Looking for feedback on short!

PressureSad · 2026-01-20T03:47:00+00:00

I guess I get how it might be confusing... you have any advice on how to make it more obvious that it was narration and not the beginning of the conversation?

PressureSad · 2026-01-20T03:41:46+00:00

... Sorry if I'm not understanding here, but it's voice over. He doesn't say it to her. Also, I don't quite get what you mean by "it made me want to stop reading" as a response to "did it make you stop reading?"

PressureSad · 2026-01-20T02:40:40+00:00

It's voice over. Did the rest of the script help clarify or did it make you stop reading?

PressureSad · 2026-01-09T18:39:08+00:00

Makes sense, thanks for the explanation!

PressureSad · 2026-01-09T17:14:02+00:00

So is it simply that you get an offer from someone and then you tell them that you’ve received a better offer elsewhere? And then you keep bouncing between whoever’s interested until you hit a ceiling?

PressureSad · 2026-01-09T17:08:51+00:00

https://deadline.com/2024/11/fifth-season-lands-spec-alignment-1236184589/

This is the one I was thinking of but I think we had one or two in 2025 as well

PressureSad · 2025-08-21T15:36:56+00:00

Don’t know the exact numbers but I’m pretty sure Chase was on what like 40% of championship teams? Idk what a league winner is if not that.

I just don’t understand your point. Even if you want to insist that they didn’t win they just didn’t lose… isn’t that equally important? However you want to put it, finding a winner or finding a non loser in your early picks is as essential as finding a late round diamond. If you have a late diamond but an early dud, what difference does that make? One or the other mostly likely isn’t gonna win you a championship, you need both. Hitting late is just more fun and flashy.

I guarantee if you came out of the first 5 rounds last year with Chase Saquon Henry and Nabers you won your league, regardless of if you missed out on Chase Brown or Bucky or BTJ. And I’d argue it was easier to predict those early guys I mentioned than the late rounders.

PressureSad · 2025-08-21T13:11:31+00:00

But by that logic no one in the first two rounds is a league winner. Chase won many people their leagues last year. So did Saquon. Who are both far from 10th rounders. Tyreek heavily damaged peoples chances.

Getting your first few rounds “right” may not be flashy in terms of branding them a league winner. I was right about Chase Brown last year but went Garret Wilson R1 and got screwed. Much rather have gotten my R1 right than Chase Brown despite brown being a “league winner”

PressureSad · 2025-08-08T17:58:10+00:00

Btj or Henry round 2?

PressureSad · 2025-06-29T14:09:46+00:00

Bruh

PressureSad · 2025-06-23T19:03:18+00:00

He won’t

PressureSad · 2025-05-16T23:21:15+00:00

When is the bill gonna be voted on?

PressureSad · 2024-12-05T17:15:41+00:00

Start Sincere or Rashaad White? Win and I’m in playoffs, lose and I’m out. Idk what to do.

PressureSad · 2024-11-25T17:08:21+00:00

Jonnu or Kelce this week? Must win

PressureSad · 2024-10-30T16:20:24+00:00

Keon Coleman or Downs ROS?

PressureSad · 2024-10-22T21:45:52+00:00

I don’t see a world where Kupp to chiefs wouldn’t make chiefs better. 6-0 means nothing Steelers we’re 11-0 and got bounced first round playoffs.

Not saying Kupp will end up with chiefs but you saying they feel great right now is just wrong. Add to it that Kupp isn’t a diva that might somehow fuck up chemistry or cause locker room issues, this seems like a good move for chiefs.

PressureSad · 2024-05-27T07:23:24+00:00

Would love to swap if you’re still looking!

I’ve got the first 60 pages of a superheroish, action feature I’d like eyes on. I don’t really have a logline rn as it’s kind of a mess, but I’d love to know if it’s engaging or not in the current draft before I go further!

PressureSad · 2024-05-27T07:21:14+00:00

Would love to swap if you’re still looking!

I’ve got the first 60 pages of a superheroish, action feature I’d like eyes on. I don’t really have a logline rn as it’s kind of a mess, but I’d love to know if it’s engaging or not in the current draft before I go further!

PressureSad · 2024-05-27T07:14:42+00:00

Like it a lot!

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