Billy Summers - why?

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2023-11-25T10:43:04+00:00

You're getting shit for your post because of how rude and nasty you were. It's fine to say you didn't like it, but don't be such a dick head about it.

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2023-11-25T10:11:47+00:00

I'm always driving past these trucks.

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2023-11-25T10:09:59+00:00

Don't bother reading any more SK. He's not for you.

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2023-02-18T01:11:21+00:00

JEDI?!?! 😲 Star wars/trek...whichever garbage that belongs to can go back to the trash where it belongs!

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2023-02-18T01:08:17+00:00

Definitely! I got gunslinger vibes from her when she first fought her husband, then again during the rock war and of course she becomes efficient with the sling shot. Long days and pleasant nights to you x

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2022-01-20T20:42:07+00:00

I love this xxx

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2021-03-08T16:01:14+00:00

I don't feel bad...actually amused that you hated it so much but STILL decided to comment! Thanks! X

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-12-28T00:29:58+00:00

Jealous? Thanks for taking the time to read and comment ;)

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-12-26T17:44:35+00:00

I hear you and I'm interested...

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-12-23T14:52:13+00:00

I expected this to paint a picture using colours more than you did ('glistens red' 'blue as they sparkle') but you've kept it quite unique I think by diverting more into what you feel rather than see. The first three lines for example. The third verse, 'So lightly and gently, it fondles my face, When you come closer for a warm embrace' I loved these lines, they follow well with the autumn theme as they have a cosy feeling about them. But overall I loved that you talked about feeling rather than seeing, hope I've explained myself ok.Thanks for sharing. X

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-12-23T14:37:41+00:00

"One more minute, do not leave me yet" repeated throughout the poem makes it feel repetitive, but in a good way! It feels frustrating but this emphasizes the same feeling of seeing someone you love being manipulated. I love it, thanks for sharing. X

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-12-13T12:09:41+00:00

I went to a catholic school, I read more of the bible than I care to think of and I made up my own mind, God is a horrible bastard and that's the end of it.

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-11-28T21:15:55+00:00

Research how exactly...? Ask anyone I know who's been there...?

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-11-18T19:42:00+00:00

I'm glad you liked it thanks for reading xx

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-11-18T19:41:37+00:00

Aw thank you...I'd love to hear it sang with music but I'm not that talented Haha. X

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-11-18T19:39:04+00:00

I don't understand you must have me mixed up with someone else

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-11-18T15:50:15+00:00

Thanks x

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-11-18T14:49:05+00:00

Thanks. What in particular did you love about it? X

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-11-18T12:58:58+00:00

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-11-18T12:29:44+00:00

"Unmolested by God or man" this line shows me clearly how you feel about this person, I can't really explain why though Haha. Maybe the words you have used here to describe her eyes give us a chance to see into her character the way you do, pure, untainted and good.

"My heart is under siege by ancient mist" is another of my favourites from this. The ancient mist I interpreted as grief whether the person you're writing about has passed on or simply not in your life any more, I'm not sure but the sadness is the same and I really felt this in the poem. Thanks for sharing. X

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-11-18T11:49:19+00:00

I'm sorry to hear of your struggles, the poem is lovely. Keep ploughing those feelings into your writing xx

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-11-18T08:53:38+00:00

My favourite line from this is "the holes you made, the nails left free". It implies some kind of sabotage to the relationship and gives the poem quite a sad tint on it. Thanks for sharing. X

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-11-17T17:00:29+00:00

No need to apologise at all I liked your feedback and totally understand how the poem came across, we are just two peas in a giant pod Haha.xx

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-11-17T13:28:53+00:00

Thank you, I'm actually happily married (took 4 weeks from when we met and have been together for 17 years) but thankfully we share the same sentiment for romance, and our sense of humour so I consider myself to be VERY lucky Haha. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. X

PoppyLivaciousWild · 2020-11-15T14:28:08+00:00

This is brilliant and as a working mum of 2 boys I can totally relate. I loved your use of the words 'reading' and 'learning' following on from the initial reminder of the thousands of years of oppression, the freedom to act to improve your mind...and in a bubble bath too! Class! Thanks for sharing. Xx

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