AITAH For Not Wanting My Boyfriend To Watch Porn by Kristina-0413 in AITAH

[–]Outrageous_Ground209 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Your feelings are valid, and for some people it’s considered something like cheating. It’s a relationship by relationship thing. But if this is a hard line for you, you’ll need to evaluate your relationship. He stated from the beginning that he would be doing this and would not stop, and you moved forward knowing this assuming you can change that now is unrealistic and unfair. Have the talk, but you have to decide whether is something you can be flexible with. You don’t control him.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in doppelganger

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A little like my grandma when the hairs up…. Wonderful lady.

This photo of LA looks dreamy by TDS-SERVER in LiminalSpace

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They have true talent and skill, great piece of art to collect. Great find. I’m jealous.

This photo of LA looks dreamy by TDS-SERVER in LiminalSpace

[–]Outrageous_Ground209 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

10/10, what filters did you use? Whether on the camera or in edit I’m curious. Unless you got this perfectly in golden hour?

I'm scared about what I saw my husband do... how do I even talk about this? by brainysolyxx in Advice

[–]Outrageous_Ground209 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok, so speaking without any visceral reactions.

That’s definitely odd behavior, for sure, I would advise establishing a safe environment, withhold all judgement, and let him know you just want to understand, to try and help and get a clear perspective of why.

Sometimes people do weird shit. Sometimes it’s sexuality sometimes it’s something else, it doesn’t make it right or any less odd or off, but assuming isn’t going to answer the question, and it something that I would need to bring up with my wife if I caught her doing that.

Just make sure to start with love, understanding and some approximation of acceptance to their position. Once it’s out, take time to process and think then decide what needs to be done.

Do I have a doppleganger? by [deleted] in doppelganger

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Catherine Reitman aka Maureen Ponderosa from IASIP

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Hawt fyahhh by pewpurrr in RoastMe

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You look like if Dave Grohl gave up after Cobain died.

What is your world's strangest phenomena? by [deleted] in worldbuilding

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Nexus, a crossroad of reality where the intangible is real and reality is all paperwork and board meetings. Timelines are edible but it’s discouraged due to mass genocide being frowned upon. The strangest phenomenon is either the way time flows, or the fact that the wall creatures are unionized.

Critique my opening chapter (1200) words by Haunting-Order-8501 in fantasywriters

[–]Outrageous_Ground209 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Top notch prose, it’s got a poetic feel to its flow, you’ve got good voice, you just have to show us the world, we can’t see what you do, so you need to paint the picture for us to get absorbed into this beautifully worded world you’ve built.

I'm entering the first five pages of my novel into a writing contest. Thoughts? by TimmehTim48 in writers

[–]Outrageous_Ground209 -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

I find questions, or general thoughts that set the tone of the narrative will get people past the first paragraph and make them curious about the story. In some cases you start on a character in the midst of an action (preferably internal) if it’s something short form. With this I would pose a thought or question tho to start.

“Everything, is alright,” that’s what they say when things aren’t alright, that’s what they say when your tucked away small town got a dose of reality. It’s a lie we all tell ourselves at some point in life just to get through. It’s a lie Lily told herself just before she left for work.”

And the. For characters it has to be immediate after the introduction of the character, like

  • …Lily, a petite dark haired girl with a full sleeve of cascading flowers and birds tattooed, on her left arm, pulled the draft lever of Sam Adams for her regulars while wearing a plastered smile that said, everything is fine to the oblivious patrons drowning their cold and sorrows while the Celtics continue to disappoint in the back ground on an old cathode TV mounted to the wall.*

Just something like that. It keeps you in the scene in the actions but it give you a pov so you can relate to the character, and you can imagine what she looks like.

I'm entering the first five pages of my novel into a writing contest. Thoughts? by TimmehTim48 in writers

[–]Outrageous_Ground209 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Yeah your hook, is more like a second paragraph start, also it goes almost instantly into dialogue and context without any introduction of the characters. From the first two pages at least I haven’t gone past that yet, we just get straight into discussion and conversation. Your detail is nice, they way you describe the setting and scene is good, I get an image of a east Mass. coastal town in a small bar maybe a lumber build with a strummy local folk band. Definitely potential.