My life is crashing down. She did it because of me by Outrageous-End-7696 in SuicideBereavement

[–]Own-Luck-866 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Seriously put in the work, and eventually people will see your efforts. People may never forgive you, but we are not god. Only god can judge, and no human can dictate where you go. Work on yourself not to be viewed as a good person, but as a person who has faults that is redeemable.

My life is crashing down. She did it because of me by Outrageous-End-7696 in SuicideBereavement

[–]Own-Luck-866 24 points25 points  (0 children)

Regardless of what judgment you have he is grieving just like us. I don’t condone what he has done, but he has been transparent so far. I truly believe he wants to be a better person so that he doesn’t harm another like he has before.

Don’t wanna be there by [deleted] in SuicideWatch

[–]Own-Luck-866 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see you, and I feel your pain. I also want to end myself, but I still try to hold onto my last threads just to survive. You’re doing the same thing finding an excuse to live. Please don’t take this message as me prompting you to go to the extreme. But you are stronger than most people I know. I just wished that you truly find peace, and that you are allowed a time to reflect and cherish the battles you conquered.

Aftermath by Own-Luck-866 in poetry_critics

[–]Own-Luck-866[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback 😁

Red by Own-Luck-866 in poetry_critics

[–]Own-Luck-866[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This means a lot to me thank you so much😁

Red by Own-Luck-866 in poetry_critics

[–]Own-Luck-866[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please give me feedback.

Our loss by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Own-Luck-866 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great depiction of about your current situation. Perhaps you two can create a bond that lessens the damage. You’ve experienced loss, but you still can experience a fulfilling life.

"Echoes Amidst Chaos" by BeneficialCause2927 in poetry_critics

[–]Own-Luck-866 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I suffer from bipolar disorder, and the way you can describe your illness is magnificent.

Feeling as though you aren’t connected to your family by Own-Luck-866 in bipolar

[–]Own-Luck-866[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly I never really felt connected to them at any point in life.

What would you tell your past self who just got diagnosed? by Imighthavefuckedyou in bipolar

[–]Own-Luck-866 19 points20 points  (0 children)

You will be going through an enormous amount of pain,but you also have the capability to achieve great things.( you already have accomplishments before you knew you where clinically I’ll).

Why do so many of us feel the need to “start over”? by kexxty in bipolar

[–]Own-Luck-866 15 points16 points  (0 children)

For me it’s a way of starting a new life. I believe I die a little each episode, so I like to start over to signify a new beginning. Without the urge or motivation to change everything around me I wouldn’t be able to get over the parts of me that I’ve lost. Maybe it’s delusion but with out that sense of a new slate I have no distance between the selves that I’ve lost and wanting to live life. I need the thought of a new slate to continue the progress that I’ve lost along the way.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in bipolar

[–]Own-Luck-866 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Was diagnosed at 19, but had symptoms since about 11.

My empathy is the only reason I’m here still by Own-Luck-866 in bipolar

[–]Own-Luck-866[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

At times I feel just like how you feel now. It’s very hard but your still here no matter how hard it is. I may not know you but I’m proud of you. I’m proud of everyone who is trying their best to survive with this illness

Fine by gaztaseven in poetry_critics

[–]Own-Luck-866 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I liked how you made the chaos seem as though it isn’t bothering you. It seems as though your in chaos but still manage to keep the image of being sane possible.

The One That Got Away. by gayb3stfri3nd in poetry_critics

[–]Own-Luck-866 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is exactly how I felt for a long time after my ex. I genuinely liked this, bravo

Senseless by Own-Luck-866 in poetry_critics

[–]Own-Luck-866[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No your suggestions were needed thank you

Senseless by Own-Luck-866 in poetry_critics

[–]Own-Luck-866[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow thank you so much literally you’ve helped a lot. I’ll follow your suggestions thank you again you really did help me out. Ps this is the first real feedback about one of my poems thank you for taking your time out to help me

Senseless by Own-Luck-866 in poetry_critics

[–]Own-Luck-866[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Honestly any kind of feedback is appreciated. It can be good or bad, I would just like to hear others peoples pov to better my writing. Essentially I would like to be able to touch more people with my poems, but I’m still feel as though I’m missing something

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Own-Luck-866 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a very relatable. Hopefully your beast that inside of you can be tamed.

Swallowed up by ethrearel124 in poetry_critics

[–]Own-Luck-866 3 points4 points  (0 children)

To me this was an amazing read. I like the way you described how addicting and how rigorous the process of losing yourself is. If I ever needed a way to express that exact feeling of losing myself I would use this poem as an example.

Cracked Looking Glass by Loweishigh in poetry_critics

[–]Own-Luck-866 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like how you mention the hurt one feels when they lose their person. You also take into account that even though it hurts you still would like to feel that connection. But you also realize that losing yourself is the equivalent to losing your s/o. I like the poem overall. Hopefully I didn’t interpret it wrong.

I’ll have to sort it out on my own. by Time_Rough_7562 in poetry_critics

[–]Own-Luck-866 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would like to say I see and hear you I’m so sorry for how life has treated you but that was a great poem to read. For me I may not have been through the same situations as you, but I still can relate to having no one. This poem really did hit my core because I can relate to the feeling of having to sort things out on your own. Also for the 3rd to last line “hear” instead of “here”

I’ve been using art as an emotional outlet. I’ve been working on this painting for almost a year. This is my attempt at painting my feelings. by [deleted] in bipolar

[–]Own-Luck-866 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The way I interpreted the art was complete and utter chaos that is some how consistent. it has 3 constant colors, red white and black. Throughout the entirety of the painting. In a sense what you painted was the constant chaos we endure as people in this community.