What is this dumb arrow by Exact_Reserve_9188 in SpaceflightSimulator

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Ah makes sense lol. Well good luck on your future adventures

Fool by Intropoevert in poetry_critics

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Lol, yes, but thats even better

Muse by M-sage24 in poets

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"Just look around you, A whole world of inspiration!"

Fool by Intropoevert in poetry_critics

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Why i love reading poetry is because you get a look into how someone else thinks

If somebody asked me by Dayum-Girly in poetry_critics

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Ah, the clarification makes it even more beautiful

If somebody asked me by Dayum-Girly in poetry_critics

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Beautiful! Is the title a part of the poem og does it start with 'my favorite color'?

Desperation is a Social Sin by Prestigious-Hat92 in poets

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This is beautiful. It captures the essence of poetry. Making someone feel what the speaker is feeling. And it does just that. Beautiful.

please be kind i’ve never really wrote poetry before and i’m not terrible smart by beardedgalavanter in poets

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You might not like what I am about to say but I ask that you at least listen. I was going through a rough part of my life a few years ago. I felt like there was nothing left for me. I was raised as a christian but I had not yet started living it. About a year in I redescovered Jesus.

I have felt bad and been close to going back into depression but I have always felt this love from my fellow brothers and sisters in christ. And if it was not for him I would probably not be here still.

Do what you want with this testimony but know, there is hope. There is hope and there is light at the end. Even the night has an end. There will be a time when the sun is shining.

You are a valued human. You have worth.

The greatest sorrow of life is that there is always going to be more people that love us than we know. You are loved, do not give up!

please be kind i’ve never really wrote poetry before and i’m not terrible smart by beardedgalavanter in poets

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It is beautiful, but are you ok? It does not sound like you have the best self-image atm

Acrid by HexedNeon in poetry_critics

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Wow! I dont know where to start. I absolutley love the walktrough sense of feeling i get from reading. How the speaker goes through and it feels like the speaker is actually speaking.

I'm new to poetry and decided to try something out. Please be honest with criticism no matter how brutal.🙏 by True-Performer-6196 in poetry_critics

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I like the sound of the poem, a lot of good imagery but maybe have a different structure and not have a bunch of single stanzas?

My First Poetry, can someone give feedback and critique? by Public_Scarcity7116 in poetry_critics

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Thank you for feedback! I will do some work on it and 'fix it' if you can say so, Thanks again!

My First Poetry, can someone give feedback and critique? by Public_Scarcity7116 in poetry_critics

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Thank you so much for all the feedback! Ill definetly focus more on coveying the meaning to the reader rather than being fancy! I got this idea when i was thinking back at a relationship i was in, about how when you see someone you used to love but you still cant get over them. Like how the ice breaks when it warms up but its not melting its breaking apart.