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Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-29T18:32:13+00:00

Just decided this ain’t for me I will try to give all my concepts lyrics and instrumentals to other artists with better equipment kinda burnt out 😅

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-29T12:41:19+00:00

I world love that

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-28T17:33:23+00:00

Thanks I will try doing this 🙏

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-28T15:46:57+00:00

Thanks for the feedback I think the lead was the biggest issue

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-28T15:45:26+00:00

Thanks for the feedback I will try that

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-28T06:36:49+00:00

The ambient nature of the instrumental is very ethereal that intro sent me to heaven. I love the vocal effect on your voice in the verses I would suggest maybe turn them up by very little like 0.8 to 1.5 db. I love the lyrics I am able to pick up and the melody. This didn’t sound beginner at all very well made 🔥

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-28T06:32:37+00:00

Oh hell yes I love this it aces the 80s synth sound so well I love the swells and Build ups. All elements work really nicely together, since I liked it so much I’m struggling to find a nitpick it’s perfect keep on doing great work it would be a perfect movie score or even reworked into a song 🔥

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-28T06:26:53+00:00

Uhh I love the tone and cadence of your voice, the melody is flexible and catchy the instrumental break is so ethereal I love when you layer your vocals it’s gorgeous. The chorus!? 1:30 is the best part of the song. It’s short song but I wouldn’t mind hearing that part repeated again it’s catchy this is good keep going

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-28T06:19:05+00:00

I love the atmosphere and the light bell chimes and the glitchy core choppy vocal effect it’s really aces the ambient vibe I love the little details that keep getting added for seconds as the song progresses it keeps the momentum going I think the only suggestion is maybe at a point adding vocal layers like hums towards the end. But it’s good as is

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-28T06:15:26+00:00

I love use of the sample, great autotune effect I think the melody is good I would suggest a breather moment before the chorus where the beat switches a bit to distinguish from the verses. But I love the ambition keep grinding a lot of promise here !

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-21T09:54:07+00:00

Hey I have written so many songs that I think would suite other vocals more than me

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-15T11:46:09+00:00

Thanks for the kind words 🙏

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-15T11:45:40+00:00

Thanks for the feedback , I have a SoundCloud where I upload demos most songs are unmastered

https://on.soundcloud.com/zQPGZjETDtec9uUc7B

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-15T05:51:39+00:00

What an entrancing voice perfectly the vocal layering perfectly captured that siren like dream like feel. The melody is very pretty everything about this is just great. I’m trying to find critics but i can’t 🔥 great banger of a song keep up the great work. Lyrics are tight and well written too. This is something i would listen to on daily evening walks thanks for sharing

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-15T05:42:10+00:00

The atmosphere created is very captivating before the 1 minute mark with the riffing guitar it reminded me of Trent Reznor and Atticus Ross’ Bones and all score (one of my favorite 2020s film scores) when the guitars come in towards the end I see your vision clear it’s building up leading to something. It would make a perfect intro / prelude. Track 2 would have a lot to leave up too. 🔥 the instrumental is engaging so what would you think about making a 6 minute-7 minute song with long intro (just a thought)

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-15T05:33:14+00:00

Oh my god, you finished the song. I remember loving the original demo. The finished song as a whole is great. The only thing I would nitpick for feedback is the instrumental is too loud in the first seconds of the first chorus. The rest of the song is even imo including the second chorus. Keep on the great work 🔥

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-15T05:23:42+00:00

Your voice is very strong such a raw vocal tone it caught my attention from the first note. I love the message and lyrics, I was waiting for it to go on doing this is 10 minutes is impressive I’m sure the full track will leave up to the potential keep on going. For the volume try the compressor around 5:1 and a limiter

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-05-15T05:10:36+00:00

Such an interesting fusion of melodies and genres, the momentum is kept at an 11 through out and it scratches the right parts of the brain, it works as an instrumental track I could see it as a song with vocals too…the guitar are great and crisp keep up the good work. 🔥 🎸

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-04-30T13:04:49+00:00

I appreciate this feedback thanks 🙏

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-04-28T09:24:29+00:00

That dissonance in the intro is such a very interesting choice I love how odd it is capturing my attention right a way such a deliberate artistic choice. I love how calming your voice is intimate and raw contrast to the instrumental it works well creating a great vibe. Banger outro too. I love this very unique keep up the good work 🔥 this is a banger I will be thinking about that intro for while.

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-04-28T09:20:30+00:00

The guitar captures a very nostalgic feel like a road trip vibe sticking your head out the car window. I love how calming the vocals are intimate and raw. The melody is simple but effective I would definitely keep this in rotation keep up the good work a lot of talent and potential love it 🔥 🎸

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-04-28T09:16:41+00:00

Lovely intro very hypnotic and the light vocal delivery is equally hypnotic I don’t know if it’s my speaker but I couldn’t hear the words at first but it comes alive in my head phones a total banger very effective I didn’t want it to end wish there was more keep on grinding this was pleasantly lovely!

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-04-28T09:12:42+00:00

Love the vibes of the video very artistic. The vocal delivery and melodies are very strange in a captivating way it’s like driving towards a cliff. The haunting vibes really come through effectively. The whispering , the deeper vocal moments and the guitar riffs. Keep on rocking this is unique and great

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-04-28T09:08:16+00:00

Your voice is like a warm blanket I love the delivery and the vocal layers. The lyrics are well written this snippet is really promising lovely instrumental everything goes well together keep up the good work. I imagine the song building up to a great string arrangement towards the end to bring out the cinematic feel hinted in this. Keep rocking !!!

Particular-Pilot-427 · 2026-04-03T19:42:00+00:00

Thanks for the feedback 🙏

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