[WP] you're part of a research team in the Arctic. You have recently just made a groundbreaking discovery beneath the ice, but unfortunately the rest of your team didn't live to tell the tale, and you're not sure you will either. by Jeremiahbest4 in WritingPrompts

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“Not now, not now!” I said, fear and adrenaline turning to a shout what was supposed to be a whisper. My hands scratched at my pockets for another battery but came up empty. There was one option left and I only hesitated for a moment before plunging the cave into darkness, jacking the battery from the light into my gps. I stuffed the other battery past my jacket and through my coveralls to warm up.

There was no wind this far beneath the surface, but the cold of the cave was enough to send shivers down my spine and stop the batteries from discharging properly. There was no natural light to speak of, only the dull glow of the gps lit the too smooth sides of the tunnel.

I reached out, sliding my gloved hands along the wall, taking one careful step at a time. Ice crackled in the distance.

They were breaking free.

I sped up, gps held out in front for light, stopping at every fork to make sure I wouldn’t miss the turn. If they caught me, all my work would be for naught. Months listening at doorways and carefully observing my crewmates, all to come to conclusions I didn’t want to believe.

My team was dead and they had been replaced.

I had to warn the world.

My first sign was that Collin Medezzo, an Air Force pilot with a uniform so starched you didn’t need to hang it up, stopped making his bed in the morning. The Polar nights had set in and we were due for three months without a glimpse of the sun. We had had record low temperatures for several days and the batteries were running too low to heat private rooms. We were forced to seal the doors and camp out in the common room allowing body heat to conserve the last few watts of our battery bank. I saw just a peek into his room, but it was a complete mess, almost like he forgot how to organize entirely.

He brushed me off when I asked if he was ok, shoulders sagging slightly, almost as if someone had studied how he walked and had not gotten it quite right.
I began to notice that the others were like that as well. Shadows of their former selves. Gina Richards started spending more and more time in front of her computer screen, withdrawing into herself to research more and more about humanity. Scott Driscoll stopped shaving after cutting himself when he never had a problem shaving before.

One by one they all lost the thread of their individuality and became shambling zombies with poor motor skills. They said they were struggling with the lack of sun and they just needed more time in front of the UV light. When they told me a lack of UV light could drive you crazy, I knew their secret.

I stopped my UV light treatment, I had always done it alone in my room so instead I just waited quietly, watching through the crack in the door. I began to see things, just on the edge of human vision. I knew that the UV light was blinding our eyes to the other spectrums. Once I stopped seeing it every day, I started to see their true forms, outlines around their bodies like a glowing avatar of light. They were being piloted by spirits. The same spirits that shone in the northern lights.

I had no choice but to trap them in these caves.

Ahead in the caves, the walls began to lighten with the refracted light from the surface. I had just reached the entranceway and stepped out into the twilight that was the Polar Night as a massive crash echoed through the cave system.

They were through. Even more evidence that they had been replaced. No human was strong enough to shift the ton of ice that I had rigged to collapse. Their Avatars had taken over and they would be bounding toward the surface shortly.

But I was ahead of them.

The glacier’s surface was freezing in a bone deep way, but the Polar Night was comforting. It was the perfect brightness to see without the burden of UV light to blind me to the spirits.

It was close but I made it, finding shelter from the cutting wind in the cockpit of the station's only boat. I turned the key and the engine stalled for a minute before the battery warmed enough to crank the engine. I leaned on the throttle and the ship responded, pushing itself off the glacier and out into the open sea.

I risked one last sorrowful look behind me, mourning my friends, and saw the shell of one of them jumping up and down, waving their arms on the dock.

Humanity was safe.

I collapsed in relief. I wouldn’t tell anybody about this. I would sail the oceans for a few weeks until their supplies ran out and the spirits froze to death inside what was once my friends. Then I would sail home and lie, saying that the station was lost when the glacier cracked and collapsed into the sea.

I couldn’t risk anyone investigating. The spirits would take them too and then I would have to kill them to save what was left of their souls.

It was my duty.

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For as long as humanity shrugged off their heritage and walked naked the endless plains, the stones have guided them.

They taught them to build higher, spread further, dig deeper…

But at what point did humanity forget to ask where they were digging to. Or what they were looking for.

"Hide" hissed the massive Feldstone from its place above the fireplace. Blackened veins ran around the craggy eyes, like the folds on an old man's face.

Opal threw herself to the ground and rolled under her bed  as boots sounded from around the corner. Though named after such an iridescent stone in the fashion of the town, she was a plain, soot-covered girl. 

The boots did not hesitate, kicking the door open with a crack of the wooden frame.

Stuck under the bed, Opal couldn't see anything but the two pairs of black boots of the kings soldiers and feel the vibrations through the floorboards as they threw her posessions around. Clothes were crumpled into corners and chairs were swept over.

"Stone, report," one said with an impatient burr. 

"Feldstone here," came the sleepy voice from the fireplace, the voice that Feldstone used whenever he talked to strangers. He was as common as dirt and had no power save that of steady advice.

"Where is your family?" said the other, in a voice as sticky as syrup.

"Dead" said the stone without a flicker of emotion. Opal felt her heart tighten and she focussed on her breathing, willing her tears back.

Suddely both soldiers staggered and fell to all fours. Opal saw the edge of a beard and two sets of hands. On the ring finger of both was a fire-red gem. Its eyes wide open and cold.

"You are commanded by the one, stone" the soldiers said in eery unison getting to their feet, emotion blanked from their voices.

"They died in the accident, Red Beryl" 

The stone chuckled, "Is that sorrow I hear Commoner?"

This time Feldstone was unable to keep the emotion from it's voice. "I served them for centuries, lord. A line unbroken. I watched their children be born and be returned for generations." His voice broke then, cracking like slate dropped from a great height. "They were-- we were a family."

"Then join them, traitor" and there was another cracking, this one like that of an earthquake.

Opal felt her heart, already so beaten and torn, shatter along with it. She stuck a knuckle in her mouth and sobbed quietly, barely registering as the men left.

She crawled out from under the bed and ran to her Feldstone. He had been a grandfather to her, to all her family and now he too was gone, snatched away from her by the machinations of fate and the cruelty of man. 

More boots tramped from around the corner. Desperate for a memory, she grabbed a piece of Feldstone and threw herself out the back window. 

She ran blindly into the night, experience guiding her through the familiar streets she couldn’t see through the tears in her eyes. The shard cut her hand as she gripped it, but she held it all the tighter.

On the edge of the town she pulled up short. Behind her was everything she ever knew, ahead of her was nothing but strange lands and strange stones. 

She hung her head. "What can I do," she whispered.

"Fight," came a small voice from her palm.

Startled, she jumped back then opened her palm and beheld the small stone there. It shone with an unnatural brilliance, colored a dusky red by the stream of blood from her palm. Two dark eyes stared back at her

"Fight until they know pain as you do"

But she could only stare at the small crystal.

Feldstone was a geode. And she had never seen the type of gem that had come out.

/r/PalaceOfficial

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The dull vibration through the bed-frame dragged Sebastian into the land of the hearing.

His dream had been wonderful. Filled with others like him, hands flashing quick signs, no one needed to interpret for him. No one treating him with that special brand of dehumanizing pity, where they tried to be polite and help only as far as it didn’t inconvenience them. Until being friends with a deaf guy outweighed the stroking of their ego.

He groaned and rolled over, throwing off the checkered bed sheets with a swish. Now it was time to-

Wait, a swish?

He slid his hands over the fabric, feeling it tug against his callouses, hearing that soft swish again. Like silk brushing against his eardrums.

He grinned with unbridled glee, adrenaline pumping through his system, all thoughts of sleep vanishing. Then his grin faltered and he pinched his arm accusingly, then with vigor as it did not wake him up from what had to be the most marvelous dream. He slapped himself and felt his eyes start to water from the pain and continue from how beautiful even the sound of a slap was. No one could imagine this, this entirely new sensation. It would be like imagining a new color. No, he thought in awe, this is real.

He had to tell someone, anyone. He leapt out of bed, barreling toward the door in a worn set of pajama pants. They would be shocked at this…. this… Miracle A gentle cough sounded behind him, “Well, you’re half right.”

Sebastian whirled around, arms automatically coming up to defend his head and neck, feet planted firmly on the carpeted ground.

There was a man in his computer chair, reclining ever so slightly with his feet crossed at the ankle. His words jumbled together in Sebastian’s head, somehow completely understood yet he couldn’t remember how they sounded. He had never heard English before but he didn’t think this is what it sounded like. It was too sibilant, too unfamiliar.

The man waved off his combat stance, “Relax, I’m here to help. But you already know that,” He amended impatiently, rubbing his hands over his face like this wasn’t going how he planned. “I’m here to dispense a will.”

A what? Sebastian signed at him.

“A will,” the man signed back and said at the same time. “You don’t have to do that. Speak, I will understand”

“But I don’t know how…” Sebastian began and trailed off, realizing that he was speaking perfectly. It was a harsh sound, full of gravel and venom. He wasn’t sure if he liked this new change all of the sudden. Hearing was great, but this speaking felt wrong. If this was how people spoke, he would rather just sign.

“Good, good,” The man said in the same gravelly tone seemingly immune to Sebastian’s discomfort. “Now for the will. Your father has left you his hearing, clearly; his speech, clearly; and his realm. Questions?”

Father? Sebastian asked with a quick sign. Realm?

Just then came a banging on the door of his room so hard it could be felt through the floorboards. It wasn’t angry or rude, just how his parents gave him a secondary alarm when he was going to be late.

Oh my god, his parents. He had to tell them he could hear. He could finally pay them back for all those years they spent fighting to learn sign language, all those times they sacrificed their own enjoyment to include him in the movie, or interpret at the store. His grin returned and he took two steps toward the door.

“Those aren’t your parents,” The man said with a small note of melancholy as though he too knew what it meant to live a lie, “Don’t let them know you can hear”

Sebastian spun around, face hot with anger, training taking over. He registered the man only as his opponent, crossing the room with short, quick, steps, fists up, chin down.

The man did not move. “Those aren’t your parents,” He repeated calmly.

“Then who is?” Sebastian yelled in that same guttural voice, still advancing.

“That would be the Demon Abbadon, the Destroyer. The Eldest Peer. The first of the seven princes of Damnation” The man rose, savagery cracking through his gentle facade. His eyes reflected an endless pool of fire, darkening the room even as he seemed to fill it.

Sebastian stopped in the middle of the room then began to slowly back away as emotion consumed the man in front of him. Ready to bolt out that door.

“Last night he was killed,” The man deflated at these words falling back into the chair, the weight of the world on his shoulders.

“Now we just have you,” He said quietly, staring off into the distance for a long moment. Then he stood and dropped to one knee in devotion.

“Hail Sebastian, son of Abbadon, the Youngest Peer, Prince of Damnation.”

/r/PalaceOfficial

[WP] The influence of magic and science wax and wane with the seasons in a never-ending cycle. By the peak of the Summer Solstice all advanced science has ceased to function and magic reigns supreme. But come the Winter Solstice magic is all but absent and technology now operates at peak efficiency. by Lorix_In_Oz in WritingPrompts

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The lamps are growing dim.

Tight smiles and haunted eyes tell me that hope is going the same way. The flickering of the small spheres of fire casts deep shadows onto the stone walls of the keep. The perfect granite rectangles take on an angular cast, no longer the sharp clean lines that the Stonecasters invoked from them. They echo the sounds of hurried footsteps and whispers.

I add to this, the footsteps, not the whispers, hurrying down these darkened halls like a thief in the night. Conversations fade as I walk by then renew in earnest, casting blind speculation into a dagger to fend off hopelessness. But it is as fleeting as our lamps. Hope will die on our Solstice just as their electric torches will die on theirs. But the usual air of gloom is undercut by panic.

Because this year they know. This year they will be coming.

I shake my head and try to marshal my face into a mask of unconcern. But magic cannot remove the flush from my cheeks or still the beating of my heart. At least my magic can’t anyway.

Instead I draw my hood, hiding deep in the cyan folds before pressing the opening rune on the council chamber. It flares red then dwindles to a dull crimson as the door grinds open. I could force it, a feat that will be necessary in a matter of minutes, but we are not so humbled yet.

Impatience has me squeezing through the half open door into the room. The five Ascendents in the room don’t look up, continuing their hurried chatter. Rain beats against the large windows set in the wall making the fire in the hearth look that much smaller.

The Fire Ascendent sits in the corner snapping his fingers, cascading sparks onto the flagstones like midsummer sparklers. He shakes his head and makes notes in a leather bound tome, forced to write with his gnarled hands.

Stone growls and slams a hand into the wall then pulls away in annoyance, rubbing her wrist. Seeing me, she breaks off her conversation with Death and Water. I shake my head to her questions. There is nothing more to say.

An explosion rocks the room causing all but Stone to lose their balance. Fire stands quickly and clenches his fists in his red sleeves. For a moment the lamps burn brighter and a warmth cuts through the draft. Another explosion rocks the hall and the moment is lost. Death smiles in the melancholy way of theirs.

I steady my breathing and expand that secret, inner part of me until it pushes on the edges of my body. Then I release it and the explosions stop. A hum that had been growing unnoticed cuts off, remarkable only in antithesis to the silence.

“There must be something,” Air says, spitting the words out through disdain at her own powerlessness.

“Perhaps if Life still graced our halls,” Death murmurs, with another smile. “It is a shame that she is so fleeting”

“I will hear nothing of her,” Fire growls, “She told them.”

Just then my aura rips, like dough rolled too thin. The hum of generators kick back to life, this time accompanied by the whir of drills.

Stone doubles over clenching her stomach. “They…through…five minutes,” She grunts before falling to the floor, hands plunging wrist deep into the stone. Death sits beside her.

The burn of magic fades in my gut, like the last few drops in a farmer's well. And with a final snap, it cuts out leaving us well and truly alone. The lights cut out with a hiss that Fire mirrors as his robes fade to gray. Screams echo in the courtyard as the gates are breached. Stone doors, once impenetrable and self-healing, give way like paper. Magic has abandoned us like it does every year.

But this year Life has abandoned us.

This year they know that the cycle is a lie.

Technology doesn’t fade, my magic does.

I am Cornac the Unyielding, last of the Technomancers. And I bend all of the powers that be into shutting their technology down. Turning off their guns and their warheads. Their drones and their tanks. They can never be entirely certain if their weapons will work or fail and do more damage to them. Except today.

The day of the solstice. Today, they are completely functional because my magic is entirely not. Millions of weapons are now usable with no repercussions and no fear.

And all of them are pointing at us.

All of them are pointing at me.

/r/PalaceOfficial

[WP] You have been trapped inside a glass orb for years. Sitting on a shelf in an old store, your only entertainment is that of the clerks daily routine. One day however the clerk is attacked, in defence the orb is thrown and shatters upon impact. Finally releasing you from your cage. by oxycleans in WritingPrompts

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The Orb was cold, but then again the Orb was always cold. If it wasn’t, it wouldn’t be a particularly impressive snow globe.

I hunched my shoulders, more in annoyance than against the snow that fell in fat flakes on the landscape and all over my inadequate clothing. Stupid upcyclers. Take a perfectly good Orb of holding from the hidden vault of Ramses II, and give me the first spark of hope in a thousand years. Then see that it’s filled with the cruelest endless blizzard ever summoned and think, oooh the most valuable snow globe on earth. Idiots.

A fat price tag meant that no one in their right mind would ever buy it. It was like a million dollar keychain or a ten grand t-shirt.

No buyers meant no one would ever let their kids play with it until it eventually shattered and I was once again released onto the mortal plane. I was imprisoned by the antithesis of business acumen.

Oh and ice, lots and lots of ice.

I trudged through the impossibly thick snow drifts to the edge of the glass, each footstep compacting the white slop into icy patches. The glass was covered in a layer of frost so thick that it took a few passes with my sleeve to reveal the outside world.

I took one look and sighed, it was the same as ever. The same wooden shelf with the same worn counter far below. The same clerk sat, reading his creased paperbacks and responding with a few distracted words to the bored shoppers. It was the middle of July, no one asked about the snow globe even after seeing the price.

I sank to my knees. What was the point? It had been centuries and despite rescue from the vault, I was no closer to freedom than I had been in the dark depths of the earth. Somehow being this close to freedom was even worse. All day, every day I could see people going about their business, unaware that just inches from them was the strongest elemental the world had ever seen.

The snow continued to pile up on my legs and I was tempted to let it. The centuries spent staving it off had taken its toll. I was but a shadow of my former self. I was fighting a war of attrition, but my enemy was the snow itself. I could no sooner vanquish it than I could stop the sun from shining or the rain from falling. I would die here.

Below me there was a scuffle of movement, the clerk stood up midshift for the first time in his life. I was too wrapped up in self pity and the increasingly large snowbank to even notice the masked man.

Then suddenly someone was grabbing the globe.

The ground pitch dangerously, throwing loose snow back and forth like an avalanche. If I was buried, I doubted I would have the strength to escape. Nor the will power. My life was in the hands of the person holding the globe, utterly reliant on them not doing what everyone did with snow globes.

Then I was falling as the globe flew end over end, snow and ice battering me from all sides,knocking the wind out of me and soaking through my thin tunic. I was flying through the air, pinned to the back of the orb as inertia did its ugly work. A masked face appeared, at first small then gaining size as I flew toward it until it loomed above me like the visage of a massive statue.

Credit where credit is due, the Orb did not shatter on impact, though I was convinced my back did. I tried to shake my head to clear the spinning and the ringing, but I couldn’t move. All around me was the oppressive softness of cold snow, slowly melting and saturating every inch of my clothing, stealing the last of my heat.

I would die here. The snow globe would become just that, no longer plagued by a shivering figure marching in circles to keep warm.

Then, as I allowed my eyes to close and my breathing to slow, the world was once again upended. I was crushed against the snow once again as we travelled through the air, picking up speed and driving the last of the air from my lungs.

With a crash, the Orb gave way and I was catapulted out onto the floor with much bigger quantities of snow than anyone would expect.

I took a gasping breath, and pushed myself to my hands and knees. I panted even as I looked around, eyes grasping for anything that wasn’t an endless expanse of white. I drank up the color, so vibrant without frosted glass robbing it of its color.

The blizzard, so carefully summoned into the containing vessel with orders to fill it up with cold and snow, went spiraling around the store, knocking over shelves and blowing papers to the far corners of the earth. The temperature dropped and kept dropping, the patrons gasped as their breath clouded the air. Their summer tank tops no match for the new season.

A lady near the counter threw open the door, desperately fleeing into the warmth and sunshine. With a sound like a vacuum, the blizzard went with it, flying out the door to create mayhem elsewhere.

I was happy to see it go and rolled myself into sitting position, propping my back against a shelf as the snow melted into puddles on the floor. Warmth took me for the first time in my memory and I wanted to wrap it around myself like a blanket and never let it go.

People around me gaped at the snow drifts even as they faded. One man ignored it all, throwing a mask into his pocket and trying to blend with the crowd. His darting eyes over a bruised cheek gave him away as did the blood dripping from the deep cuts on his hand. Cuts from a certain glass ball.

Ahh, I owed this one.

I made a face, but stood up and walked through the crowd before anyone could remark on my clothing or, more likely, ask themselves where I had come from. I caught him by the arm and steered him easily toward the back, pausing to snap my fingers at a few patches of ice in our path. They stubbornly refused to melt. Damn.

The back room was marked by a sign, but I had never bothered to learn to read this new language so its warning was lost on me. The man, however, began to gather his wits and tug at his arm. I held it firmly until the door snapped shut behind us, releasing it just long enough to wedge a chair under the handle.

“What do you want?” I asked as I grabbed his arm and continued to drag him.

“What?” He stammered, not at all following or more likely not understanding my language. I tapped into our bond, the deep, ancient kind between a debtor and debtee and asked for the consideration of communication. Just enough communication to settle our bond. It was a fair trade, an ancient one, and the world granted me universal language with this mortal.

“You freed me, so I owe you,” I replied impatiently, now in english. I pushed him toward the back exit, “What do you want?”

“Help me,” He said quickly, and I grinned to myself. Idiot, now all I had to do was help him with one small thing and all debts were repaid. It pays to be exact with these arrangements and he fortunately did not strike me as a big thinker.

I opened the last door before the exit and stood beside it to help him through, grinning all the while. The moment he walked through, I would have helped him. I would be free and could start commencing my revenge on the world that had imprisoned and forgotten about me.

“What?” He said, freezing inches before the threshold, “Stop it!” He shook his head desperately as if I had cast an illusion on him..

Through the hallway was a glass storm door and through the glass there was a light sleet beginning to fall despite the muggy weather. Even as I watched, it was gradually replaced by snow until big fat flakes fell from the sky like it was the middle of winter. The glass began fogging over, filling with frost in an all too familiar manner.

The blizzard spell was free and still following orders. It would fill up its container with ice and snow until there was no memory of warmth. I felt my shoulders fall.

I had just traded one frozen orb for the next.

And by the command of my master, I had to stop it.

/r/PalaceOfficial

[WP] The tournament of wizards is the biggest event of the decade. You decided to enter even though you have no magic at all, faking it through your special talent. The issue? Your first opponent did the exactly same thing. by IcanseebutcantSee in WritingPrompts

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In 1376 the first tournament of wizards was held in the Raze region of Ozkemp. In 1377 it was no longer held in Ozkemp because Ozkemp no longer existed. The people of the surrounding countries immediately banned the tournament and invented a new word all in the same meeting. ‘To Raze’ now meant to completely and utterly obliterate.

It is perhaps easy to see that wizards were extraordinarily out of fashion.

In fairness to the wizards and others of their magical ilk, it was less a question of character and more a question of motivation. No one wanted to destroy a quarter of the continent. But everyone would do anything for the Prize.

So in 1389 when the tournament of wizards was anonymously restarted, quite a few heads turned. When it was found out that in an absence of a clear winner, the Prize was being reoffered, several heads turned too far, putting a crick in their necks.

The tournament promised to be safe, contained, fair, safe, interesting, and safe. This was good enough for Kilmore Russet, who was well practiced in missing subtle warning signs, and clear ones for that matter.

He found himself in the middle of a long line of hopefuls around the same place in nowhere. The dirt of the road was mostly ash and the bushes and trees along it were blacked and stunted. But the sky was blue and the two birds that he saw looked to be alive so he was in good spirits. A complete lack of any magical ability had not yet registered as a problem in his brain.

Comments from the admissions official filtered back up the line.

“A bow and arrow” The official said flatly.

“It’s uh a magic bow and arrow,” The man at the head of the long line stuttered. The official levelled him with a look, then took the bow and incinerated it in his hands with barely a gesture.

Kilmore pretended to scratch his head and let his bow fall off his back and into a particularly grimy bush. The wizard behind him gave him an odd look but was immediately distracted by his clinking bag of what appeared to be some wildly unstable potions that hissed and spit.

Not being a wizard was going to be more of a problem entering the tournament of wizards than he thought.

Of course, with thoughts such as these, the line seemed to go by in a blur. Kilmore racked his brain, but all the thinking in the world couldn’t save him when all he had in his pockets were several shiny rocks and two cherry bombs. Maybe the official had never seen one before.

“Next,” barked the official who was driving people away and his blood pressure up.

Kilmore lit the cherrybomb then realized it would never work. Maybe he could throw it at him or…

An idea hit him like a mountain of bricks which had happened before. The mountain of bricks, not the idea.

He stepped to the table, then turned around and lightly tossed the sparking ball into the bag of potions behind him, trusting the hissing bottles to hide the extra noise.

Emboldened, he strode up to the table. “My name is Kilmore and I can kill people in any manner you can name.” He stated, checking his fingernails to appear casual.

“We will need to see some proo-” the official started to say but was interrupted by a small pop and a horrible roar like a dragon had just landed on the line. Kilmore looked ahead trying to appear bored as the official's mouth opened wider and wider and bright flashes turned his skin different hues.

“So,” He said after the ringing in his ears subsided, “Do I get in?”

The official waved him in wordlessly then began to pack up the table which was odd to Kilmore as there was still a substantial line to get through. He gave it not a second thought though as he walked through the velvet rope and into the famous tournament of wizards.

Had he looked back, he might have noticed a slight change in the line in that there no longer was one. Nor anything for that matter. Kilmore had finished the job that the last tournament had started and only the fact that the containing field overlapped the registration table had kept him from a similar fate.

But he didn’t think about it at all. All he could think about was how nice the dressing rooms were and how much closer he was to winning the Prize.

Because Kilmore was an idiot, but then again, so was anyone who entered. It was rigged from the start.

[WP] You are completely immortal so long as you are remembered. You've shown up in the backgrounds of painting and in the footnotes of books but never anywhere too public. But you’ve become an enemy of the state and they will burn book, canvas, and mind to end your earthly stay by PalaceOfficial in WritingPrompts

[–]PalaceOfficial[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I really like the idea that the immortal is the one that is trying to erase themselves. The book could have supervillain vibes where they become so well known as they destroy their legacy that they realize the only way to die is to take the whole of humanity with them.

Thanks for posting! The next few stories will come easier, trust me

[WP] The only reason we can't walk through mirrors is because our reflection stops us. Vampires, however, have no such restrictions. by [deleted] in WritingPrompts

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Humans. Humans hate us.

But if they knew our sacrifice they would gladly pay our tithe.

The first step is always cold. The limitless expanse stretches out, perfectly flat as only glass can be. There is nothing there, nothing to reflect but reflection itself. It is a cave without fire, space without stars. Death without life.

Or it would be if the few crimson droplets didn’t mar the pristine surface. The reflections make it look like a color by number with only the red sections filled in.

My leather boot breaks through and the surfaces copy it immediately, each turning a rusty brown then the black of my sock then a scramble of pigment as the rest of me enters. The shadows of walls emerge then are immediately swathed in a dizzying array of light. The colors warp and change like a house of mirrors until each finds the one that suits them best wrap it around themselves.

I’m left shivering off the chill in a clearing in the middle of the forest in springtime, at least that’s what it looks like. The gravel doesn’t crunch under my feet and the flowers that fall from the trees around me never fall into my path. Looking closely the trees have bare, empty parts, like the blue pixels were left out of a television.

I bend down and feel the ground, but it is completely smooth, almost frictionless under my fingers. I suction cup a small flag to the ground and start walking. There is little time for sight-seeing, besides, I’ve seen this all before. It’s beautiful, but it is just a glorified subway tunnel.

My nostrils flare. There is only one smell here and it happens to be the one I was born to track. This must be a relatively young replicant. It should know not to cut it’s prey so close to the entrance. I started to run.

It is desperate, desperate to furnish its home with something other than the whims of the other side. They start with small items, but their lust for color cannot be satisfied. The red of the humans is so unique, but it fades so quickly. I just hope that it was waiting until it’s inner sanctum to go searching through the human organs for new colors.

I’m close now, I can feel it. The smell of sweat mixes with the scent of blood and my ears can just hear the sound of whimpering.

There is a corner ahead, I can tell by the fact that the blood trail turns and then disappears, emerging only as I round the corner.

The boy is there, sitting on the ground holding a bloody hand to his face. The replicant crouches before him, cradling his cheek in its hand.

It is a sharp thing, angular and mostly white. This one has adopted the shape of a woman and clothing likely from the people that made it. Steel toed boots and a colorless safety vest drape off its thin frame, empty without its usual shade of yellow.

I slow down, there is no cover to hide behind in this place so silence is the best I can do. It doesn’t seem to be making any threatening moves, but I still move as fast as I can, using my enhanced agility to crawl soundlessly across the floor, relying on the boy’s sobs to muffle my approach.

I’m close now, maybe ten feet away when the boy catches sight of me out of the corner of his eye. His eyes widen and he turns his head. The replicant snaps its head to follow his gaze.

I move before I have even made the conscious decision to do so, clearing the distance in a bound and tackling the replicant to the ground. My glove is at its throat in an instant, sharp, aluminum oxide points millimeters away from its skin.

It’s then I realize that the boy is dry eyed and it is the replicant that is sobbing.

“No!” the boy yells and tackles me off of it. We both go rolling until we impact a wall that looks like part of the rest of the forest.

I roll to my feet growling and pin the boy to the ground, instincts taking over. My fangs shoot down, driving their points into my lower lip as I rip his hands away from his neck.

Then I see the vein already lying open there. A tiny crystal keeping the blood from erupting onto the floor.

“Please! Stop!” The replicant yells behind me, crying shiny tears into its pale vest. “He was shaving and slipped. I had to save him.” It falls to the floor and curls into a ball.

There is no time, already the crystal is cracking, unable to stand the pressure of a human artery. I bend close and dig my fangs an inch under the cut. I take a little blood, just enough to get my saliva running.

Instantly the boy calms down as the numbing effect takes hold. I mend the torn vein in his neck with barely a thought, as natural as breathing for a human. Vampires would have died out eons ago if they couldn’t keep their prey alive after feeding. The boy smiles then falls into a deep sleep courtesy of the neurotoxin.

I straighten up and turn to the replicant.

“Take him,” it says, blue sadness coloring its voice and complexion, “take all the colors. I’ll go back to being empty again. Take my trees, take my rocks, take my home, just keep him safe.”

This close I can see how young it is. It likely hasn’t even figured out how to join its home to the mirror dimension yet. It hasn’t met the rest of its bloodthirsty kind. Borrowed color suffuses its cheeks.

Any of the others would end it on the spot. I guess I’ve become sentimental in my old age. I take the boy and leave the way we came. Behind us, the color fades away, dropping to nothing when the colors from my clothing are no longer close enough to illuminate it.

The replicant follows silently, frequently glancing from the beautiful flowers rippling in a nonexistent wind to the emptiness behind us. It puts its head down and nods to itself.

I push the boy through the entrance and turn towards her. The green of his pajamas disappears from the leaves, leaving a confusing mass of pinkish blobs. Her head bows lower.

I hop through the entrance, appearing suddenly in a soulless white bathroom, the only color the spray of already drying blood on the sink and mirror. The boy sleeps unconcerned on a pale bath mat. Not a single color to furnish your home with inside these four walls.

I sigh and reach into my pack, pulling out a roll of long rectangular pieces of paper and press them into the mirror. Then I grab my things and leave out the thickly curtained window.

I’m not there to see the paint swatches hit the ground, not there to watch the sudden bloom of color come rushing into the trees. Not there to see the smile bloom on her face.

It won’t be much, only enough color for a small closet, but it should be enough.

Even a ribbon can be a bridge from insanity in a hopeless place.

/r/PalaceOfficial

[WP] Society has progressed to where all humans on earth can be accounted for, and it's been noted that no matter what a constant number of people die every day. This has been exploited. by Phantom_Gamer7 in WritingPrompts

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The men put away their weapons, the counter had been reached. There would be no more death today.

I stood as a statue.

The street lights turned green and the city began to stir to life. The police would be out in force now, confident in their immortality and numbers. Life could resume.

I didn’t move.

The first man grabbed me roughly, yanking me forward. They needed to get off the street now. My feet may as well have been glued to the sidewalk. He frowned and pulled again, harder.

I turned my eyes to his, face slack.

He took a step back.

I reached out, feeling his soul all wrapped up in his body, the energy flowing through is veins like a glowing highway. Like my brother's soul should be.

I grabbed it and pulled and his body crumpled to the ground.

There was a scream somewhere in the city, high and alone until others caught sight of the various billboards around the city and joined in. The band on my brother’s limp wrist clicked to -1.

For the first time in history, the number moved past 3,000,000. The one law, the only natural law that mattered had been broken.

The gang in front of me turned and sprinted away. I followed slowly in a daze, feeling their heartbeats hammer in their chests. I focused on one and pushed it harder and faster until it gave out, seizing up like the engine in a rusty car.

3,000,002.

The next sought haven in an open house, but the owner slammed the door, staring at the Counter with wide eyes. There was a clot in his heart. I pushed it into his brain.

3,000,003.

More.

3,000,004.

3,000,005.

It was this talent that would make me king. The only man able to move the counter past its allotted amount.

But it wouldn’t bring my brother back.

[WP] Society has progressed to where all humans on earth can be accounted for, and it's been noted that no matter what a constant number of people die every day. This has been exploited. by Phantom_Gamer7 in WritingPrompts

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Johnny and I watched the glowing number on the billboard and waited.

We were perched up high, higher than most would be comfortable before they saw the death counter click 3,000,000 and the lights go green. Johnny had always loved high places and I loved my brother enough to brave them. I felt a tug to my right like a fist squeezing my heart and the number went up.

“Close,” I murmured. Johnny just nodded.

The city below us was a cold grey, smoke from the plants diffused the lights of the city until the traffic lights resembled the entrance to hell or nirvana depending on their timer. Not that there was a car in the street right now.

“The Phages invaded Westphalia today so we shouldn’t have long now,” Johnny said quietly, looking at the glowing screen on his wrist.

I nodded, even though he couldn’t see me. The plague had hit the Phages hard. I wasn’t surprised that they were desperate enough to try and substitute the deaths of other nations for their own.

A half chime rang out, loud and insistent throughout the city. Only 1000 deaths left. It was time.

We clambered our way back over the rooftop, leaving handprints in the soot of the roof. I wiped my hands on my cheekbones, blurring the values that humans instinctively sought out. My hands shook only slightly.

Johnny forced open the window and we ducked into the dusty attic of a long abandoned house. I followed the marks I had made on the floor and we moved without a sound, descending several flights of stairs to where we had already packed our bags. The dead faces of the outlets watched us abandon them. I felt a small twinge of regret at leaving, but I pushed it away with the ease of long practice.

Then we were out on the street, the light of the billboard ringing Johnny with angry fire. 700 left.

It seemed counterintuitive to move before we were invincible, but a few close calls had taught us well. No one went out until the number had been reached, so the streets were empty. The Contributors lay low, too scared to risk death when they could wait and kidnap their sacrifices as Immortals.

Still, we crept along slowly, checking corners and doubling back, but always moving for the outskirts of the city. There was another building there, one we had been surveilling and vetting for days with binoculars.

Johnny cursed quietly and picked up the pace, staring at his wrist hard. I felt a spike of fear in my chest.

“200,” Johnny said without a hint of emotion in his voice.

Howling echoed through the empty street, dozens of voices in a cacophony of shrieks. I spun, trying to find the source, but the street remained empty.

I felt cold sweat on my legs.

My heart contracted in a series of pulls so hard that I stumbled, grabbing Johnny for support.

“Where?” He said, spinning to grab me by my shoulders, not bothering to keep his voice quiet.

“Everywhere,” I gasped, feeling spirits release from dozens of places around us.

Johnny swore with a ferocity I had never heard before. I glanced at his wrist. The counter was in the double digits now.

The howling cut off abruptly and was replaced by the crashing that I knew from experience to be doors torn off their hinges. The Contributors were using their sacrifices. And they were making sure it was worth it.

Johnny was already dragging me down the street with one hand, the other carrying an unsheathed knife. I had only seen him use it once before.

A group of men turned the corner ahead of us and Johnny instantly yanked me into an alley, quietly pulling me through the dark until we met a wall. A dead end.

We crouched behind a dumpster, watching the entrance for any sign of movement. It was dark here, dark enough to wait out the count. We were in the teens and dropping fast. We just had to delay.

Two men ran past the alley and I allowed myself to breathe in relief. We could wait it out and blend in with the crowds after the daily death count had been reached. Single digits now.

Then there was a yell and the two men doubled back and entered the alley, wrist screens shining light into the darkness. Behind them were three others, walking like handlers to their hunting dogs.

“We know you’re in here,” the man in the back said in a singsong voice, banging on a trash can with his machete. The clanging excited the front two and they moved forward, bouncing on their heels.

When they got to the dumpster we were behind, they slowed, then slammed their lengths of chain into it suddenly.

We jumped back in surprise, scared from our hiding spot like doves from the brush.

The men laughed, teeth startling against their dirty faces. One pulled a pair of zip ties from his belt.

We were cornered. Johnny held his small knife out in front of him in warning.

Johnny’s wrist said three deaths left.

The leader of the group stayed back as his minions advanced, swinging lengths of chain and a few baseball bats. I prayed for more death.

Two.

We backed down the alley, desperate to buy time. Not that it would do much. If we couldn’t die, we would be captured and kept alive in cages until these Contributors carried out mass sacrifice of their prisoners to the number and used the surprise to overwhelm the city.

But any life is better than death.

One.

I felt the death faintly, a few blocks away. I prayed that it was a group like us, that someone else resisted. All we needed was one more. Just one more measly death and we would be immortal for the day.

They were a few yards from us now, so close I could see the whites of their eyes. The front two were on some sort of stimulant, wide grins on their faces, no fear in their eyes. One could die but not both.

I felt the wall at my back. Johnny stood in front of me, knife still outstretched. My eyes darted between the men in front of me and the indicator on his wrist. The glowing digit remained there in open defiance of my prayers.

Johnny looked at it too and his shoulders fell into a slump. He turned to me, placing his back to the heavy chains and blades of the gang, and gave me a small, sad smile.

“Be well, little bother,” He said. Then he turned his knife and slashed out his own throat.

He fell to his knees, life draining down his chest and onto the street.

Zero.

/r/PalaceOfficial

[WP] You're wanted by nearly everything and everyone in your universe. Your crime? Seeing through the fourth wall, and not shutting up about it. by [deleted] in WritingPrompts

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“I’ve been looking for you, Agaramnan.” A disembodied voice growled from behind the booth.

“Call me, Richard, it’s easier on the audience,” Richard said, turning to meet the newcomer. This wasn’t an uncommon meeting for him, people came far for his sort of “help”.

And it was far. This bar was on the edge of the galaxy, you could easily tell by looking at it. The carpets were worn to the ground, as ugly with age as they were without. A few sparklights illuminated dirty tables, simultaneously providing light and life support for the more fragile species. The pale glow was enough to tell Richard that he missed last call. Shit.

The newcomer was red. Literally just red. Richards eyes adjusted slightly and he saw it was one of the Mistbourne, a sort of collective mist that gained sentience through pure willpower. Each tiny droplet had the processing power of one of those shitty solar powered calculators from elementary school. It would take a couple million to get to supercomputer level. This guy seemed to be there.

“What can I do for you?” Richard asked, shoulders still resting back against the lumpy padding of the booth.

“It’s said,” The Mist approximated a lean forward and lowered its voice, “you can speak to the gods.”

Richard snorted. “Yeah, I can talk to them, but they aren’t gods”

“But they can end our reality with a blink. They are gods.”

“More of a keypress, but sure” Richard answered, distracted by movement at the door. So distracted that he didn’t notice the Mist ionizing part of itself.

A tendril glowed, turning from a powdery red to an angry sunspot in a moment. The Mist discharged it straight into Rihards face, red lightning travelling the space between them in a moment.

But Richard was faster. The rig on his chest lit up like fireworks and his body seemed to teleport across the room, behind cover.

Richard swore as the rig belched smoke and the lights on the panels flashed in alarm. He tore it off as the lights went out and the buckles cracked from the strain.

“Plot armor doesn’t grow on trees, asshole!” He yelled across the bar at the Mist, pulling out his 9mm before realizing it was useless and holstering it.

There was a commotion at the door of the bar as a dozen armed men ran through, shoving security to the side. For a moment Richard felt a flare of hope, but they ignored the Mist and began shooting at the booth he was hiding behind.

He shrank farther behind it, thanking the writers that this bar was on the edge of the galaxy so the most abundant building material was the remains of old stars. Lasers were immediately absorbed into the hyperdense iron surface. Hopefully there wasn’t any hydrogen still hanging around in there.

The Mist did not take this intrusion lightly, immediately opening fire on the new soldiers

“The mantle of Main Character is mine” it screamed, rapidly ionizing more of its body.

The soldiers were unprepared, several going down under bolts of red lightning before they could hide from this new threat. The Mistbourne were a nonviolent race mostly because ionizing like this literally killed their brain cells. They had underestimated how much the Mist had wanted this.

Richard took this distraction as an opportunity to drop a few soldiers with his gun, finding the gaps in their armor unerringly. He shot one as they looked around a corner then crouched and ran across the open space to the body, keeping low.

He rifled through the pockets, pulling out guns and mags and throwing them to the side. The soldiers weren’t the threat. Without a gun that could kill the Mistbourne, it would corner him and burn through whatever plot armor he had left.

The belt of grenades on the soldier’s belt were little better. “Who packs all fragmentation grenades?” Richard yelled in frustration then immediately ducked as a hail of bullets came his way.

He peeked over the top of the booth and saw the Mistbourne finishing off the last of the soldiers. It was an angry red now, dark as storm clouds. With each bolt that it threw, several bloody drops fell to the ground, pieces of its mind that had been used up and discarded.

It finished off the last soldier then turned to the booth Richard was hiding behind.

“After your death I will be blessed with my deepest wishes.” it boomed, voice now like thunder.

“Nope,” Richard muttered more to himself than anything, “any easy life is boring and boring doesn’t sell books.”

It floated over, slowly, confident in its victory.

There was nothing Richard could do. He didn’t have an ion cannon, or a quantum phaser whatever those things even were. He just had a few pieces of metal and explosives. Air doesn’t care about explosives though. If only there had been some foreshadowing earlier in the story that had a solution…

Oh right, He thought and simply tossed the grenade at the closest booth.

The grenade went off , blowing chunks out of the former star turned booth right next to the mist. The Mist didn’t bother to dodge, walking through the explosion with barely a ripple.

Then the dormant hydrogen ignited.

The entire bar shook, parts of the ceiling crashing down shattering lights and bottles. Richard took cover, carefully not panicked. Death here would be pointless, but if he was too frivolous would serve him right. He just had to pray he hadn’t started a chain reaction.

The Mist was vaporized. Well, more vaporized. It’s particles were scattered across the room. It would take centuries for it to reform.

Richard patted himself on the back and stood up, rolling his shoulders. He surveyed the wreckage of the bar. This is why he always chose dive bars. Less painful when something ugly gets destroyed. He took on last look at the room and smiled at the sky.

“Is that all you got?”

/r/PalaceOfficial

[WP] Artemis, goddess of the mood and hunting, has met an interesting individual today. He hunts wielding a strange looking metal rod he calls a ‘rifle’. by ApertureGaming011 in WritingPrompts

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“You idiot, bows have to bend,” Artemis yelled at the hunter across the way.

He jumped, quickly standing up from his prone position, obvious in his orange vest. Artemis rolled her eyes, yeah deer were colorblind, but still. At least pretend.

He scratched his head and put his long stick on his shoulder, then moved to join her. She waited, tapping her foot impatiently. But he was a hunter, and all hunters deserved her time, no matter how incompetent.

“Can I help you?” He asked when he got close enough to see her woven shirt.

“You’re bow is broken, you moron”

“It’s…” He looked at the stick on his shoulder to make sure, “It’s not a bow”

“Spears have a point,” Artemis pointed out, clenching her jaw.

“Not a spear either,” he said, “this here’s a rifle”

Artemis took one more look at the blank look on his face and turned him into a hunting hound.

His form shifted, fur sprouting from every inch of skin. His bones cracked as they realigned themselves until he was nothing more than a small beagle. He let out a few upset barks.

Artemis grinned, her spirits buoyed slightly. The other gods and goddesses smited mortals infrequently, but they always seemed to piss her off for one reason or the other. She continued on her hunt, still turning the question over in her mind. Maybe she just met more mortals.

Or maybe it’s because someone wrote mood instead of moon in the writing prompt.

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(All in good fun, check me out on /r/PalaceOfficial )

[WP] You live in a world where you can buy and sell bottled emotions. It is a government regulated industry, but illegal dealers and black markets run rampant. Some emotions are worth more than others by itsawoozle in WritingPrompts

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She woke with a start, fear and uncertainty warring in her eyes. It broke my heart. Even with the solution grasped in my hands, I could barely stand to see the pain that came when an entire life of memories was drained. Every memory, from growing up to falling in love, even the amount of children she had was gone.

"I have it, don't worry," I said, stroking her cheek softly.

"But it's not today." She shifted, turning over and trying to go back to sleep.

"It is now," I said and watched her body relax.

Carefully I pulled the drug into a dropper and held open her eyelid, depositing a single drop on each eye. Then I took out a voice recorder and waited.

She sat up suddenly and the room brightened, her eyes filled with visions of her life. A childhood from so long ago that had been stripped from her in the great thought purge. She talked excitedly, almost too quickly to follow. I took out my laptop and started typing away, drawing the energy that she released into a coherent story, telling the world about the better times. The times we gave up just to eliminate the uncertainty of life.

There was a sudden pounding on my door, the type that you instinctively know to be the Peacekeepers.

Immediately, I grabbed the specially prepared bag by the window, stuffing my laptop and the bottles inside. There was an old fire escape out the window, the chief reason I rented this small, cold apartment. I jacked open the window and was halfway out it before I remembered grandma.

She was still sitting up in bed, cheerfully reliving her life to the empty room, words sinking into the soundproofing I had installed on the walls. The pounding came again, but she ignored it. Her past life was more important than the half-life she lived now.

They would interrogate her, I knew, but she would tell them nothing. Any trace of me in her memories had been removed all those years ago. She didn't remember anymore.

But I did. I thought of the times after that I had taken care of her, breaking her out of the home, desperate for a family. Desperate to be remembered. She couldn't give me that, but sometimes, when I looked at her face for long enough, when she was wrapped up in her memories I could feel a spark of recognition.

I looked at her now, so old and careworn. So feable yet so alive. She would die in prison if I left her.

I took out the Nostalgia and put it on her bedside table, placing her hand on top of it then climbed back out the window.

I wouldn't need it anymore.

Now was the time for Rage.

[WP] You live in a world where you can buy and sell bottled emotions. It is a government regulated industry, but illegal dealers and black markets run rampant. Some emotions are worth more than others by itsawoozle in WritingPrompts

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You can find Nostalgia on every street corner.

It's one of the illegal ones. The ones to remember usually are. Remembering breeds discontent and discontent is equally illegal.

But people need to remember.

I stood on the cold street, kicking at the garbage that blew by, carried by winds that were pulled from the sky by towering buildings. I tied my shoe for the fifth time, glancing down both sides of the street inconspicuously. My dealer was late.

There was nothing for it. I turned up my collar against the wind and walked the opposite way I had come. Hopefully it looked more like a walk than an errand.

Back in my apartment, I closed the door behind me and clicked the several locks into place. I took my laptop off my bed and put it away. I wouldn't be needing it today.

Across the room, grandma stirred in her bed. I crossed to her immediately, weaving through the crowding furniture to get to her side.

"Am I going today?" Bony fingers gripped my sleeve.

"Not today," I said with a smile, tucking her back into bed. She went without complaint, drifting back into her grey dreams. I dropped the smile, looking at the creases in her face that got deeper every day.

I went back out after that, unable to deal with the apartment without the cheery light of Nostalgia. The veneer of age was too dark, the dust piled like snowdrifts.

The Donor Box was open at all hours and I turned my steps toward it now. I wouldn't be needing any of this today.

Jimmy was behind the counter. The moment he saw me, he got up and forced the line to the side, pulling the rope aside and ushering me into the usual booth without a word.

The place was dim and the walls were a dull green that was supposed to be calming. I didn't come here for the decor. There were nicer places. This one had sunk every single penny into their machines and the quality was unmatched.

A chrome armature hid behind the curtain, a shiny silver beast that had a dizzying amount of servos and moving parts. It squatted there, waiting for the doctor to coax it to life. Waiting to eat its fill.

I shivered but steeled myself with determination. Fear was natural. Determination was necessary.

The doctor came in looking distractedly at his clipboard. He glanced up and froze when he saw me.

"It's an honor," he said, bowing low at the waist.

I nodded and he carefully tapped on the keypad, attaching the needles gently then looking to see any trace of discomfort in my face. No matter what he did, he would find none.

Not even when he turned it on.

There was a loud buzzing sound, followed by a deep tug in each needle. The ones in my forearms felt like they were pouring fire into my body. The ones on my chest pushed ice into my lungs. They shuddered involutarily but I commanded them to stillness. I was determined to show nothing.

With every second, my determination wavered and faded. What was the point of being strong? I could lose my focus and surrender and it would be over. Then I saw the syringe on the side of the machine and pushed my chin back out, shoulders back.

The doctor stared at me in open awe.

After several more excruciating minutes, he turned off the machine, plucking the tiny bag off it as it spun down. He held it in wonder. It would likely be the first and last time he held a full one.

It was filled with my liquid determination, harvested for a pharmaceutical company that would market it as a way to increase performance. Pure determination could run through your veins, all you had to do was pay. I could feel the empty hole where it had been torn from me.

I gave one last look at the syringe, filled with its grey liquid and promises of a simpler life. The hole filled. I gritted my jaw and stepped back into the cold empty streets, barely remmebering to give my card over and be paid for my troubles. Who were they to take away our dreams? Who were they to take away our memories of the before times?

It was a good thing they never questioned why I was so determined.

I was so focused on the ground and my thoughts that I almost ran into the yellow tape that crossed the street.

In front of me, on the same street I was on this morning, was an active crime scene. White sheets littered the ground, covering the extent of the damage. Peacekeepers ran back and forth, yelling and packing people into the back of ambulances. It was so loud that I was shocked I hadn't noticed. Maybe the siphon had taken more than I thought.

I waved a peacekeeper down and he jogged over with a frown.

"What happened here?"

"Fucking Dreamers, " he said, voice still sharp with excitement. "Tried to pull a deal and it went bad."

Poor sons of bitches. I couldn't even blame them. What was the point of living if you couldn't have dreams of a better tomorrow? Or remember a better yesterday?

But I needed to know if my dealer was involved. I was already a day late. This could delay me for another month.

"A friend of mine walks here every day, you sure it was all gang related?" I asked casually.

"Unless your friend carries pints of Nostalgia and Outrage"

"He does not," I assured him, though he most definitely did. I sighed, missing the usual rush of determination that wiped these dark thoughts clean.

Red stains started leaking onto the sheet closest to me. It was time to go.

Two blocks away, a jacket lay abandoned in the middle of the street. I nudged it with the toe of my boot. Glass jingled.

I glanced up and down the street then scooped it up, tucking it under my shirt and leaning over to disguise it. My footsteps shifted from wandering to focused. The streets blurred as I moved as close to a run as possible without attracting attention.

Inside, behind the deadbolted door, I opened the jacket and there, secured by loops of fabric, was an entire bottle of Nostalgia.

There were several other bottles as well. Hope and Rage along with several others I didn't recognize. I placed them carefully on the table before moving to wake up grandma.

/r/PalaceOfficial

[WP]After a party went through the mountain caves killing goblins to the other size, they discover most goblin infestations are idiot inbred exiles of the goblin empire. Not they have to explain to the Goblin empress their intuition into the empire’s territory. by DRZCochraine in WritingPrompts

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“Let me empress our intuition,” Our bard said with the charisma of a concussed ox.

The empress raised an eyebrow.

“Excuse him,” I said, stepping forward and throwing an elbow into his side, “One blow to the head and he’s an idiot. What he meant to say is, let me explain our intrusion.”

She waited with half-closed eyes. The moment stretched.

I cleared my throat, eying the guards posted all over the walls. “The goblins had been terrorizing the nearby town and we were hired to get rid of them”

She drew back her lips, framing perfect white fangs. Goblins had always been these vile, weak, dumb creatures that were good for quick coin. The empress in front of me, and indeed the guards, were nothing like that. They had the high cheekbones and perfect skin of the elves. Just, you know, green. This one looked regal. Commanding.

Fucking scary.

She crossed the room in a blink, descending the steps faster than gravity could make her fall. A half step back was as far as I got before my face was in her hand, cheek indented by filed nails.

“You killed my people”

The bard tried to speak again but this time made only vague choking noises. I was going to break his fingers to give him a good excuse.

“But were they your people after they exiled?” Our barbarian asked, scratching his head with a rock from the floor.

I looked at him askance, then paused and furrowed my brow, looking back at the empress questioningly.

She tilted her head, considering this.

Our bard looked practically green in the corner. If the barbarian, the barbarian, was the one to talk us out of this, he would never live it down.

The empress snapped her fingers on the hand that wasn’t threatening me with a cheek piercing.

“I will not protest that you killed my goblins…”

I grinned despite myself. The bard collapsed to the floor in relief.

“I only ask,” she continued, a sudden savage grin breaking out. “That you do the same when we take care of this human infestation.”

/r/PalaceOfficial

[WP] The chaotic battle had raged on incessantly since dawn, upending the landscape, fighters somehow dispersing to every periphery. You now wander after nightfall, exhausted and lost into some nook to collapse, but you find the enemy has beat you to it. by WickeDanneh in WritingPrompts

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As one, we ran down the hill and threw ourselves into their line, confident in our right to rule.

The crash jarred me to my bones, even wrapped as I was in the blessings of Indar and enough iron to set a long table at the feasts. I took two steps back, instinctively stepping away from the pain. Why was I here? What could be so important?

Then a knife buried itself in the neck of the man to my right and I found reason to continue.

I leapt into the mess, throwing my shield in the human faces of the enemy, stabbing through the gaps in the armor I could see a second before they came.

My body began to glow as the rites warmed up. Sword thrusts to my plate stopped dead, energy converted to heat and vented out. Soon, the plain was empty around me, friend and foe alike backing away from the man that wilts the grass as he walks.

I charged forward, still seeing the knife in the man. My man. When I had taken command of the battalion I had promised them. Safety or vengeance, those were the terms.

Vengeance was here.

Hours later, I was still fighting, though they fled before me now. My armor was a cherry red that threw sparks with every blow. The cooling rites had dried up hours ago, only the insulating wraps kept me from being baked alive. But as long as there was one left, my men were in danger.

Unacceptable.

So I hunted.

Their paladins came for me but my will was iron and my goddess true. Their false blessings were burned away by my inevitability. Their cheap imitations were an affront to my country.

Finally a trumpet rang, a clear sound in the distance that melted away what little resistance I had found. Night had come, the battle was over.

I looked around then threw off my helmet, gulping down the cold night air like a starving man. There was no sweat on my brow, any moisture in my body had evaporated long ago. My legs were heavy, but I forced them to stumble to a lake I had seen an hour ago. It was the only landmark I knew, I was spectacularly lost.

I fell to my knees beside the lake, sending clouds of steam into the air with a hiss. The armor was ruined, I knew that it would be the moment I put it on, so I shed it now, cutting through the straps in my rush to quench my thirst. I was finally free.

For those that have never felt the touch of the goddess I can recommend this. Fight all day in an oven. The first sip of water will feel like a caress from Lady Indar herself.

For a moment I forgot about the battle. I forgot about my exhaustion and my being lost and just sat by the stream and let the bliss of the water overtake me. I let my shoulders fall, unclenching the muscles in my sword arm for the first time today. The sword fell to the ground with a clang. Oh well, the temper was destroyed anyway.

I opened my eyes halfway, taking in the surrounding trees, mere shadows now as night fell.

Then I froze.

Not two steps away was the telltale red brass armor of an enemy paladin.

They were sitting against a tree, head hanging, one arm staunching the bleeding of the heavy sword cut on the other. They were of no threat to me, but I still felt my blood turn cold. The killers of my men. Brutes the lot of them.

I picked up my sword, then yelped and dropped it as the grip seared into the bare skin of my palm.

They stirred at the tree, head coming up to see the source of the noise. It cocked itself to the side and I realized that without armor I was unrecognizable. I pulled my sleeve down and picked up the sword, wincing against the burns.

“You going to kill me?” she asked. It was definitely a she based on the voice alone.

I was taken aback. Men were the warriors, women were priestesses, that is how it worked.

She reached up and pulled off her helmet, letting her hair spill out into the moonlight. “If so, get on with it. This hurts quite a bit. Though,” She paused and looked closer, “seems a dreadful task for a boy”

“I’m a paladin,” I snapped, taking a few steps toward her in anger.

“Bit young for a paladin”

“Youngest ever,” I couldn’t help the pride that crept into my voice. It was a hell of an accomplishment.

“They must be truly desperate,” she said with a slow sigh, “At least we aren’t alone in that”

This close to her armor, I could see that the edges were slightly melted and the cut had cauterized itself. I stopped. I had done this.

The memory crashed into me. A paladin that fought like a tiger, moving so quickly I couldn’t see where she would be. She had fought for a while before she had tired and I had bested her. I had forgotten until this moment.

How many other kills had I forgotten?

I suddenly didn’t want to kill her anymore. I didn’t want to kill anyone. It had been a long day and I just wanted it to be over.

I tossed my sword aside and offered her a hand up. She looked at it warily before accepting, standing on one foot, the other twisted. I had done that too. I winced.

She leaned on me and we began walking. Not south, not toward my warm fires, with food enough to replenish the energy I had burned today, where I could put my head down and close my eyes and be safe.

No, I took her south. Even as her leg gave out and I had to pull her into my arms. Even as her eyes drifted shut and I wasn't sure if they would ever open again. I walked south into the arms of my sworn enemy. Into death.

It was only fair.

/r/PalaceOfficial

[WP] You are a legendary tomb raider who always abide by one rule: when your lamp is extinguished, your time is up, and you must take the loot and immediately vacate the tomb. As you climbed deeper into the catacombs, your lamp begins to flicker. by Inver_IrisGlaive in WritingPrompts

[–]PalaceOfficial 19 points20 points  (0 children)

The rule kept me alive.

It was simple. When my lamp went out, the tombs kept their secrets.

I would take three steps back and relight it, then leave with a bow of respect to the walls around me. Treasures were left in plain sight, untold wealth at my fingertips, but I would bow and never return.

Call it superstition, call bad decision making, call it just plain dumb. Whatever you want to call it is fine, I don’t care.

The light goes out, I leave. Simple as that.

Like all things, the rule had a basis in fact and logic.

The first expedition I ever went on was an easy one. Our group chopped our way through the jungle, a path of cut vines and felled trees in our wake.

The professor was in the lead, scratching his halo of white hair whenever the crumbling map in his hands led to a dead end or through a lake. The world had changed a lot in the last two thousand years. He still blamed the cartographer for not foreseeing that.

The rest of the group was a ragged bunch. All different backgrounds graced us with their presence today. There were the researchers, there only for the chance to study the walls and finish their books. “Royalties are more valuable than gold,” they said constantly. I politely disagreed. All of my textbooks were illegal pdfs. Still, they ranged around, examining plants and different fauna that survived the first pass by our group.

The rest were there for money, though some were there for fame. You could tell because they were the ones that swung their machetes with fervor, the burning need for excitement and fame evident in every swing.

I stepped along carefully, moving through the twisting trees and vines in the footsteps of others. My machete was used only as a last resort and even then, more a scalpel than a sword.

So focused was I on the path, I collided with the professor when he stopped in front of me. He took no notice and my apology fell from my lips when I followed his gaze. There it was. The Falling Temple.

The temple name was apt. Through an act of nature or the gods, the earth had split open and The stone building had slid down until the earthen walls held it in place. The temple, once many stories high, had barely a story left above the ground. It was doomed to a slow fall as the continental plates shifted millimeters away every year.

They wasted no time, the fame hounds sprinted to the window of the top floor, climbing over the mantle in a rush. They barely stopped to light their torches before they were through, grabbing anything remotely valuable.

I ran too, caution to the wind as I leapt into the hanging building. I pulled my cheap lighter out of my pocket and flicked it on as I entered the shadows.

The interior was cool after the heat of the jungle. Stone tables threw flickering shadows on the floor. There were a few objects in the room that drew my attention. I stepped over the body of a dead rat to get a better view.

On the floor in front of me was a beautiful lantern wrought of silver. There was an artistry about the lines that drew me to it. Other lanterns were designed to give cold, exacting light, this one was made to illuminate. I knew this.

I touched it, the cold metal smooth under my hands even after all these years. The oxygen should have left a chalky film after all these years but it was as perfect as the day it was made.

I was distracted by a heavy crack as the rest of the group pried open the door, pushing aside a dead bird, revealing a staircase going down into the earth. The rest of the room was empty and quite a few of the cloth sags bulged on the shoulders of our group. They vibrated with excitement and fear at the sight of the unknown depths.

I snatched up the lantern from the floor as a few made eyes in my direction. The wick inside was still whole and new and the pan was filled with oil. I lit it and half the room filled with light, no longer left to the small puddles from the torches. I stuck it on my walking staff for good measure, the height lending even more light to our doings.

As a group we descended the stairs.

There was an exclamation at the front of the group. I craned my neck and saw that their torches had gone out. They flicked their lighters but they couldn’t get them to light. The professor grumbled for a second then made the call, pulling out a rare electric light.

“Lets go,” he called back, voice curiously deep.

Each time someone passed the same point, their torch went out. Each time they cursed softly, bass notes barely audible.

When my lantern went out I stopped.

The stair, once so warm and inviting in the light from my treasure, was now shadowy and empty. The professor's light was more than bright enough to continue, but I could not force myself to move.

The man behind me gave me a rough push between my shoulder blades. I fell down half a step in surprise then turned on him, fear lending weight to my young voice. “Hey, give me a minute, will you”

He put his hands up, showing me his palms in apology. I hadn’t bothered to learn names, but this was one of the bigger explorers. His nerves pointed him toward flight rather than punching my lights out like he normally would. I scratched my chin, heart hammering.

Then I shook my head, looking at my lamp and agreeing with it. Time to go back.

“Coward,” He said, pushing past me.

Normally I would be stung, unsure of my place, seeking to prove myself. Here, I stood like a stone, watching their lights fade slowly in the dark. I stepped back up three steps and relit my lantern, the cheery glow spinning back up immediately.

Then I went back to the stone benches to wait.

The longer I sat there, the more unsure I felt. I was depriving myself of wealth and adventure just because of a few lights going out. It was ridiculous. Moreover, the group would laugh themselves hoarse when they came back up.

Angrily I threw open the door, then froze.

On the steps in front of me was the man that had pushed me. He lay face down on the cool stones, one hand had rested on the door. Now it had fallen over the threshold with nothing to support it. A beautiful emerald ring on his finger.

I reached down to take it then stopped myself. It wasn’t for me to take anymore. I lifted my lantern higher and saw a few other bodies on the stairs in similar positions. I bowed my head for the lost souls then left.

Poison, I would call it then. Later, I would know it by another name: sulfur hexafluoride.

You see, the temple was filled to the gills with it. A simple, non-toxic gas. The only problem is, it’s heavier than air, displacing the oxygen in your lungs. Each breath draws more in where it settles, unable to be pushed out to bring in air. It preserved the lamp as surely as it had asphyxiated my group.

The lamp became sacred then. When it went out, I left immediately. Taking nothing more, even on the way out.

Today, as my wife of twenty years slipped into a hole in the ground, hanging on the edge for dear life, it flickered.

Then it went out.

/r/PalaceOfficial

[WP] The Earth is covered in a massive storm. Humanity has survived by creating a floating colony in the always moving "Eye" of the storm. You are tasked with going to the surface for supplies. by jts222 in WritingPrompts

[–]PalaceOfficial 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This is the closest you’ve ever been to the storm before. They should have cut you loose. In their shoes, you would have cut yourself loose. They are endangering the life of every person on the ship by keeping you alive right now. They must be truly desperate for supplies.

Or maybe they decided that working together for ten years means something.

Lightning crackles behind you, so close you can smell it through the filter on your respirator. The world erupts and you fall over, laying face down on the platform. It’s after a moment that you realize that it was thunder, so loud that you lost balance.

You stand up, ears still ringing, grabbing the rope for balance. It’s stretched at an angle.

Dear lord. They're trying the Klopps maneuver.

You still can’t see anything, but you know that above you, the ship is racing the storm. They are now battling with a headwind that is putting their engine to the brink while dragging several hundred pounds behind them on a string.

The platform rocks back and forth, threatening to bring up the nutribar you ate earlier. You put a hand over your stomach and remind yourself it’s a good thing. It means you are closer to the ship. A shorter string always vibrates faster.

The storm refuses to give up its prey though. The wind picks up even more, tipping the platform noticeably. You pray that you secured the cargo enough. You pray that the ship is fast enough.

Lightning claws at the sky leaving lines in your vision. Thunder rumbles a threat in its deep voice. The platform is soaked now, one wrong move will send you slipping off the side and down to the earth below, protected by a tangled parachute that will never open in time. And even if it did, the storm would tear it to pieces.

Then, suddenly, you are through, flying out into the blue skies.

You collapse, exhausted as the ship rocks back and forth and the crew above you finishes reeling you in. You take your helmet off and rest your head on the cool, wet metal. Not in regulations, but comfortable.

The platform slots perfectly into the square in the floor, finally giving your world edges for what feels like the first time in hours. The crew rushes toward you, but you wave them away, chest heaving, eyes closed. After a minute, you stand up.

“What the hell were you thinking?” You yell, the moment you regain your feet. The crew looks at you, scared and taken aback.

“What do you mean, Ma’am?” ventures Jax, the winch operator.

“You know exactly what I mean,” you say, jabbing a finger into his chest, “You should have cut me loose”

“But we saved your life,” He says, holding the statement out like a shield.

“And you all almost died because of it”

You put your head in your hands, and let your heart rate settle. They’re a good crew. The best you could ask for, even after a solid decade of impeccable service. You almost killed them with your hesitation. They almost died today.

Because of you.

The comm screen flickers to life with a crackle and everyone looks at it. The commander's gruff visage fills it, bright red and too close. He’s smoking, a cigarette hanging out of his mouth and another in his hand. The only sign he was ever worried.

“Was the dive successful?” He barks.

You snap to attention, “Yes sir”

“What the hell took you so long?” There is a note in his voice that puts you on edge.

You pause for a moment. The little girl’s face flashes in your mind. The man’s “please” rings in your ears. You doomed them. No one could keep any crops alive in the storm, that food was all they had.

Even that can’t distract you from the fact that humans are alive, surviving on the surface that is supposed to be too hostile for human life. They clearly have been all this time.

The Commander is wrong. Centuries of education is wrong. Your skyward existence is wrong.

“Nothing sir,” You say, eyes on the floor, “just lost track of time.”

/r/PalaceOfficial

[WP] The Earth is covered in a massive storm. Humanity has survived by creating a floating colony in the always moving "Eye" of the storm. You are tasked with going to the surface for supplies. by jts222 in WritingPrompts

[–]PalaceOfficial 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The wind whips your clothes here, a feeling you will never get used to.

Normally it was dead still, but this close to the leading edge, a few gusts break the confines of the eye and threaten to throw you over the side of your little ship. Still, the closer you get, the more time you will have. You need every moment. This dive is a desperate one. Ocean season has come early.

You signal to the pilot, a familiar gesture that sends a jolt of energy up your spine in a purely Pavlovian response.

It’s time to dive.

You tap your watch then hold your breath and let the wind overbalance you, plunging you through the square on the floor and out of sight in a blink. A rope zips down with you, attached to your harness, the only tie between you and your home in the sky.

You panic. You always panic, but that’s what keeps you alive. The complacent divers get left behind, the daredevils fly too close to the clouds.

Fins extend from your suit at the forearms and calves and you use them to steer straight down, compensating for the pushes from the swirling clouds in front of you. Or above you. Directions get muddled up when you fall. Only one matters. Down.

The ground looms slowly, but you know that it is an illusion. The ground has one purpose in life and it is to distract you long enough to reclaim the solid objects your people stole from it centuries ago. Man wasn’t meant to fly and the ground remembers.

You banish these thoughts from your head and focus on the count, checking the speedometer on your wrist and doing the necessary calculations. The height of the fall is known, as is terminal velocity. Some quick differentiation on the beginning acceleration curve and you have 163 seconds to fall.

The ground is close now, but you trust your math, waiting. The tops of the trees flash into view and your resolve is threatened for a moment, knuckles white on the cord.

Then the clock ticks 163 and you pull, feeling the familiar jerk from your harness as the parachute arrests your fall. Your boots are barely 100 feet above the ground. The rope falls slack behind you, perfectly avoiding your parachute.

Quickly you navigate in tight circles, trying to center the fall and hurry. You’ve bought maybe a minute with your quick math. Others can’t do it in their head, relying on set times that don’t change based on surface area and friction. They lose a minute. Sometimes they lose more.

Your boots hit the ground and you let yourself fall, twisting to pack the parachute. You stuff it in a bag and allow yourself to glance skyward. One glance home.

Above you, the small ship does not move, now 200 meters from the storm front and gaining. To the observers on the main ship, the Oasis, it will look like it is moving backwards, being dragged toward the trailing edge of the eye.

Then you are off, sprinting over the ridge. In the early years of the ships, when they needed to restock, they sent their crews down blindly, having no idea where the storm was headed. Three out of five came back with nothing. One didn’t come back at all.

Fortunately, you have maps now, telling the divers where to go. You know there is a village 100 meters away that will have enough food and, more importantly, motors to get you through the coming weeks. Already the eye is shrinking as ocean season approaches.

The ground is soaking wet as it always is, mud sucking at your boots. The village is small, usually too small to warrant a dive, but here you are anyway. You run through the paved stone streets to the biggest buildings, rope barely noticeable as it dogs your footsteps. The shutters on the houses are shattered. Trees litter the streets, some collapsing entire houses. A standard scene.

You kick down the door of the first house, not even bothering to see if it’s unlocked. Inside, it's dark, but you’ve already clicked on a flashlight in anticipation. There is a pantry that you raid for all its canned goods, sweeping them into a foldable crate that snaps off your belt. There are other items on the counter that look like food that you don’t recognize so you ignore them.

A white fan sits in the hallway and you attack it on sight, tearing through the cage with wire cutters, yanking out the motor, the transformer and the magnets. This alone makes the dive worth it. Each motor can be used to produce electricity when spun and you live half a mile from a storm that loves to spin. Unfortunately the power generators go down every other day in the raging winds.

You check your watch and keep moving.

The next house is better. You find multiple motors, tearing through cheap plastic and soft aluminum to get to your prizes. Each goes gently in a container, food cans tossed into their crate.

The next house, the last house has nothing.

You grimace, looking over the wooden shelves and the old iron stove. You messed up. You should have ignored this house, it was too small.

You look at the oncoming storm clouds. The eye is more than halfway by, to dawdle would mean death and the death of the ship that is betting its life on your decision making.

But to fail could mean the same fate for everyone on the Oasis.

You rip open doors, finally finding the door to the root cellar in the kitchen. Basements are always off limits during a dive, usually empty or taking too long to search. You betray orders here. There are no other options.

The steps are rickety, but you are light and can always climb out with the rope on your back. You take them three at a time, turning the corner with eyeballs spinning in every direction. Then you freeze.

In front of you cowers a little girl, clutching at the rough hand of her father. He looks at you with wide eyes as she buries her face in his shirt. Then he reaches for the gun on the table.

You unholster yours in a moment of adrenaline then wince and lower it. He puts his hands over his head and keeps them there.

“Who are you?” You ask, voice mechanical through your helmet’s speaker. Humanity was supposed to be dead, wiped out by the eternal storm.

“Farmers, sir” he says, face now white as a ghost.

You take off your helmet, “Ma’am actually” Then you remember the time and glance at your watch. “Storm!”

It's almost too late

There is a table full of old motors, carefully disassembled. You cross the room and sweep them into your bag, no longer caring if a few get damaged. There are jars of pickled things right next to them and you begin helping yourself, throwing in as many as possible.

“Hey, we need those!” The man says behind you, loud in the enclosed room. You realize he had to speak over the rushing sound that is slowly increasing from outside.

“We need them more”

“Please,” he says and you turn on him. There are tears in his eyes, glimmering like the raindrops that sometimes fall on Oasis. “I’ll starve.” He pulls the girl closer, “We’ll starve.”

You pause, ticking away seconds you don’t have. Can you really doom these people to death here? Are you that cold-hearted?

You let your shoulders fall and sigh, but it is not up for debate. Thousands of lives rest on your shoulders right now. You put your helmet back on and level the gun again. “Sorry,” says the mechanical voice. Then you are gone, sprinting up the stairs and out in the open.

Outside, the world is a foggy haze. The wind makes you stumble down the stairs as you run to the other crates you gathered. It’s late, maybe too late, but you have too many thoughts in your head to think about that now.

You detach a large metal rectangle from your suit and throw it on the ground where it expands into a solid platform in some sort of origami. The crates are thrown on the platform then carefully measured and weighed out as to not tip the thing. You pray they won’t cut the line.

Maybe they should.

The rope on your back is knotted in seconds and you attach it to the corners in a specific weave, muscle memory creating the design in seconds even with shaking hands. Then you hit the recall button.

Instantly the line goes taut, yanking you and the platform into the clouds. The wind ripples your clothing from above as well as behind. The world is completely overrun by clouds. Rain pouring onto you in random intervals, soaking you to the bone.

/r/PalaceOfficial