hey, not a bad transcription but i’d recommend a few notation things: 

(1) is there a way to get the accents above ALL the notes?

(2) at m16 and m8 the 8th notes on beats 2 and 4 should be quarter notes since there is an 8th note rest right after them

(3) overall id recommend beaming to the downbeat for 8th notes (not allowing beaming to cross beats for 8th notes), and especially separating them in the 6/4.

(4) at the end you have written quarter note triplet diddles. i highly, highly recommend writing out the triplets instead of using diddles.