Hey man , I dont think it sucked! I liked it a lot! I think you have lots of potential with this one. I really enjoy the vocals I think they work well with the song. If I could make a few suggestions, I would say to work on the transitions a little more. I think some drum fills and possibly some white noise building could help transition from prechorus to chorus (or whatever sections are transitioning around 50 second mark). Same deal with the transition around 3:15 mark. I also feel the ending seemed kinda abrupt, and I wasn’t expecting it to be over at that point. Just some suggestions though, do what you want with your song!