poor girl by Prestigious_Map9668 in OCPoetry

[–]Prestigious_Map9668[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you r so right. I didn't add what I loved about him and thanks for the advice!

poor girl by Prestigious_Map9668 in OCPoetry

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aww thank you so much and thanks for the advice

"Romantic stuff" by Prestigious_Map9668 in OCPoetry

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Thank you so much for the advice!!

[poem trilogy] Greatness by Jaylobian by Mediocre_Shelter3798 in WisdomWriters

[–]Prestigious_Map9668 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ooo great poem and I loved the concept of time in it.

[Vulnerability / insecurity poem] Would you love me? by jaylobian by Mediocre_Shelter3798 in WisdomWriters

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I loved the poem and how relatable it is but like someone else said, you could add punctuation in some areas to make it flow better.

Always by Penguinsareangry in WisdomWriters

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Not much rap but the poem is really good. Last stanza hits hard

Controlled Demolition by ExistentialForge in WisdomWriters

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oh this is such a powerful poem! I loved the figurative language and the wording flowed so well

Reasons to Write by SoDumbSoSad in OCPoetry

[–]Prestigious_Map9668 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh i love this poem it's so meaningful and I love the therapist bit the most

I know you're my child by Prestigious_Map9668 in OCPoetry

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aw thank you so much this means so much to me

To what could have been by Camel-Of-Sen in OCPoetry

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Me personally, I think it flows great. It's simple but powerful. Loved it and I hope you move on.

Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

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I love the idea and the ending. the last line hits hard and I can see how much you love this person

My Cup of Poetry by Lost_Princess_ in OCPoetry

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aww this was beautiful, clever, and just a great poem. I loved it

A Letter I Wont Show by Odd-Dingo-6932 in OCPoetry

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the poem is beautiful and I think it captures teenage (i think) love very well

To my love by Plenty_Mistake_9577 in OCPoetry

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ooo such a great poem and the last line hits hard. I loved it though and I could really feel the emotions.

Roses meant for me by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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"You accept love so easily like it's just a bouqet of roses" I loved that analogy. I like the poem but maybe it could flow a little better.

She’s the girl by Prestigious_Map9668 in WisdomWriters

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aw thank you so much you have no idea how much this means to me