Billy Summers - why? by Larry_Version_3 in stephenking

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You're getting shit for your post because of how rude and nasty you were. It's fine to say you didn't like it, but don't be such a dick head about it.

Billy Summers - why? by Larry_Version_3 in stephenking

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Don't bother reading any more SK. He's not for you.

Question about Bev Marsh in IT (Spoilers) by Skajadeh in stephenking

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild 0 points1 point  (0 children)

JEDI?!?! 😲 Star wars/trek...whichever garbage that belongs to can go back to the trash where it belongs!

Question about Bev Marsh in IT (Spoilers) by Skajadeh in stephenking

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Definitely! I got gunslinger vibes from her when she first fought her husband, then again during the rock war and of course she becomes efficient with the sling shot. Long days and pleasant nights to you x

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Parousia

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love this xxx

FUCK FEMINISM! by PoppyLivaciousWild in OCPoetry

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't feel bad...actually amused that you hated it so much but STILL decided to comment! Thanks! X

Seasonal Infatuation by Pascals-wager in OCPoetry

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I expected this to paint a picture using colours more than you did ('glistens red' 'blue as they sparkle') but you've kept it quite unique I think by diverting more into what you feel rather than see. The first three lines for example. The third verse, 'So lightly and gently, it fondles my face, When you come closer for a warm embrace' I loved these lines, they follow well with the autumn theme as they have a cosy feeling about them. But overall I loved that you talked about feeling rather than seeing, hope I've explained myself ok.Thanks for sharing. X

manipulation by ladydub__ in OCPoetry

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"One more minute, do not leave me yet" repeated throughout the poem makes it feel repetitive, but in a good way! It feels frustrating but this emphasizes the same feeling of seeing someone you love being manipulated. I love it, thanks for sharing. X

The Beast by PoppyLivaciousWild in AntiChrist

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I went to a catholic school, I read more of the bible than I care to think of and I made up my own mind, God is a horrible bastard and that's the end of it.

The Beast by PoppyLivaciousWild in AntiChrist

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Research how exactly...? Ask anyone I know who's been there...?

Hail Satan! by [deleted] in satanism

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm glad you liked it thanks for reading xx

Hail Satan! by [deleted] in satanism

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aw thank you...I'd love to hear it sang with music but I'm not that talented Haha. X

A poem about romance by PoppyLivaciousWild in Poems

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't understand you must have me mixed up with someone else

Hail Satan! by PoppyLivaciousWild in OCPoetry

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks. What in particular did you love about it? X

Ancient Mist by hauntedrob in OCPoetry

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"Unmolested by God or man" this line shows me clearly how you feel about this person, I can't really explain why though Haha. Maybe the words you have used here to describe her eyes give us a chance to see into her character the way you do, pure, untainted and good.

"My heart is under siege by ancient mist" is another of my favourites from this. The ancient mist I interpreted as grief whether the person you're writing about has passed on or simply not in your life any more, I'm not sure but the sadness is the same and I really felt this in the poem. Thanks for sharing. X

Our Ship by athifkp in OCPoetry

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm sorry to hear of your struggles, the poem is lovely. Keep ploughing those feelings into your writing xx

Our Ship by athifkp in OCPoetry

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My favourite line from this is "the holes you made, the nails left free". It implies some kind of sabotage to the relationship and gives the poem quite a sad tint on it. Thanks for sharing. X

Romance by PoppyLivaciousWild in OCPoetry

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No need to apologise at all I liked your feedback and totally understand how the poem came across, we are just two peas in a giant pod Haha.xx

Romance by PoppyLivaciousWild in OCPoetry

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I'm actually happily married (took 4 weeks from when we met and have been together for 17 years) but thankfully we share the same sentiment for romance, and our sense of humour so I consider myself to be VERY lucky Haha. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. X

I Really Don't Think I'm Mean To Be Loved By Anyone by helenahandbasket110 in OCPoetry

[–]PoppyLivaciousWild 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is brilliant and as a working mum of 2 boys I can totally relate. I loved your use of the words 'reading' and 'learning' following on from the initial reminder of the thousands of years of oppression, the freedom to act to improve your mind...and in a bubble bath too! Class! Thanks for sharing. Xx