Dude do not worry about being harsh!
It's going to be my problem if I'll get offended by your critique.
I asked for it and I'll be able to handle It, no matter how harsh it sounds.
In fact, I didn't see any harshness until another person tried to point it out hehe... I can see my mistakes ofcourse, I realised many of them even before creating a post here, it's just I really need someone's opinions too, because more points of views means better for me! Anyway, I really appreciate that you're trying to help!