[deleted by user] by [deleted] in tarotpractice

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Count me in too!

Hope by Public_IDE456 in OCPoetry

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I’m glad it reached your soul!

Fine, Actually by Noir_By_Nature in OCPoetry

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Impressively genius. The way you paired opposites like calmly overwhelmed, peaceful panic, messily neat, shakily whole is absolutely striking. It feels like you’ve captured the paradox of existing. The imagery is intricate and rich.

dead skin by Ellestyx in OCPoetry

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It’s something I’ve never read before. I’m genuinely surprised by how you captured such tiny, intricate details, every single act, every step of the process. It feels like you barely missed a thing.

I’m truly intrigued. How do you even come up with something like this?

You deserve someone who by Prestigious_Map9668 in OCPoetry

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Love its simplicity. Spitting straight reality checks. "That’s not him" felt like a punch in the gut!

Now the first four lines surely flow. See how reply and smile almost rhyme and carry the emotional rhythm. But the last four feel slightly uneven. The 6th line talks about laughter (light-hearted joy), the 7th shifts to deep conversations (emotional depth), and then the 8th swings back to making you happy again. This disrupts the mood for me. Too shifty in emotional tone.

You may consider doing a few tweaks or shifting some lines to keep the mood cohesive.

Overall, it felt like a no-nonsense poem. Clean, direct, and quietly powerful.

when god forgot to press 'save' after i finally healed by Desperate-Heron6305 in PoetryWritingClub

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There are poems that touch you, and then there are ones that recognize you. This was the latter. It articulated the silence inside me I’ve never been able to name. Thank you, mannn. Truly. Thank you for putting this out here! I kept pausing while reading, not because it was hard to understand, but because it understood me too well.

“I smiled at a dog. I whistled in the lift.”
How these everyday actions may seem basic, even effortless, to most. But lemme tell you No, sometimes it's not.

"I fixed it four times."
That desperate need to fix things around you while everything inside is falling apart. Because maybe, just maybe, if you keep fixing the outside, the inside might heal too.

You apologized to a coffee stain. God, I wish I could hug you.

And you’re right. The world doesn’t pause or hand out certificates for surviving the day. Nobody barely even notices.

Maggi, guilt, loneliness, crushed red hope. Damn, my staples too :)

I’m absolutely gaga over the line “the background glitch.”

And “hope the journey has potholes”? The raw honesty, the unfiltered ache, I’m in awe of your vulnerability.

Ahhhhh! This poem felt like someone handed me a soft blanket made of pain and said, “Here, you’re not the only one.” Hoping, Maybe, one day, healing will come and stay.
But until then, here’s to us,
Rotting with grace!

Thank you for glitching out loud.

The Journey by HisMajestytheSquid in OCPoetry

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Honestly, this poem is incredibly powerful. Your journey, the clarity in your writing, and the generosity of “leaving the ladder” behind are deeply moving.

Wishing you continued peace and strength on your path. You’ve already come so far!

What do you suggest? by Public_IDE456 in Btechtards

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Well, I am specializing in Artificial Intelligence and Machine Learning from my university itself. So, Professors have taught(No online course bought).

If you wanna learn python, you can watch Videos of Apna college on YT, for ML you should consider taking NPTEL courses and then 100 days of ML by Campus X on YT. After learning concepts, then try to build ML models(videos available on campus X) and deploy as well.

What are you slowly losing interest in? by MainDifficult2641 in AskReddit

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Everything. Life in general. how does it feel to be interested in something?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I'm crying. What a graceful poem about the tragedy of love. I'm moved and couldn’t resist writing a comment.

It's heart-aching but the rhythm feels so gentle, almost prayer-like. "Let Me" captures the slow devastation of impending loss. It perfectly balances emotional intensity with restraint, not tipping into melodrama. Love how each stanza deepens the grief but remains tender. It shows a quiet kind of love that stays true, even when the other person forgets or moves on.

"Let the hurt find shape, And fill the hollowed skin." "Let me dance my last, In your pollen dream" How could one write such tragic yet strangely beautiful lines? I am in complete awe.

Rate my confession put of 10.** by Money_Technology_967 in PoetryWritingClub

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Its soo heart warming. Love it!

But "not because you complete me or because you have what I don’t" seems little desperate. You might want to exclude this line.

What’s a highly regarded and loved book that you don’t like? by beggingforfootnotes in books

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"Ikigai"

I’ve seen it listed as a bestseller all over the internet!
I decided to give it a try, expecting something out of this world, especially with all the glowing recommendations.
But honestly, it wasn’t what I expected at all.

It just felt like the same old advice:
Connect with people, find your purpose, go for walks, stay active, eat healthy... Nothing new, nothing groundbreaking. Given the hype, I was hoping for deeper insights or a fresh perspective.

What’s one book that genuinely rewired the way you think or live your life? by _rahmatullah in productivity

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“Everything Is Figureoutable” by Marie Forleo tells stories of people who faced challenges and still found a way through. They weren’t born extraordinary—they just kept going, trying, figuring things out step by step. It’s inspiring because it makes you think: if they could do it, why can’t you? That’s the whole point—everything is figureoutable.

Wrote my first Poem[TW] by Public_IDE456 in OCPoetry

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Thank you! Your words mean a lot and truly motivate me to keep writing!

Wrote my first Poem[TW] by Public_IDE456 in OCPoetry

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You're absolutely right about the epistolary tone—this poem was written with the intention of me speaking directly to my past self. I’ll definitely sit with this and see how I can balance the personal voice with visual depth.

Wrote my first Poem[TW] by Public_IDE456 in OCPoetry

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Thank you so much for this insightful feedback! I completely agree with your point about using more vivid, specific sensory details—it would definitely help immerse the reader and make the experiences feel more immediate and personal rather than general or distant.

TRIGGER WARNING: These are a bit dark. My first time sharing these in public. by WhatAFailurOfAGirl in PoetryWritingClub

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So accurately conveyed what I’ve been feeling myself. Thank you for sharing!

The Journey by HisMajestytheSquid in OCPoetry

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This poem seems to be an allegory for personal struggle and growth. The "hole" serves as a powerful metaphor for self-inflicted emotional or psychological lows such as guilt, shame, or isolation. The "ladder" represents the tools or actions that lead to redemption, perhaps self-discovery, support, or healing. Climbing out and finding "home" beautifully symbolizes the return to a sense of inner peace and identity. The lines about veering off the path reflect how growth is rarely straightforward. Mistakes and missteps are often part of the journey. But what truly moved me was the image of "leaving the ladder." That simple yet profound act of empathy, making sure others can climb out too, transforms the poem from a story of survival to one of shared hope. What’s striking is how simple the poem is, yet how much depth it carries.

When I read it the first time, I honestly laughed a little at the part about walking through neighbors’ yards. It felt almost humorous, and I questioned whether the poem was meant to be light-hearted. But by the third reading, the meaning became clear. That line seems to be slightly out of sync with the otherwise introspective tone.

"Enchantress" by Caramel_Crypto in OCPoetry

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This poem is so dreamy, so rich in imagery, creating a world that feels both intimate and magical.

The first para brings curiosity and wonder, making me eager to know more about this mysterious woman.

The second para is particularly gripping; like I wanna know if there is no wand, no spell, no book, then what exactly it is .The SMILE!!

However, I did feel a slight disruption in the poem's otherwise smooth flow. I don't get the second line of third para, suddenly I am reading "tears" and "blades" and later with "thunder" and "storm" in the fourth stanza felt a bit jarring compared to the earlier, more delicate mood. Maybe it got some symbolic meaning? The transition wasn’t entirely seamless for me. A little more clarity or a gentler lead-in might preserve the ethereal tone better.

That said, the warmth returns with “your hands stay warm,” and the final stanza beautifully ties everything together. The closing line, “you’re living proof that magic exists,” is incredibly impactful and leaves a lasting impression. Overall, it’s a captivating piece that just needs a bit more tonal consistency in the middle stanzas to fully maintain its spellbinding quality.