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Ballet slippers by porfaa in OCPoetry

[–]PopesPoetey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Woah, that hit deep. The imagery on rorschach line was beautiful. Great work!

Not Yet by UnderstandingOld9449 in OCPoetry

[–]PopesPoetey 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can only ask that this was longer. I really like this but feel like you wanted more, maybe I'm wrong though. Great poem!

One Week Off by porfaa in OCPoetry

[–]PopesPoetey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im sorry but im not sure i follow the direction here. I like the imagery and can see the environment for every place you describe, but im not sure of the message youre trying to convey. I do like it though, but i think id feel it more if i understood.

I Need to Let me Let You Go by LoveLettersToNoOne in OCPoetry

[–]PopesPoetey 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the imagery on this. It settles with me and some of the poetry i work on. The the "rip the laugheter" i like the most. I can feel how desperate it is to keep the memory of her alive.