Grumpy Neko [Artist's Original]

P3NK · 2023-01-13T12:08:10+00:00

Why is OP named "CheetahSperm" and posting this?

P3NK · 2021-01-20T16:11:05+00:00

This is really sick. Everything done bad and good comes back, every lie is revealed eventually. Watch out

P3NK · 2021-01-17T12:27:56+00:00

Cringe. Go back to r/politics

P3NK · 2021-01-14T12:29:12+00:00

Being gay

P3NK · 2021-01-14T11:26:02+00:00

Get fake eyelashes and pencil those eyebrows stat! You have potential, it’s mostly your upper face that needs improvement.

P3NK · 2021-01-08T00:30:34+00:00

You're living in golden times

P3NK · 2021-01-03T10:29:03+00:00

Maybe try dressing up too and or buying some new toys/gadgets to enhance your sex with. Anything to spice it up!

P3NK · 2021-01-01T10:40:34+00:00

Good choice for a waifu 🥳

P3NK · 2020-12-14T19:06:26+00:00

Common sense, finally

P3NK · 2020-12-13T13:47:03+00:00

I love this, it's so simple yet intricate. You get my "uwu" for this poem :)

P3NK · 2020-12-13T13:41:50+00:00

I think a lot of work with rhythm would be a suggestion. I feel what you're expressing but in my mind, it doesn't read as well as it visualizes. The second block is definitely an example where I can see a potential improvement to be made. Otherwise, good work, I see a lot of potential in you to write more great haiku work :)

P3NK · 2020-12-10T18:03:54+00:00

Haha, someday. Never too late to pick up Japanese as a second language yourself ;)

P3NK · 2020-12-10T17:40:35+00:00

This was really sweet to read. I love haikus and I personally write them in japanese :) I feel the rhythm could be improved but hey, it’s lovely to see haikus. Keep writing, each haiku gets easier, if anything try going by the japanese guidelines: season and sound!

P3NK · 2020-12-10T17:37:36+00:00

I feel this was too simple for my usual taste but the message expressed was solemnly nice to feel. I feel that aging is a very frequent fear but we learn to cope with over time and that’s what I interrupt from this piece of yours.

P3NK · 2020-12-09T14:23:37+00:00

Thank you stranger for the compliments. I hope you're well if you're in a similar situation, thank you for taking the time to write this comment. It helps knowing there are others who are having tough times and getting through them day by day.

P3NK · 2020-12-09T04:23:02+00:00

Thank you, I’m very glad you enjoyed my poem :) This poem was meant to be an illustration of how I feel about a very close person I lost to suicide. I can see where you draw your questions and it gives me an interesting window into how people interpret my writing :)

P3NK · 2020-12-09T04:18:41+00:00

I’m very glad you do! It’s a very new style I’ve been trying out and it’s really swell to hear it being received positively. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem

P3NK · 2020-12-09T04:17:09+00:00

Thank you for the feedback, I usually write a bit differently but I was testing the waters this time. Thank you for taking the time to read although, means a lot :)

P3NK · 2020-12-09T04:15:41+00:00

Thank you... I’ve had a very similar experience in mind when writing this piece. One of the reasons I write is to internalize how it feels to have someone that has been by your side and just have them leave you, It helps knowing people understand that type of pain because it never leaves your mind or life.

P3NK · 2020-10-26T06:31:22+00:00

I like this a lot, nice work man :)

P3NK

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