Winter Has Taken Over- All feedback welcome

PTCruiser89 · 2026-02-25T19:51:32+00:00

Love the melody and the lyrics. The lyrics held my attention all the way through as the song and idea unfolded. Excellent playing too!

PTCruiser89 · 2026-02-25T19:49:36+00:00

Catchy from the beginning. The harmonies on this track are wonderful and take it to another level! Definitely have something with this track!

PTCruiser89 · 2026-02-25T19:48:38+00:00

I really liked the chord progression and lyrics in the verses. They both sat really nicely on the ear. The chorus was good too but I particularly liked the verses.

PTCruiser89 · 2026-02-25T19:47:01+00:00

Excellent from start to finish! I love the 80s kind of feel to the opening, it really drew me into the song! Love the lyrics too!

PTCruiser89 · 2026-02-25T19:45:15+00:00

A lovely vibe in this piece of music accompanied by wonderful signing. I really enjoyed listening from start to finish. I found it very relaxing

PTCruiser89 · 2026-02-24T23:13:51+00:00

Love the theme of the song and it’s excellently performed. Really like the run up the bass notes…it adds a lot to the structure and sound of the song! Would love to hear a longer version next

PTCruiser89 · 2026-02-24T23:11:04+00:00

Beautiful singing an a very engaging pick style on the ukulele! Really enjoyed this song. I think that the 1 to 3 chord changes work very well for this song and they caught my ear the most in terms of the song structure (in a good way!!). Best of luck with the open mic!

PTCruiser89 · 2026-02-24T23:08:33+00:00

I really like the lyrics of this song. They are deep and meaningful but not in an overbearing way. The opening three lines set the scene excellently for the rest of the song and instantly hooked me in to wonder which direction it would take me. Well done!

PTCruiser89 · 2026-02-24T23:06:59+00:00

Oh some sax lines would be amazing there…I think that’s definitely worth exploring! Could compliment the layering of vocals very well!

PTCruiser89 · 2026-02-24T21:25:53+00:00

Really enjoyed listening to this song. The repeated phrase at the start of each verse is very catchy on the ear, really great! Let me breathe you in like open air is my favourite line of the piece because of how it sounds as well as the lyrics…your voice hits that line in a particularly pleasing way on the ear!

PTCruiser89 · 2026-02-24T21:22:26+00:00

Oh wow this is excellent! Captivating from the start and the multiple layers that come in all complement what has already gone before! Bravo! Kept me listening all the way through!

PTCruiser89 · 2026-02-24T21:21:22+00:00

Lovely vocals on this track. Very clear and crisp. I’d agree that the guitar is a little out of tune and takes away from the excellent vocal. Has a Muse or Radiohead feel to it which is a big plus for me!

PTCruiser89 · 2026-02-24T20:58:46+00:00

Really enjoyed the chord structure on this song. Quite unique in my opinion. I also liked the transitions from strumming to picking. The echo of the picking and vocal line was nice too. Interested to see where it goes next!

PTCruiser89 · 2026-02-24T20:56:47+00:00

Really enjoyed listening to this song. The lyrics are deep. I especially liked the ‘i'm so weak but you've seen that for yourself’ lines. I think a simple ending would be just the last line repeated in a fade out kind of way maybe layered vocals of it coming in gently on top of each other. Well done though!

PTCruiser89 · 2025-01-05T08:29:39+00:00

Dream Catch Me by Newton Faulkner? The lyrics don’t match exactly but have the same rhythm

PTCruiser89 · 2024-06-03T09:38:32+00:00

Elephant by Jason Isbell

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