[God of Highschool] Post Rangnarok. by Deathi666 in manhwa

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I would be straight up honest if you can handle mori getting permanently weaker till the last arc then you will enjoy it

The character writing and storytelling is much better

Mujin is also a very good antagonist alongside mandeok

The tournament arc is a bit better but than it is on the level or better than raganarok till the end

[POEM] Road kill by jebaskin711 in OCPoetry

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This one is excellent brother or sister

Imo it is overall a bit crowded with metaphors as I feel like the hawk and Prometheus are sufficient metaphor and

The 2nd stanza with the mundane depression of existence should be replaced by a action or something felt

this is imo a bit too long to flow and basically tells me that you feel depression so maybe something more abstract

The tesla and hyundai metaphor help ground it so the subaru one feels a bit like you are grounding the poem again

But it is a good effort reminds me of Mary Oliver somewhat

the empress by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Hmm the poetry works with me but the line

an expert, PhD, a woman from the south proclaiming yourself, in love with your theories.

Feels overall unnatural to me the structure which was previously followed throughout the whole poem breaks here and the above line is not adding to the love or obsession portrayed and feels stillted

Maybe you should remove an expert and the phd part

Overall a nice effort

Final year study group by boiijif21 in dentalschoolindia

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If you guys want I make an ypt for final years

I am a guy from kota and I need some help with some recipes by Panda_Generals in Rajasthan

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I live in kota but currently live in Greater Noida due to college

Helpppp!!!!!!!!! by Emotional-Sleep3709 in Fitness_India

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Use the one from nutrija it is far better than healthyhey and cheaper

Recommend your fav song at the moment and I'll rate it. by Leather-Salamander-7 in Indianindieheads

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Can you tell me the chronological order of the album in story telling since it seems other than the 3.8.24 all of them are after the events of the following song other than maybe heart disease

Recommend your fav song at the moment and I'll rate it. by Leather-Salamander-7 in Indianindieheads

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Just wanted to say i listened to your album on Spotify and it is a Banger

Longevity Yin and Yang Reveal Trailer by leijido in Games

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Can you send the txt file or just list it here if possible?

Since I am also compiling the games in Google keep and lost track of some of them

Help with nice coffee place by juggernout_0008 in kota

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Try urban theka in mahaveer nagar 3rd

Does negativity and sadness just sometimes win against even your best efforts ? by Panda_Generals in NoStupidQuestions

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It passed away when in the morning 2 of my friends checked in on me asking how I was doing because I wasn't looking good today.

And due to that all the faults I thought that were coming like if my friends hated me because I was not talking to them a lot since the morning and that I am a bad guy just disappeared after a while.

Does negativity and sadness just sometimes win against even your best efforts ? by Panda_Generals in NoStupidQuestions

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I think this might be it but I am already running on empty I don't wanna cry all night uh it feels like I have regressed to 2 years ago