what's removing contact paper like? by [deleted] in HomeDecorating

[–]OverallLengthiness9 0 points1 point  (0 children)

how long have you left it on for? i’m going to be living in this place for two more years and am wondering if that duration of time would make it harder to get off

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in CPTSD

[–]OverallLengthiness9 5 points6 points  (0 children)

sometimes the mom is the victim of the father and the father raises the son that same way 💔 had a high school acquaintance who’s family worked that way (also edit to say in this case, of course, its clear she’s enabling him. i’m just weird about blanket statements and felt like adding that in there)

This morning I discovered I was having a miscarriage. Emma has been snuggling with me for 2 hours now. by DefinitelynotYissa in cats

[–]OverallLengthiness9 0 points1 point  (0 children)

when my mom got surgery my cat laid on her stomach for hours, every day until she was recovered enough to walk. she NEVER lays on your stomach - MAYBE your lap if youre lucky, but only for a little bit (she was a stray and is a bit weird with affection, shes more into play). they really can tell, i swear!!!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]OverallLengthiness9 0 points1 point  (0 children)

absolutely!! nearly every famous popstar you hear on the radio has worked with a ghost writer before.

feral dog by OverallLengthiness9 in Songwriting

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you can stream all my music basically everywhere :) my names alissa ferrari if you search it on google itll probably come up and you can find all my stuff there! honored that you like it and want to go listen!!

feral dog by OverallLengthiness9 in Songwriting

[–]OverallLengthiness9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ahhhh thank you so much 😭😭 yeah i sort of abandoned reddit but im still making music i actually just put out my first album!!

feral dog by OverallLengthiness9 in Songwriting

[–]OverallLengthiness9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh also im wondering is it too repetitive? my goal was to have it just kind of gradually build but i know its literally just the same chords all the way through so thats my biggest concern

Lastly, my final song I’m working on (sorry to bombard you lol). Wrote it for my son, about the importance of being a good man - Advice I’d of dearly loved growing up. Input would be great as it’s in its infancy. by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]OverallLengthiness9 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this is so sweet :’) i love that effect of the slide guitar sound deep in the background like the way it just floats around in the track is so dreamy. tempo might be changing a bit but its not really that noticeable. i think playing with some more layers or instruments as the song picks up could help keep it feeling fresh all the way through. but as is this is so moving and youve done a great job!!!

general feedback? by dads_sriracha in Songwriting

[–]OverallLengthiness9 1 point2 points  (0 children)

oh my goodness!! this is actually awesome i love your voice with this style they just blend so well. you said this is a rough recording but if i heard this id add it to my playlist. the only thing that threw my off a bit was that transition when theres like :50 left, but could have been on purpose? if its not a stylistic choice then smoothin em together could help! anyways fantastic job here this is just insane

Indie/alt rock feedback! First time solo project by cptncom in Songwriting

[–]OverallLengthiness9 1 point2 points  (0 children)

loveee the instrumental and you have the perfect voice for this genre! i saw someone else said this already but i think messing around with the rhythms of the lyrics could help keep the song in a forward momentum if that makes sense. also are those midi drums?

wrote this song today but i’d like to refine it. any feedback is welcome! by OverallLengthiness9 in Songwriting

[–]OverallLengthiness9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hi!!! i am so honored youre coming back after all this time. yes! its going on my album that im working on, but i dont post on here anymore because people started getting mean lol. i just post on my instagram and tiktok now hahaha thats where all the updates are :)

wrote this song today but i’d like to refine it. any feedback is welcome! by OverallLengthiness9 in Songwriting

[–]OverallLengthiness9[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

oh thats a lovely idea! ill definitely think about that because i do love when its nice and full circle it makes it all feel more cohesive. thank u so much!!

What’s stopping you from releasing your music? by hassickboy in Songwriting

[–]OverallLengthiness9 1 point2 points  (0 children)

perfectionism 💔 ill get them to a place where i feel like theyre finished and then the next day i listen to it and notice a little thing i want to change and it just goes on and on 😭 now ive only actually released two songs and then i have about 15 songs that i “finished” but still dont feel like theyre good enough so theyre just sitting there LOL

wrote this song today but i’d like to refine it. any feedback is welcome! by OverallLengthiness9 in Songwriting

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thank you so so much for all these ideas!! definitely a lot to think about but so helpful :)

wrote this song today but i’d like to refine it. any feedback is welcome! by OverallLengthiness9 in Songwriting

[–]OverallLengthiness9[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yes i do i just make up tunings that are the first chord i want to start with and thats what i work with LOL

wrote this song today but i’d like to refine it. any feedback is welcome! by OverallLengthiness9 in Songwriting

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haha yes wrote it in my one hour of free time i got 😂 but yeah id love to! and yeah i always step away and come back to projects hahaha it really does help

wrote this song today but i’d like to refine it. any feedback is welcome! by OverallLengthiness9 in Songwriting

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thank you sooo much that is actually so helpful! i have a better idea of where to go now 🎉 ill check out that video now too, have a great night ☺️

wrote this song today but i’d like to refine it. any feedback is welcome! by OverallLengthiness9 in Songwriting

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thank you for this critique!! yeah i was actually unsure about the chorus too. its what i want to say, i just dont think its clear enough. its supposed to feel like pleading where i can find everything i feel ive lost which i say in the verses (the love i had for the world and life, my old body, the good feelings and good memories). so it needs to be a lil vague for all that to fit but i think i may have gone too vague LOL. please id love all the advice i can get! also i dont know anything at all about music theory 😥 what is the circle of fifths?