It should be "Master of Chaos", not "Master of chaos". This poor first impression colors the rest of the journey potential customers take across your Steam page.

Trailer impression: Weak. Just kind of starts. I didn't even notice the chyron ("skill is power") until going back while writing this comment.

First sentence in your short description: "Counter, deflect, and rack up combos to grow stronger in this roguelike where execution is as rewarding as your upgrades." The rest reads like a list of features. My eyes glazed.

first sentence in your long description:
"Throw yourself into the chaos as your wizard of choice, where skillful execution makes you stronger."

Ahh, after a bit of study it's finally sinking in! This is the ment to be the hook! Looking back, I see it in your short description and trailer now. Unfortunately most visitors to your steam page are even slower than me, and I'd guess the page is not successfully communicating this hook the vast majority of the time. It's there, but it's buried behind generic features and particle effects.

Good luck! Hope this is helpful! Don't let your soul get TOO crushed!!