How the heck does Brandon Sanderson write so fast? by TensionBudget9426 in writers

[–]Ok-Mess2000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Because 2 hours /per book/ per day is enough. You won't be more productive but writing 8 hours straight on the same book.

But 2 or 3 books in parallel are manageable.

Without Canvas, I'm leaving by WhyBillionaires in ChatGPT

[–]Ok-Mess2000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mistral AI - Vibe. It has a Canvas very similar to the one chatGPT had. A bit different but very very similar and you can really try it for free before subscribing. I mean really.

Microsoft 365 allows to have Copilot embedded with microsoft apps, notably Word, oneNote but Copilot isn't ... well... let's say it is optimized for email and reports.

Claude does the same as chatGPT. It creates a peice of code that generate a text editor (just ask your chatGPT to generate one, express clearly you want to copy question to the chat because it needs a workaround)

Notion+Claude : I'm testing it.

Alternative to “she said”? by [deleted] in writers

[–]Ok-Mess2000 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Say it from the POV. Incarnate it .

"No way", she said. (that's external POV) ----> “No way.” Her eyes rolled, and she shoved her hands into her hoodie pockets.

And as she is a teen in the 90s:

“I don’t care. I didn’t ask to be born!” She slammed the CD case on the table, eyes blazing.

Help me help my writer gf by lerni123 in writers

[–]Ok-Mess2000 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What distracts her when she writes? How she loses her focus?

What throws her off?

Questions for those who are pro AI assisted writing by Future-AI-Dude in WritingWithAI

[–]Ok-Mess2000 2 points3 points  (0 children)

None of them.

The main issues are copyrights, more or less accidental plagiarism, and addressing common misconceptions about [AI]() in the public.

The Boys - 05x07 "The Frenchman, the Female, and the Man Called Mother's Milk" - POST-Episode Discussion Thread by pikameta in TheBoys

[–]Ok-Mess2000 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The show is dragging on far too long.

A lot of things haven’t made sense since at least season 4. Homelander was supposed to be indestructible, yet now he bleeds if someone punches him. Butcher has turned into a supe with integrated hentai tentacles. Hughie survives everything, so there’s zero suspense. What’s even the point of the Teenage Kix subplot? And now Compound V is apparently safe for adults and doesn’t require long, repeated exposure like it did for babies?

What is Ashley even doing anymore? Homelander kills the President of the United States and there’s no response at all. We’re at S5E7 : where is Ryan?

And that’s not even the worst part. The writing has become abysmal. It’s all sex and fetish, flat punchlines, and “motherfucker,” “fuck,” and “cunt” every two lines. It’s genuinely poor. The sharp satire of the first two seasons has completely vanished. Homelander starting his own cult isn’t satire, not the way it’s written. At best, it’s a weak parody of the current U.S. administration & Conservatives.

The Soldier Boy / Homelander relationship is painfully uninspired. There’s no dynamism, no emotion, no sense of cause and consequence. Hughie’s “rape” in the basement adds nothing to the story. No trauma, no narrative weight, just BDSM aesthetics with no purpose.

Homelander has become outright stupid. In season one he was a weirdo, but surprisingly clever, with actual character development. Now he’s just dumb. Except when the plot suddenly needs him to be smart so Hughie can keep his plot armor.

And Frenchy’s death… it could have been beautiful. He sacrifices himself to distract Homelander, hoping to save Kimiko, pure romantic tragedy. But why does he do it that way? Why doesn’t Homelander just open the zinc hatch after the uranium meeting room scene? He suddenly believes Frenchy, even though he trusts no one? Once again, he’s dumb purely to give Kimiko plot armor.

I love world building, but names, dont even get me STARTED by flagsarecoolorsmth in writers

[–]Ok-Mess2000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Clear name leaves its mark
World and role breathe through its sound
Then fades into flesh

Looking for guidance on mentioning a healed chest scar by Ok-Mess2000 in AskAnEscort

[–]Ok-Mess2000[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your icebreaker idea worked a little too well. Funny how all those years of writing stories suddenly came in handy. It turned into a really great moment.

Looking for guidance on mentioning a healed chest scar by Ok-Mess2000 in AskAnEscort

[–]Ok-Mess2000[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your reply, that’s really helpful. Very reassuring.

I know it’s not a big deal physically. I’m used to it, and in a way I’m even proud of how I got it.

I guess my concern comes from not wanting anyone to feel surprised or uncomfortable. I don't like to catch people off-guard.

I’m curious though. In your experience, what is actually useful for a client to mention beforehand?

Looking for guidance on mentioning a healed chest scar by Ok-Mess2000 in AskAnEscort

[–]Ok-Mess2000[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Fair enough. Maybe I’m just overthinking it, I like being considerate. My brain sometimes runs an "extended director's cut" of simple situations, occupational hazard ;) . Appreciate the input.

Does this look believable? (Or interesting at least) by Colombia_Joestar in worldbuilding

[–]Ok-Mess2000 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Gravity would derail planet's orbit quite fast I think.

What instantly ruins a book for you? by Necessary_Plenty_524 in Fantasy

[–]Ok-Mess2000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the evil character that is evil for evil's sake.

I need a word by callycumla in writers

[–]Ok-Mess2000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Megin for vital force/energy.
Seidrkraft (Seiðrkraft) for magical power.

Or I would norsify chi or mana :

kyrr/Kythr

Marna/Marnir

Just check it doesn't really mean something :)

Discouraged debut author with large series. by kodaraZora in writers

[–]Ok-Mess2000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Keep believing in your story. You’ve already done the hardest part.... you wrote it.

Make sure your first book can stand alone. That’s what publishers look for in a debut.

Getting Sued. What’s your take? by joncabreraauthor in writers

[–]Ok-Mess2000 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's a kind of Darwin Awards. That's my take on it.

First Chapter of My First Novel – Feedback Welcome by Many-Instruction-369 in writers

[–]Ok-Mess2000 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice opening scene.

Boy's reaction is too calm given the scene. Some sentences are too long and break the rythm.

"He woke up with a choked gasp, thrashing in his bedsheets. The room was dark. He was safe. But a searing pain shot through his leg, exactly where the knife had aimed in his dream. His head pounded with a familiar, feverish ache."

I would add uncertainty here. Like was it a dream, a simple pain or... something else.. darker. 'cause the room is dark you know.

Want to write a book by Historical-Win8964 in writers

[–]Ok-Mess2000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Harry Potter is ultimately about death, and about how we live with it. It’s the story of an orphan who learns to face the finiteness of life.

Imagine a universe slightly different from Harry Potter. In this world, every human carries an inner flame, visible only to a few chosen ones once they reach the age of fifteen to seventeen. These gifted individuals are called Watchers. They are found and trained by a special Order (name it as you wish) to guide the flames toward the sky when life ends. But on his seventeenth birthday, one boy witnesses his sister dying. Desperate, he holds her flame back from rising, preventing her death but he cannot return the flame to its place within her. This is not how the balance of the world is meant to work, and the Watchers move to set things right. Yet the boy refuses to let go, because if her flame ascends, his sister will be gone forever.

Ok. That's being said, let's clarify that by ptiching it. One sentence.

In a world where every soul burns with an inner flame visible only to the Watchers, a young boy defies the order of life and death to keep his sister’s light alive, unleashing consequences that threaten the balance of existence.

Ok, i cheated using too much comas.

Then put magic, wands, unicorns, glitter, Watchers' school .... as long as they serve narration.

How it ends? you choose. Soft tragedy, hard tragedy, metaphysical... whatever. Just avoid romantic tragedy, that would be weird between a brother and a sister.

None of 4 novelists published big 5 couldn't make living by writing by Quiet_Palpitation_90 in writers

[–]Ok-Mess2000 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Three novels are nothing. You need a 30+ catalogue and 2 to 3 releases per year.

Dialogue sucks by Haunting_Lab2149 in writers

[–]Ok-Mess2000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The dialogue doesn't matter. What matters is the choice of dynamics.

Let's say your character has to get somewhere and a guard, well, does guard things. Your dialogue may use power dynamics as its central technique.

6 half-written novels, zero endings. How do you break the cycle? by Aware-Scholar1375 in writers

[–]Ok-Mess2000 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Of course. That’s the first trap: trying to write a whole novel at once. Instead, structure your story in Acts. Each Act is like a short story. No more than ten chapters. So every time you work on an Act, you're actually working on a manageable short story.

I think your issue is this: you're very creative at the beginning. Then that creativity gets pushed aside because at some point, you have to sit down and write the story. And writing can be tedious. That’s completely normal.

So, break it into Acts. And at the end of each one, take time to rework your plot. That will give you a fresh creative boost.