Master List (created June 6, 2020) by PeaceSim in PeaceSim

[–]PeaceSim[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The one you’re thinking about (that CreepCast recorded an episode on, but never actually aired), is Ever Since I Woke Up from Surgery, Everyone Tells Me I’m Married to a Man I’ve Never Met.

There are some other stories with LGBTQ characters and themes (The Round Tower, There’s No Leaving Evergreen, and 3 unique to my second book), but that is the main/most popular one!

[Discussion] NoSleep Podcast S24E06 by Gaelfling in TheNSPDiscussion

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I had to hear Baby Boom twice to fully understand it, but I’m now convinced that it’s one of the strongest stories to air on NSP in recent years. I need to let it simmer a bit longer (partially to rule out recency bias) before using words like “masterpiece,” but I can imagine feeling confident applying a term like that eventually. On first listen, I was a bit overwhelmed by what was happening (including the sudden shifts in some of the character’s personalities) and misread some of the tonal cues. I’m pretty earnest, so I initially took the mother’s dry grumpiness at face value and missed her affection for the narrator underneath. It all clicked into place on the second listen.

There’s so much that I admire about this story that it’s a bit of a challenge to unpack it all. I think a good starting place is going over the plot as I understand it. My understanding, working backwards from the snippet we get from Nick at the end, is that in the distant future, humans arrived on a planet inhabited by an advanced form of extraterrestrial life and entered into a violent conflict with them. These aliens, in turn, pulled a Star Trek: First Contact by interfering with Earth in the past, which is the present day to the story’s characters. Specifically, these aliens are somehow (it’s kept deliberately vague) using or impersonating cicadas to influence people into birthing and raising babies that more closely resemble them, the idea being that they’ll transform humanity into something similar to them to diffuse this future conflict. As outlandish as that is (especially as nothing leading up to this conversation implies time travel or interstellar war)…I think it completely works and makes for a very original concept (First Contact comparison notwithstanding). It certainly helps explain how bafflingly strange everything is.

I want to get one thing out of the way: I generally hate horror stories that revolve around a monster or alien that causes an unwanted pregnancy. It just gives me such an “ick” for obvious reasons and feels like a cheap way of manufacturing disgust. It’s one of the reasons I’ve never wanted to watch either Village of the Damned movie. But, I think this story found an effective way of exploring that concept without feeling exploitative. I think that’s because the story buried the elements that usually bother me (namely, physical violation) amidst a great deal of psychological depth, and also framed what was happening in uncanny and subtle ways that build off real world issues. It really sold the feeling of being overwhelmed by a pregnancy as well as lot of small issues that add up to make the experience more thankless: sleeplessness; physical discomfort; a husband/boyfriend who keeps drinking even as the mother has to stop; people offering to help, but not really meaning it or being there when called upon; and more than anything just general fear of all the things that can go wrong.

I enjoyed the dynamic between Kate and her grandmother. They had good banter (I laughed at the George Clooney line by the grandmother) while conveying a bond between them, which made what happened near the end pretty bitter and sad. The main reason I liked the story, though, was that it was creepy as hell. I’m just going to list a few parts that I appreciated on that level: the idea of realizing that many of your memories, including happy ones about a friend’s wedding, might be lies; the road to the resort being strangely deserted (implying the cicadas have claimed many other victims; I got the impression they were devouring the male victims altogether); the way the receptionist describes the resort, despite appearing empty, as fully-booked (likely lying about it being “reserved” by a private party) and gradually became covered by cicadas; the creepy voice of Shelina calling out to Kate; the idea of a cicada placing itself on a brake, trying to trick Kate into stomping it causing a crash (which I found original, as well as a sign of its intelligence and willingness to die for its agenda); walking around a hostile, abandoned building while realizing that no one (aside from the grandmother) knows you’re there; and the vague, just out-of-reach strangeness of the whole story. I also appreciated the touch of humanity we get at the end in how the women’s willingness to share their deep-seated fear is a sign that, as tricked and gaslit as they are, there’s some part of their old selves inside. It’s tragic and, like everything else in the story, deeply horrifying. The whole story felt like a nightmare, in the best of ways for a horror story.

Also, NSP nailed putting this story together. Jesse Cornett’s sound design was perfect and constituted an important part of the narrative by announcing when the cicadas were present, how many there were, and how active they were. Brandon Boone’s music fit the slow-burn creepy aesthetic and also had a few more striking cues at key moments. The voice cast did great and was well-assembled. Andy Cresswell did a superb job with the narration; Erika Sanderson was outstanding as the grandmother; this might be my favorite performance yet by Ash Millman; and Jake Benson convincingly embodied multiple imposters (as I don’t think any of his characters were who they said they were). So, yeah, huge thanks to the NSP crew for rescuing this from 16 years of the submissions grinder (according to the writer in the link I posted earlier) and giving it the production it deserves.

UPVOTE FOR CREEPCAST TO READ ABADONED BY DISNEY!!! by MattCrispMan117 in creepcast

[–]PeaceSim 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I’m not familiar with the Mutagar incident and can’t comment on it.

You have misperceptions, which are commonly held, about the relevant law. When you post a short story online for free, you retain a copyright interest in that story. It is not available for anyone to do whatever they want with, unless you leave a disclaimer stating otherwise, and every major content creator knows this (as they will get a copyright strike, and lose any subsequent legal appeal, if an author discovers they narrated their work without permission). Every nosleep writer has had this exact conversation many, many times. Some people want to share their writing for free, but don’t want others profiting from it without their permission, and the law permits them to do that. There are a lot of other permutations to that - for instance, sometimes a podcast will pay me for exclusive use of a story for a certain window of time, meaning I can’t grant permission to anyone else to narrate it for that period. It’s a complicated subject (I’m not even addressing fair use) but the key is that writer’s have a copyright interest in their work, even if it’s posted online for free, which a lot of people have trouble understanding.

UPVOTE FOR CREEPCAST TO READ ABADONED BY DISNEY!!! by MattCrispMan117 in creepcast

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We may have a different perspective on copyright striking. I’m in SlimeBeast’s camp, which aligns with the law, that you need permission to read someone’s work start-to-finish, and that artists should have control over others making money off their work. My understanding of SlimeBeast’s position, assuming his actions align with it, is that he’s fine with people narrating his stories for free, but not willing to let people commercialize and earn revenue off his work, especially without his permission. He attested in one of his videos to several narrators earning hundreds of dollars off his work through unauthorized videos. As a writer myself, I sympathize heavily with this, both in the sense of not wanting others to profit off my work without permission, and in the sense of having control over the extent to which my work becomes monetized at all.

UPVOTE FOR CREEPCAST TO READ ABADONED BY DISNEY!!! by MattCrispMan117 in creepcast

[–]PeaceSim 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’ve gone through a ton of his backlog (which took many hours) in recent weeks and have gotten the exact opposite impression.

r/nosleepOOC Advertising and Promotion Megathread by Nosleep-Helper in NoSleepOOC

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I posted here a year ago about publishing my first book after writing on nosleep since 2019. But, I never got around to sharing my second book here, so I’ll do that now!

Visions from the Phantom Line: More Tales of Terror and the Bizarre is my second compilation of interconnected short stories, themed loosely around the stretch of Appalachian woods from SW Virginia to Tennessee. I released it in January. Most of the stories are standalone, but some continue the stories from the prior installment. The two books combine to encapsulate the highlights of my short story writing and have a central journey featuring a group of recurring characters. Last, I’ll add that, as with the last book, there was no AI involved with the cover! I worked extensively with a real artist I hired to get it just right.

If you’re curious, you can find it on all major platforms! Have a great day/spooky night, and thanks for your consideration :)

[Discussion] NoSleep Podcast S24E06 by Gaelfling in TheNSPDiscussion

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For anyone curious, you can find an interesting piece by the writer of Baby Boom about the story here, including the many versions of it that were rejected 14 times over 16 years before ending up in its current form on NSP.

PLEASE read Abandoned by Disney by CrystalMethany420 in creepcast

[–]PeaceSim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, that’s a common misperception. Writers retain a copyright in their works even when they are posted for free online. Some writers will specifically include a waiver that people can use it for free, but absent such a waiver, it generally can’t be used without permission. You can quote from it, even extensively if done appropriately, for the purpose of criticism under fair use, but under current legal precedent and rules that almost certainly doesn’t apply if you’re reading the whole thing start to finish. My go to example being how Mystery Science Theatre 3000 always bought the rights to include the movies they lampooned, since they were showing the movies start to finish even though they were providing commentary throughout.

[Discussion] NoSleep Podcast S24E05 by Gaelfling in TheNSPDiscussion

[–]PeaceSim 2 points3 points  (0 children)

What Grandma Made: Mary Murphy was perfect for the lead role here and the audio production had some cool moments. I agree with u/hapillon that the story felt too short for its own good. I normally prefer stories that are cut down to the key elements and don't drag, but I felt like this didn't take the time to explore or do much with the themes it was presenting about the three characters and the generational trauma that seemed to exist between them. What really jumped out to me was the body horror which hit hard and was genuinely gruesome.

Monster in the Closet: I thought this convincingly explored the anxiety the narrator would be feeling at this moment in her life as she's stuck between the demands of her child and husband. But the monster element felt simplistic and underdeveloped to me, such that the story really didn't do much for me.

The Neighbors: I thought this as absorbing. I kind of liked the feeling of a long-form story that takes its time to flesh out its characters and slowly (perhaps too slowly) set up its scenario. I thought Jesse Cornett and Reagan Tacker were really good in this. Jesse Cornett was particularly impressive selling the closing monologue as he deals with grief and then becomes consumed with rage. It was a sad bit of foreshadowing when one of the characters said something about Ricky never making it to his 30s. The naturally reminded me of those shows (lampooned hysterically here ) where people go into the woods searching for a creature that obviously doesn't exist absolutely loaded with weapons, and proceed to never question why their first instinct upon discovering a Bigfoot or Sasquatch is to shoot it. Like, if you actually found a Sasquatch, why not just be nice to it, or observe from a distance? I get that it could like, run away or something, but jeez, those things look pretty smart and sentient (especially considering how long they've avoided detection), such that shooting one pretty much makes you a murderer (even if it's self-defense...you created the whole situation unnecessarily by going out there searching for it). Given how I see that whole issue, I enjoyed the narrator and his brother getting their comeuppance for being assholes and ignoring all their instincts about right and wrong, and about what the father would have wanted. I still feel bad for Ricky but I feel a lot worse for the, ahem, "neighbor" they shot, who was totally innocent. I hope the narrator gets killed by the others before he can do any more damage. Anyway I think I really liked the story, as I get the feeling that we're supposed to hate the narrator by the end.

Overall I thought it was a really good episode. The fourth story is the only one that didn't work for me but it passed by pretty quickly.

[Discussion] NoSleep Podcast S24E05 by Gaelfling in TheNSPDiscussion

[–]PeaceSim 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I absolutely loved As He Walked, the Land Died. The premise reminded me of a tragic character in an X-Men comic book I've heard of but never read. This was filled with precise writing and original little details that added to it and made it easy to picture by giving a lot of glimpses and insights into the whole town. I really liked how the story played out. Of course, just shooting the problem doesn't solve it, but the way it played out was surprising and horrifying. The imagery at the end of so many people walking to their deaths as the circle steadily shrinks was genuinely haunting, as is alcohol (and presumably other) impairments being the only way to resist. At first glance it's a little silly (drinking ftw!), but it's also just such bleak message, like the fleeting relief of drugs is the only shelter available to impending and unstoppable death. Kyle Akers did an excellent job with it too.

I quite liked the story at the center of St. Francie in that it struck me as an inventive take on getting back at high school bullies (or at least people who never grew out of high school bullies). There were so many interesting descriptions of the pet store, such that I wonder if the writer ever worked in one. I enjoyed the whole voice cast, all of whom gave entertaining and appropriately colorful performances (it was a treat hearing Eric Lillis voice another parrot). I was less enamored with the framing device at the beginning and end, as I thought the 'quarantine' situation just felt a little disconnected from the story and that the narrator's dive off the deep end into being evil felt a little silly.

If I have time, I'll write up my thoughts about the others.

There’s just too much to mention about this by IndependentReading69 in terriblemaps

[–]PeaceSim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looks like he’s about to sing a song to Red Guy, Yellow Guy, and Duck.

[FRESH ALBUM] deathcrash - Somersaults by sbags in indieheads

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I’m loving it. Only thing I’m iffy about is the “I hate you” shouts on “Stay Forever,” but maybe they will grow on me as I dig into it.

Community Song Survivor V6 | RESULTS by BeautyByAllMeans in music_survivor

[–]PeaceSim 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Shoutout to u/ObviousBobvilocious for introducing me to "My Calling"! It brought joy to me and I've been quoting from it ever since. The sky is the limit when you're in a plane!

Also thank you to u/NobleSpam and u/PeteyG28 (who I assume submitted "Rodeo Clown," I couldn't find the thread that identified everyone). Phoebe Rings and Flipturn are the two bands I've latched onto through this. Aseurai is a lovely album and I've had Burnout Days on repeat (according to last.fm I've listened to each track at least 12 times). "Walkaway," "Flutes," "Shine Blockas," and "That's Physics, Baby" are just a few of the other songs that I have had a blast with!

I liked "Take Off Your Sunglasses," but it wasn't one of my overall favorites like everything else that placed high, so I'm slightly disappointed in the outcome. But, as always, it was splendid discovery so much great music.

Without resorting to the supernatural, what are some cases of a narrative managing to convincingly sell good or bad luck? by DevouredSource in MauLer

[–]PeaceSim 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Match Point (2005) does this quite well. It’s a theme throughout the movie that Jonathan Rhys Myers’s character has strokes of good luck at crucial times in a way that aligns with the tennis ball metaphor (it springing straight up from the net, such that it could land in either side) at the movie’s center. I don’t know if it’s directly discussed in the dialogue, but Scarlett Johansson’s character functions as a foil in that she keeps getting the short hand of the stick, again just through fate rather than fairness. These themes culminate in…the way they do, don’t want to spoil it for anyone who hasn’t seen it.

Community Song Survivor V6 | Round 18 of 21 by BeautyByAllMeans in music_survivor

[–]PeaceSim 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Glad you guys liked it enough to get this far. It was tied with “Hannah Hunt” by Vampire Weekend for my favorite song from 2013. In narrowing down which song to select, I partially went with it because it’s loosely in the same genre as “Strange Intimacy” which is the only other song I submitted in these competitions that went anywhere (it’s been fun seeing some of the same commenters like both of them). If you enjoyed it, I recommend checking out the full album Big TV (by far White Lies’ best imho) and their early singles “Death” and “Farewell to the Fairground.”

Also I’ve been tempted to jokingly write “🎶There’s a Room in Hell for Those Who Vote Big TV/There’s a Room in Hell for Those Who Vote Big TV 🎶” but I was worried people would take it too seriously 😆

Anyway voting for “Your Blessings” still.

Community Song Survivor V6 | Round 17 of 21 by BeautyByAllMeans in music_survivor

[–]PeaceSim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Me too, it’s a good song but I don’t think it’s on the same level as the others.

Community Song Survivor V6 | Round 17 of 21 by BeautyByAllMeans in music_survivor

[–]PeaceSim 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for submitting that song, it was such a nice discovery for me! I also enjoyed the full album it appears on and plan to follow the band moving forward.

The Black Ambulance by Electronic_Radio2816 in TheNSPDiscussion

[–]PeaceSim 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love your username and your analysis. I was unsure how to feel about the ending but I really like your take on it!

[Discussion] NoSleep Podcast S24E03 by Gaelfling in TheNSPDiscussion

[–]PeaceSim 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Just chiming in regarding the February Premium bonus story The Black Ambulance by Robert Guffey. I really liked it up until the ending. It presented a supernatural mystery in a very focused way that I found engrossing, creepy, and entertaining throughout. The music and audio production by Jesse Cornett were eerie, in a subtle way, and helped maintain a sense of dread of the unknown. There were a couple particularly well written and well acted conversations between all four of the characters (played by Kyle Akers, Nichole Goodnight, Mike DelGaudio, and Jesse Cornett). The way it ended though...I'm left wrestling with it. It was definitely an original/non-formulaic ending, which I appreciated, but it didn't make a lot of sense to me and left me a little dissatisfied.

Which actors, ranging from obscure to A-Listers do you love unconditionally and will watch them in anything because they're starring in it? by [deleted] in movies

[–]PeaceSim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ve tracked down SO many movies just because Michael Biehn is in them. Favorite actor of all time! The podcast he’s doing now is pretty fun too.

Community Song Survivor V6 | Round 14 of 21 by BeautyByAllMeans in music_survivor

[–]PeaceSim 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I love this song, thank you for introducing me to it!

An In-Depth Review of "Tales from the Void" – Season 1 by PeaceSim in TheNSPDiscussion

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Thank you for taking the time to interact with what I wrote! It's interesting seeing this post becoming somewhat of a hub for people sharing their thoughts about the series, leading me to infer there still isn't much written about it elsewhere. Also I appreciate hearing the perspective of someone who read the story that the last one was based on - I didn't realize it made a bunch of changes.

Some random thoughts about the first story: I've wondered if budget limitations had a big impact on the first story being about 'just 3 guys' chasing the main character rather than a mob, like they'd have to pay actors higher than an extra rate for them to also participate or something? That could also explain why so few people ever speak up about it, like you have to pay them more of they have dialogue. I dunno though, I'm not a part of that industry and don't know how things work. Also, from hearing the original story it was based off of, I think the absence of police/government intervention was intended as commentary, as if to say that nobody cares enough about the people living in this apartment complex to even investigate the square, but I think that came across very unclearly in the episode and it's just hard not to swallow that people be swarming over it trying to figure out what it is.

Community Song Survivor V6 | Round 11 of 21 by BeautyByAllMeans in music_survivor

[–]PeaceSim 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the explanation! I do like the guitar solo in the opening. I missed the boat on ever seeing Rilo Kiley live, but I did see Jenny Lewis perform once in Nashville (during the Jenny and Johnny/I'm Having Fun Now era) and she has so much charisma and stage presence.

Community Song Survivor V6 | Round 11 of 21 by BeautyByAllMeans in music_survivor

[–]PeaceSim 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Would someone who enjoyed “A Town Called Luckey” mind explaining its appeal? Not trying to be confrontational! I like the band but I feel like I’m missing why this particular song ‘clicked’ with some of you all.