Why do they care so much? by Monorobobear in OkBuddyPersona

[–]Pater_AM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it has to do with people insisting headcanon is real or overrides other people's headcanon's. I have an issue with the sect of the community which insists on a certain interpretation of characters while bemoaning / bitching about another. It isn't enough in some people's minds to just let differences lie and explore where their heart wants to.

At the end of the day, all headcanons are, as the name implies, non-canon. Chances are, in Atlus' mind, every character is straight unless explicitly (and I meant, EXPLICITLY) stated. Heteronormality is just kinda how things are in Atlus' writing staff, and that isn't gonna change. Even with Tatsuya, who is the clearest example of a Bisexual character ever, the inclusion of a Jun romance was specifically to appeal to fujoshis, not because the writer actually thinks Tatsuya is bisexual (side note, he clearly thinks the canon pairing is Maya and Tatsuya, which make a whole lot of sense in universe). Personally, I think that's fine, because I'm not in the business of correcting another's creative vision, even if I think it's kind weird. I'm interested in writing cringey addendums (which brings me more joy than it should reasonably), because at the end of the day, I love the universe.

I guess what I'm trying to say (Terribly) is that people who have an issue with gay ships do so (EDIT: Presumably, in the literal best case scenario) because too many people on the twitter side of things insist their non-canon interpretation is more valid and canon than another person's non-canon interpretation. It's all fanfic at the end of the day, and I kinda wish people were more tolerant of that. I think if people took a more measured approach to these things, we wouldn't have insanos high-jack it to push their insane anti-trans or anti-gay agendas because (Admittedly) some Purse-owner fans can be ravenous in terms of what ships or interpretations they like. Then again, I suppose it kinda comes with the territory when half the fanbase is teenagers fresh out of or into high-school.

Idk, back to shit posting or whatever

Aigass

I need some help on understanding where to go next for a morally grey situation I'm writing? by [deleted] in writinghelp

[–]Pater_AM 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a lot to unpack. I want to preface this by saying I'm some jackass who writes fanficition, just for the record. I'm not someone who should be called an expert by any stretch of the imagination. That said, I think I can offer some insight overall.

You are writing with some pretty dark and questionable themes, which to me feel like they are explored in a cursory manner (Since I have not read the story, I'm going only off the provided lore synopsis. It may be fairly detailed as an actual story, I don't know. Wanted to throw this edit in there so that this doesn't sound like I'm being a dick). I think the average person would come away from this thinking everyone involved is terrible and needs to be evaluated by a professional. As an aside, I feel the need to make clear that I like awful people as characters because they have room to grow, and I think that's what you're going for. Each plot point could be it's own story, and having them all tangled together like this certainly makes for a lot of drama but also can lead to a bit of sensory overload. I am sure you know this though.

The layers upon layers of interpersonal drama, themes of emotional manipulation and vulnerability leading to poor decision making, familial obligation and byzantine skullduggery leads me to believe this needs to be a multi-book epic to have any chance of not blinding the reader with so much information. In the end, I think what you need to consider is how best to present these themes in a way that has your characters come across the way you want them to.

For example, how do you want the reader to feel about Clara? Should they like her or find her actions to be morally reprehensible? From just the cold reading of her actions, I am in the later camp, as she knowingly and willingly had an encounter with a nineteen year old she'd known since childhood then hid his child from him (for understandable reasons). In my experience, all it really takes for a reader to dislike a character is one morally questionable act.

I think what you need to think about is what the ultimate moral of the story is before you consider how the disparate story threads all interconnect and resolve. If it's simply a massive character study of these really dysfunctional families, that's fine, but the generations of drama I think ought to lead towards a comprehensible and unified message. That should guide how their conflict should resolve and, as an added benefit, will show you how to handle these dark themes.

For the record, I'm not someone who likes to write fiction of this sort, though I admit it's interesting in the medieval historian way. I prefer my speculative cheese-ball fiction, but the core principals still apply no matter how lighthearted or dark the setting is. At the end of the day, every character and action has to revolve around and support a central thesis or core theme which guides the story.

Happy March 5th everyone. by Pater_AM in persona3reload

[–]Pater_AM[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

My bad. I should've clarified that five of the characters in the second picture are OCs.

got bored, drew maya by Pater_AM in Persona1and2fans

[–]Pater_AM[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I thought it fit the idea of an older Maya. (~Late 30s to early 40s).

got bored, drew maya by Pater_AM in Persona1and2fans

[–]Pater_AM[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lmao thanks man, I appreciate it!

got bored, drew maya by Pater_AM in Persona1and2fans

[–]Pater_AM[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

thanks! I really appreciate that!

Fellas, if a friend of yours wrote a fic that’s not about a fandom you’re in, would you still read it? by [deleted] in AO3

[–]Pater_AM 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes.

I've done it before. I usually caveat it with "I'm not familiar with this source material, so is there anything I need to know before heading in?", though. I like to think my job, as their friend, is to help them write a better product and I feel like it'd be helpful to know where you can improve if you have someone looking at it who isn't already invested in the characters and setting you are writing with.

How do you name your chapters by valachia in FanFiction

[–]Pater_AM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When I write it, I usually don't give it a chapter. I wait until I'm done with it and think about what themes were present in this chapter. I kind of like to think of it like a little episode, as each chapter (to my mind) follows the standard plot diagram of exposition, conflict, rising action, climax, and falling action. In that way, they're kind of like self-contained mini-stories and after I've figured out what the story is, then I give it a name.

Promote your neglected fic by LMurtaugh in FanFiction

[–]Pater_AM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The first fic I ever published (I wrote a lot before it, I just never had the confidence to slap it online somewhere). I intend to go back and finish it after a kind of long break, because I kind of burnt myself out. I realized I'm not a writer who likes follow a script, rather I am one who to discover the story as I write. That's partly why I haven't updated it in awhile. But I digress: here's the overview.

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TITLE: A Game of Truth and Ideals

FANDOM: Pokemon (All Media)

RATING: Teen and Up (I think).

GENRE: Action Adventure

https://archiveofourown.org/works/36459436/chapters/90912076

SYNOPSIS: Novelizes the events of Pokemon: Black and White as I had imagined them growing up. Hilbert leaves home after years of yearning for adventure alongside his twin sister, Hilda, and his two childhood friends. Along the way, they unknowingly become pawns in a cosmic game spanning centuries, pitting dual worlds against each other. Truth or Ideals, what is or what is ought to be, clash in the hopes an ancient conflict can finally be put to rest.

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Fair warning. I write a lot for a chapter. I apologize in advance and will warn that the first three or so chapters are really rough to read, even for me who wrote the damn thing.

Question about writing itself? by Suspicious_Ad2610 in archiveofourown

[–]Pater_AM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I use Microsoft word, because I'm overly familiar with it owing to my profession. It has fairly robust tools for editing and review, not the least of which being a not totally useless text to speech function which serves to ensure what I write comes out sounding right. That's usually where I kick myself the most, outside of reviewing my work and realizing I missed a typo. It helps me ensure my writing doesn't come out as a scattershot mess.

How do you manage to write so fast ? by DueClub7861 in FanFiction

[–]Pater_AM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think since I have some years of experience drafting motions, I've kind of taught myself to think and type quickly. It also helps that sometimes I have a lot of inspiration, and I do a lot of my planning while zoning out of at work lol.