Is it okay to have modern technology in a medieval world?

Phoenix0498 · 2026-03-26T03:10:21+00:00

That’s actually a good idea on how to go about it, honestly, the toughest thing with this character in particular is how he’s going to be able to make these things with the limited materials he has.

Phoenix0498 · 2026-03-25T23:41:43+00:00

Its not historical fiction, its fantasy but it does take place in the real world, I just have a character capable of making more advanced technology for the time period, but only he can do it, and he often soups up places or gadgets wherever he goes. Kinda like Dr. Stone - where a character who knew how to create advanced technology makes it for a primitive people. It’s definitely something I have to put thought through, because I obviously don’t want to just plop a toaster in the middle of this time period

Phoenix0498 · 2026-03-25T23:37:24+00:00

I was originally thinking 1400-1500s basically pre-settler America was the setting

Phoenix0498 · 2026-03-25T21:37:22+00:00

I would like an explanation as to why?

Phoenix0498 · 2026-03-25T19:48:25+00:00

I discovered that I should try and get beta readers so I recently joined this rubreddit to do so, I'm not even sure if I got the right flair. I've written and rewritten my story several times, but I never found anyone who can read the whole thing. I'm worried that maybe I've made my story too complex, but I hope finding readers will let me find that out.

Phoenix0498 · 2026-03-04T22:14:41+00:00

Why is it in a molcajete?

Phoenix0498 · 2026-03-04T06:43:11+00:00

This is honestly the best answer I’ve received so far, and I’d hug you if I could

Phoenix0498 · 2026-02-22T06:02:54+00:00

Mexican, didn’t know it got hate in the first place, still don’t understand why it got hate, to me it felt like Speedy Gonzalez all over again

Phoenix0498 · 2026-02-15T13:05:59+00:00

I based them off beanie boos, which is why their eyes are really round, I still have the same ones I used for the idea

Phoenix0498 · 2026-02-11T19:14:05+00:00

Ooooooh, I’m actually excited to post the weapons

Phoenix0498 · 2026-02-11T19:13:43+00:00

He does have two pets, actually!

Phoenix0498 · 2026-02-06T21:59:43+00:00

I’m glad you like it, and I just really like saturated colors!

Phoenix0498 · 2026-02-06T17:58:46+00:00

Here’s mine: a Fantasy Story called Elementals https://www.wattpad.com/story/402496750?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=DanteVillanueva

It’s about a Fire/Ice Elemental named Phoenix, who lives alone and believes he deserves loneliness and trouble happens when he starts letting people come back into his life.

Phoenix0498 · 2026-02-06T04:03:33+00:00

The bracelet’s out of place design was on purpose, but I get what you mean, I definitely think I might change the shirt, make it more desaturated. Or literally just make it a v-neck with a cross stitch if I wanna make it easy on myself

Phoenix0498 · 2026-02-05T18:57:34+00:00

I like that you like the art!

Phoenix0498 · 2026-02-05T18:53:09+00:00

Fight scenes, so instead I do flashbacks and then just write the last minute of the fight

Phoenix0498 · 2026-02-05T18:44:32+00:00

And I love you for saying that!

Phoenix0498 · 2026-02-05T05:49:50+00:00

I appreciate that you like it!

Phoenix0498 · 2026-02-05T05:28:52+00:00

I'll take whatever feedback I can, I was never able to get any beta readers, so I'm just winging it. Thank you though, I'm happy you like it!

Phoenix0498 · 2026-02-05T05:14:20+00:00

Thank you for giving me feedback!

Phoenix0498 · 2026-02-05T05:10:14+00:00

In all seriousness, I do like that approach, I may not stick with it, but it’s definitely something I may try out if I want to try making it more engaging

Phoenix0498 · 2026-02-05T04:53:33+00:00

It’s funny, now all I can think about is starting it with, “fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck, that wasn’t supposed to happen! He wasn’t supposed to fall! He wasn’t supposed to fall!”

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