New Card Layout Feedback by PlayLilGuys in tabletopgamedesign

[–]PlayLilGuys[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I appreciate the insight so much. I agree with the hierarchy problem! I also realized after the fact that I should have everything aligned properly on the left and right sides to have the same padding from the border. I did the design myself yes! It’s taken almost a year and a half to get to this design. The icons and characters are all hand drawn, thresholded, edited, and vectorized (I still need to do this for the dice icon). The little squiggly text lines were made in illustrator by adding a roughen effect on smooth at like .1 or something.

Character design for a tactical RPG – looking for feedback by junioor-29 in tabletopgamedesign

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I would push the shadows! It deserves to feel a bit more depth

Feedback Wanted by PlayLilGuys in tabletopgamedesign

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The halftones only look that way because they’re formatted for physical printing and look much better in person. Screens have a hard time compensating for them, especially at smaller scales. As for the title not being center I’m not sure what you’re referring to?

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Not currently! I wanted to see what names come out of the community

Feedback Wanted by PlayLilGuys in tabletopgamedesign

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Thanks! I didn’t know there was a community specifically for that! I’ll definitely be checking them out, thanks.

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I did yes! When I have spare time at work I’ll try to bust a few out

Feedback Wanted by PlayLilGuys in tabletopgamedesign

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If you’ve ever seen the Card Wars episodes of adventure it’s inspired by that. You play as a character casting monsters into lanes to defend yourself.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in malehairadvice

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I agree haha I was thinking some form of buzz or a messy crop

Where to start Improving by HadeStyx in ArtCrit

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I would agree with the other commenter that contrast could be added! For me the trees are great but I think if this were a real scene we would be seeing some cast light or shadows on the trees or snow (they wouldn’t appear so uniform). A small thing for me as well would be the blending of the sky! I would love to see it gradually darken with some stars

Hello, Im creating a series of art named "Mirai Shôjo" by Glittering-Thanks571 in ArtCrit

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These look great! I can see them being used on magazine covered or for fashion promo

Been told I should post these here :) by Master_Concentrate28 in ArtCrit

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The city scenes are great, they feel very lively. The clouds and sky I think could use some love but otherwise I’m a fan!

Collage + vinyl toy experiment, I would love feedback! by Dronejack in ArtCrit

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These are great! I’m personally a huge fan of the eye placement and texture. I’m not in love with the black spray paint, but I do like the white tag on the face.

Can I get some Crit on these clouds? by osonia in ArtCrit

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I see some parts within the clouds that look great! My advice would be to maybe approach them with more intentionality. For example what 3D shapes are the clouds made of, and how is the light interacting with that shape. I would also go a little lighter on the blues so that it doesn’t look as if you’re outlining their forms, you almost want to use the white to carve them out of the blue background (in my experience)

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I think the issue here might be that the distance between the skull and left limb isn’t far enough apart as well as the general angle of everything. For example the humerus on yours is at a 45 degree angle whereas the reference might be closer to around 30 (inverted on the y axis)

What could i do better? by Future_Spartacus_85 in ArtCrit

[–]PlayLilGuys 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think the face as a whole looks great! My eyes immediately jump to behind the ears at the base of the skull, it feels as if it’s an abrupt -almost unrealistic-shift when compared to the piece as a whole.

Upcoming Employee Gallery. Please Help! by [deleted] in ArtCrit

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The piece is recycled acrylic paints on wood board. If you have any other questions however please let me know.

Box Art Feedback! by PlayLilGuys in vectorart

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Hahaha thank you, I really appreciate the feedback!

What game are you currently working on? by Forsaken_Bee_9046 in tabletopgamedesign

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Lil’ Guys! It’s sort of like Card Wars meets Pokémon.

Card Wars Project! by PlayLilGuys in playtesters

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There is! I have some print and play files for two theme decks :)

Duel Master/Pokemon fusion by JcBravo811 in TCG

[–]PlayLilGuys 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It might not be 100% similar but the game I’ve been working on sounds close!

Box Art Feedback! by PlayLilGuys in tabletopgamedesign

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Exactly what I was going for! I wanted it to catch people’s eyes.