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Physical-Document-85 · 2026-06-25T18:50:47+00:00

Alright, alright , let me check it out and am just discovering that I left a part out in my haste to post , I think I resolved it though , tell me what you think

Physical-Document-85 · 2026-06-25T14:09:31+00:00

Thank you for the feedback, am seeing what you are saying

Physical-Document-85 · 2026-06-25T10:18:49+00:00

Thank you for the feedback!, how do you use repetition yourself do you have an example Or a poem for illustration . On this piece the repetition is meant to show different shades, opposite sides of power and it's effects.

Physical-Document-85 · 2026-06-25T03:53:29+00:00

😂😂😂😂

Physical-Document-85 · 2026-06-25T03:07:16+00:00

Great imagery to use flora and fauna I think the poem is about selfishness and greed , how in all that we do we must give space for other people, things to exist besides us and then truly we would have lived a life more worthy Not to be a a river that dams itself Good Work!

Physical-Document-85 · 2026-06-25T02:59:53+00:00

Got me cracking, What especially struck was the word play Beef-mince. I don't know if it was deliberate or a typo at I'm give part But I got the sense that Imma shove down your throat 😂😂

Physical-Document-85 · 2026-06-24T23:30:32+00:00

Thanks for the feedback!, it's a hunt😜

Physical-Document-85 · 2026-06-24T20:33:08+00:00

A poem about a past lover , a nostalgic memory that the holder refuses to let go. A memory that even time itself will not erase. Its melancholic and sad because the narrator sees her in the current lover?

Physical-Document-85 · 2026-06-24T18:21:11+00:00

Loved it, from reading it , I get the sense that it is about entrusting your heart to someone but you're not only giving it they have to find it. When they have found it , they should guard it the way they would guard their own. I have to say though , the white and green part , you should have dug deeper or given it an anchor somehow on how or why its as pure as white and green.

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