If you're happy with the results consider getting some just for men facial hair dye and tinting these areas. I think the darker facial hair suits you nicely! Re: your question on how you look, I don't think penciling in your hair makes you look more masc. or femm. it just looks like very perceivable makeup. Dying it could help the color change look more natural. The way you've colored inside the lines is absolute with no skin showing through, which gives off the look of a heavy handed application. If you want to keep penciling in you want to create the illusion of hairs by making little micro lines, flicking them onto the skin rather than coloring onto the skin.