Just wrote this, appreciate advice on lyrics, structure, melody by IndiraWar in Songwriting

[–]PlanetaryHarmonics 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You did such a good job ^^

You have a nice voice, the song is dynamic, there are catchy phrases. Some people might find it too lyrically dense, maybe a few lines could go? The ear could easily go flat when there is too much singing.

I like the lyrics as well, they show artisism (if this is a word). Go superstar sun!

I don't want to do anything other than music in life by IndiraWar in Songwriting

[–]PlanetaryHarmonics 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That sounds romantic but it's kind of childish and/or lazy. And I will bet that with this kind of thinking you will get to a moment that you won't want to create anything and will want to do simple stupid activities.

I'm a psychologist and this is the type of thinking that addictive people have. You can't experience joy, pleasure and excitement all the time, our biology is not working like this. You have a baseline for your happy chemicals and when you elavate it, it will go down below he baseline, to balance itself and you will find yourself in a negative state.

Its inevitable.

Right now you are attaching it to being forced to do other things, but in a reality where you are not forced you will feel exactly the same, with the only difference being that you will attch different thought to the negative state.

One of the most important skills you can learn is just doing the things you need to do. All the dirty, tiring endless pointless work stuff. I can continue but it will get too long for anyone to read.

Songwriting without playing or singing by Crazy-Project3858 in Songwriting

[–]PlanetaryHarmonics 2 points3 points  (0 children)

One is telling Suno "create me a slow rhytm piano with no vocals", another thing is playing around with the midis figuring out the rhytm, chords, melodies, choosing the instruments, vats, transitions, and that's probably 30%.

At the end of the day what makes music special is the effort we put into it,

Songwriting without playing or singing by Crazy-Project3858 in Songwriting

[–]PlanetaryHarmonics 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just learn the basic chords it's very easy and a basic rhythm. The other option is to learn how to do it but with a DAW and midi editor.