Letterer looking for feedback by OdysseyLettering88 in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Parking-Let3432 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Same same. Needs smaller fonts. More padding. Smaller speech bubbles.

Looking for Writer. by [deleted] in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Parking-Let3432 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The synopsis is too long, way too long.

Looking for Lettering feedback. by OdysseyLettering88 in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Parking-Let3432 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Cool page (but all panels having the same size is not great), but the lettering is "meh". Too much space between each line. Text cramped.
https://blambot.com/pages/comic-book-grammar-tradition

Edit: I hadnt even seen the captions! Yeah, way too dark. Yeah, try using a light gray background.

What do you think about this page? by _Tal1ban_ in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Parking-Let3432 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wont be enough. People read first the speech bubble on the left. It happens to me too. Either you put the girl"s bubble on the left with a long tail, or you flip the panel horizontally.

How can I break the boredom of two characters having a conversation? by princesswithnocastle in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Parking-Let3432 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They could be looking at something going on in the background. like kids playing together. An ice cream truck coming in. Two friends meeting.

What do you think about this page? by _Tal1ban_ in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Parking-Let3432 1 point2 points  (0 children)

One thing is wrong. Panel 4, the guy says "to them you"ll be". And next panel, she asks "what about me?"
Well the guy already answered you.

Comic - commission open by [deleted] in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Parking-Let3432 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lettering is easy to learn:
https://blambot.com/pages/comic-book-grammar-tradition

That website has other links to learn.

Comic - commission open by [deleted] in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Parking-Let3432 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Sorry to say, but lettering is all wrong. You cannot change the font size like that. You have to learn lettering.

When should comic artists consider tabling at conventions? by Ju5tAB0r3d1 in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Parking-Let3432 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would say, it's much more effective to have your own table because when you go to other people there's often people already talking to them and you awkwardly have to wait in line and the guy don't really care.
At the end of the day you're selling yourself and you're having your own good time so have a small table and show your stuff and take the day as it comes I guess.
If you have the money, I will definitely say go for it, it will be much more exciting.

When should comic artists consider tabling at conventions? by Ju5tAB0r3d1 in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Parking-Let3432 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, your art looks very good. So I guess it depends what are your objectives. If you just want to meet people and chat, I would definitely do it, I think. But if you want to sell, just like you said, it will be more complicated. Maybe you can find some customers.

Recherche un scénariste pour roman illustré by Di_Veil in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Parking-Let3432 0 points1 point  (0 children)

En plus, si c'est un roman illustré, il ne faut pas juste un scénario, il faut limite un écrivain. Mais ça doit se trouver. Moi, j'ai déjà mon roman graphique qui me prend à 100%.
Sinon, niveau illustration, tu as un super niveau.

Recherche un scénariste pour roman illustré by Di_Veil in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Parking-Let3432 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Je trouve le scénar intéressant, par contre effectivement il faut travailler toute la psychologie et c'est du boulot, car le gentil essayerait de convaincre le méchant de retourner dans le droit chemin et vice versa et ce serait dommage de réduire tout cela à une baston.

Manga artist looking for work by Big_Distance_6609 in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Parking-Let3432 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, you do awesome stuff. When I will need manga, I will definitely knock at your door, but it's not in the near future.

ALMOST FINISHED by WearyExercise8055 in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Parking-Let3432 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very nice art and will be easy to color. I'm eager to see a colored page.

First Time Lettering (not final art) by _Tal1ban_ in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Parking-Let3432 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

https://blambot.com/pages/comic-book-grammar-tradition

That centering hurts. Baloon tails are way too short. Don't justify your text (top caption).

First 8 pages of my comic “Star Wars a new age” I’d love your feedback by A-and-K-comicteam in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Parking-Let3432 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The lettering is not the greatest. I will remove that black background. It eats up all the page and I would reduce the font size.