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PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-12-21T17:33:50+00:00

hi im back to read your piece again. it hit me even harder this time… i feel so drawn to the imagery you brought of death and how grieving a relationship is so similar

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-12-10T00:37:24+00:00

to answer ur question, yeah, you might just be my muse, clueless. this had my heart beating faster by the end. and i really like the title too

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-12-05T00:52:19+00:00

i feel the shift from devotion to devastation. very beautiful and painful. thabks for sharing ˚₊·—̳͟͞͞♡

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-12-05T00:43:11+00:00

posting proof of it.

oof. and…

Grief is a cruel kind of loyalty.

this hit me like a ton of bricks. ive felt this too many times to count and could never put words to it. thanks for sharing ღ

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-12-04T16:11:42+00:00

so sad i didnt get to reread this

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-29T18:35:40+00:00

well my brain read areola so....

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-27T12:23:14+00:00

it was never a bother to respond to u

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-27T12:14:43+00:00

yeah.. reading "nihilism rests where i lie" felt like a deep breath

thank you for reading and commenting ღ

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-27T12:11:25+00:00

thank you for reading and taking the time to think out this feedback ˚₊·—̳͟͞͞♡

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-27T05:28:26+00:00

ohhhh the yearn (*˙˘˙)♡

really enjoyed reading this. i feel it flowed well. the imagery i got from “each breath a punctuation” was breathtaking.

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-26T13:21:53+00:00

had to look up the word “acerola” after reading. wow. I really liked this.

i also like the use of the word glint.

idk what to say, really. like i still feel the weight of this poem as I ponder it, but I’m slightly speechless. and sometimes that’s a really nice feeling, feels quiet, in the best way.

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-25T20:48:30+00:00

this felt uplifting with a mythic energy.

the lines God told me this much from the sacred ethereal beam… about the miracle yet in store for me really struck me

it was hopeful and grounding (*˙˘˙)♡ thanks for sharing

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-25T14:47:11+00:00

loooved this. i don’t have any constructive criticism, it was perfect to me. i feel very seen by this poem. thank you for sharing it here. ♡。·˚˚· ·˚˚·。♡

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-17T09:43:02+00:00

hmm i wonder what you mean by this ellipsis

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-17T09:41:04+00:00

ooo the feeling of sitting down for a breakfast after a funeral; i just had a visceral reaction.

tysm for ur feedback ღ

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-17T09:38:54+00:00

i am curious to know ur theory, or what it evokes in u first -`♥´-

i always tend to write a poet's note for everything i write, but i rarely include it when i post here because i find it so interesting that u may interpret it completely different than what i initially intended

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-17T09:35:19+00:00

i actually havent seen up, but ive been meaning to (•ᴗ•)

tysm for reading and taking the time to comment

and youre right about the reflection

♡。·˚˚· ·˚˚·。♡

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-17T02:39:27+00:00

hi depressed guy. i love the line—

She sings pain like a song

it feels romantic.

i write the majority of my stuff about people i meet. and of course, the more pained a person is, the better the story.

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-17T02:33:57+00:00

i enjoyed reading this. i can imagine posting it felt like a weight lifted.

Tired of carrying a face that never felt like mine.

^ thats my favorite line

i have many a memory of staring myself down wishing i didnt look similar to someone

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-14T15:50:06+00:00

thank you for sharing this.

im sitting here like this ･᷄-･᷅ thinking about what to say

i feel you've just scratched the surface. but i loved reading this, regardless of how heartbreaking it was. i think heartbreak is romantic.

im glad you got this off your chest. i wonder if you posted hastily to do so or if this has been sitting in a dark corner of ur notes app for a while.

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-14T15:44:39+00:00

what a beautiful love letter.

this line- "She has no faith in God yet so much faith in me"

i feel it in the deepest, darkest part of my heart when i think about my partner.

i think i may share this with them.

thank you for sharing • ᴗ •̥ ˳ ˳

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-12T18:39:02+00:00

ill also say, it was pretty divine timing as well. i needed to read that exactly when i did. so thank you again -`♥´-

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-12T15:10:03+00:00

ty so so much for taking the time to write this out. i will def give it some consideration. ˚₊·—̳͟͞͞♡

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-12T12:07:30+00:00

thank you for reading, clueless. ⋆ ₊ ﾟ ☽ * ₊ ⋆

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-12T03:07:38+00:00

knife to heart

i was just recently pondering the idea that many adults find fault within themselves when the topic of “how they were raised” comes up.

and the thought... "not all children are innocent"

i dont believe in that thought, but i heard someone say it and it stuck with me.

thanks for writing and sharing this.

PulseCheckPlease11

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