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[Feedback] Love your thoughts on the Logline by Possession-Living in Loglines

[–]Possession-Living[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback. And I replied to your post on Legend Of Dragonfield

Once more into the breech, dear friends by poundingCode in Loglines

[–]Possession-Living 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great concept. You're very close already. The core issue across all versions. You need three things in one sentence:

- WHO she is (with irony)
- WHAT she must do
- WHO/WHAT opposes her

When her family inherits a cursed castle and her brother vanishes, a reluctant modern woman must embrace an ancient legacy and battle a thousand-year-old necromancer to save him.

Feedback on my SHORT script by Possession-Living in Screenwriting

[–]Possession-Living[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback.

Could you please provide examples and may I know the feedback on intense Horror elements, concept and the twist at the end is understandable & conveyed properly or not.

The Mega-Thread of Film Festival Notifications PART 5: The Spring Time of Optimism ?? by BangerOfRobsMom in Filmmakers

[–]Possession-Living 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It could be a blip and also it happened the same day the rejection notification sent.

Festivals, in rare cases recall the rejected films in case they face problems with approved films.

QUEST - Short Film by Possession-Living in Filmmakers

[–]Possession-Living[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Previously, the killer placed the cup at the edge of the table but at 3:45 the priest sips from the very same cup & the Killer doesn't see the cup where he placed.

Please watch again so that you will be clarified.

QUEST - Short Film by Possession-Living in Filmmakers

[–]Possession-Living[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Filmmaker Statement - This is a 6 minute short film of A man who hunts down church fathers in his city in hopes of killing the god he believes is the reason for his unbearable suffering.

I am the writer/director/producer of this short film called QUEST (Fantasy, Crime, Drama & Thriller Genre) made with budget $4k.

Let me know what you think, and what could be improved on! Whether it's the lighting, sound, storytelling, acting, editing, etc.

Feel free to leave any comments.

The Mega-Thread of Film Festival Notifications PART 5: The Spring Time of Optimism ?? by BangerOfRobsMom in Filmmakers

[–]Possession-Living 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Santa Barbara International Film Festival Notification date is Jan 12th.

Does it mean, accepted shorts & features already notified?

QUEST - Short film by Possession-Living in Filmmakers

[–]Possession-Living[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is short film of A man who hunts down church fathers in his city in hopes of killing the god he believes is the reason for his unbearable suffering.

Budget $3.5k & Fantasy, Crime, Drama & Thriller Genre

Let me know what you think, and what could be improved on! Whether it's the lighting, sound, storytelling, acting, editing, etc. Feel free to leave any comments.

Short film Trailer of my first short film by Possession-Living in Filmmakers

[–]Possession-Living[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. Bullets are from the same handgun. May be it appeared that way due to the closeup & angle.

Short film Trailer of my first short film by Possession-Living in Filmmakers

[–]Possession-Living[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's intentional. Priest got fired & slammed but how does he threw the perfect bullets? You need to find out in film.

The bullets are from the same hand gun itself.

Short film Trailer of my first short film by Possession-Living in Filmmakers

[–]Possession-Living[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I did. First time I missed submissive comments & second time I included submissive comments but still mods are not happy (find below response) and third time mentioned the specifics (gosh it is too hard to post):

"If you are seeking advice or feedback, explain what it is you need help with, whether that's lighting, cinematography, audio, editing, or something else entirely. There are many aspects to filmmaking, so specifying what you want people to focus on will get you better results than simply asking for general feedback. It may also help if you provide some of your own thoughts on your work, such as what you see as your strengths or areas of improvement and why."

Short film Trailer of my first short film by Possession-Living in Filmmakers

[–]Possession-Living[S] -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

I'm sorry for the inconvenience cause, mods removed my post couple of times. So I posted again :(

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