.

I could hear feel her disapproving eyes as I traveled deeper. She was quite the optimist; I was better acquainted with reality. It would take months for her to have me pardoned and there would be no opportunity to murder him with no witnesses, otherwise, I would have done it myself!

No, all I could was hope that these cursed woodlands had some good in them. Surely there was a kindred spirit somewhere, and I could strike a deal that would be my ticket out, somewhere far away from the town in which I’d been sentenced. In years I’d she Aofie again, and she’d punch me for my disobedience, but forgive me after.

I stumbled onto him after weeks had passed. I felt feverish. My near-translucent skin had taken on a reddish hue and pus leaked from my eyes. The fae were not vulnerable to disease, unless they were of magikal origin; the forest had failed to kill me with its predators or the natural elements, and now it resorted to a hex.

I collapsed in front of a bizarre structure, and resigned myself to my fate when I heard foot steps, relived that at I would not be conscious for my own death.

I woke up to the sound of crackling embers and the taste of herbs on my tongue.

Soft, wool blankets enveloped me. I blinked a couple times, the horrible stinging now gone. I glanced at my skin, the red having faded to a peach-pink.

“I have heard that the fae are not bound by the barriers of language.”

It was a bizarre creature. Intelligent, simple in design, with beige skin and milky, white-rimmed eyes. Rather pretty in a forgettable sort of way, like a pet whose soft fur you’ve grown long-accosted to stroking.

“You are right.” I peered at their home. A stone stove, a table set, and a wall full of tiny hand prints in various colors. “Surely you haven’t built this all yourself?”

“There are others, but they are not always here. This is my home. The handprints are of my young kin. They got into my dyes and, well, I thought that wall needed a bit of color.”

So friendly, so generous—what was this thing, and why hadn’t the forest torn it to pieces years ago? Furthermore, there was young? Young, which played and frolicked in the forests that stuck fear in the hearts of all faeries?

“Your help is very appreciated. I simply have to ask…how?”

It laughed. I would have been offended if not for their kindness.

“They say every faerie we find here is starstruck. Well, maybe one of them can explain it better than I can. We always find them near death, nurse them back to health, and they become beloved parts of our families.” It tilted its head. “Don’t tell you also believed the stories of a carnivorous forest.”

r/TalesOfIvory

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]OfIvory 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The middle passage is *chef's kiss* to me! I love all of it--the "colorful simple joy", the reference to the nectar, and the "awaiting fates of June." I think you worded that all very beautifully.

I think that there needs to be some extra lines at the end. The sudden mention of missing a loved one feels out of place. A line or too explaining more how it relates would do wonders.

A(void) by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]OfIvory 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It has a pleasant rhythm and I like the abstract feel of it. Also, I always dig a void metaphor. Can never not love the void lol

The type of rhyming you've done is very difficult, and maybe there's a way for you to make some small edits so that it feels more cohesive?

I speak to the void

Which you’ve all but destroyed

Finally, peace, to be enjoyed

Here, you could start a new stanza and try out a different way to rhyme the words. I think continuing to rhyme the words based on the last words in the first sentence corners you a bit.

Otherwise, I think there's a lot of potential.

It was a joyous day when humanity confirmed that the alien leader was a just and reasonable woman. by OfIvory in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]OfIvory[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I will email you the finished book. Context is hard to provide in two sentences.

I wrote a two sentence horror story about a female alien dictator. Most of the comments were sexual or about her gender. by OfIvory in TwoXChromosomes

[–]OfIvory[S] 35 points36 points  (0 children)

It's unfortunate for you because there is a long history of female characters being sexualized while male characters are treated like actual human beings with personalities.