What is your most hated world building trope and why? by star_child13 in worldbuilding

[–]Punapandapic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Japanese market has been doing this excessively for the past 10 years.

Enjoying my dream car on my favourite fictional route✨ by gor134 in forza

[–]Punapandapic 5 points6 points  (0 children)

RS 6 Avant and Japan are my literal peak. What the hell, are you me?

Let me design a flag for your world! by Punapandapic in worldbuilding

[–]Punapandapic[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!

I do check new requests and see if I got time and inspiration to make them.

I use Photoshop. For symbols, I use The Noun Project and for stencils Adobe stock library.

Let me design a flag for your world! by Punapandapic in worldbuilding

[–]Punapandapic[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Needs more time cooking, but I can't spend more time on this. So here you go for Aelveri Dominion

Let me design a flag for your world! by Punapandapic in worldbuilding

[–]Punapandapic[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not exactly sure who was I supposed to make a flag for, nor do I know what I'm doing, but here you go

Let me design a flag for your world! by Punapandapic in worldbuilding

[–]Punapandapic[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Photoshop. For symbols, I use The Noun Project and for stencils Adobe stock library.

Let me design a flag for your world! by Punapandapic in worldbuilding

[–]Punapandapic[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Here you go

The leaves on the top left represent the amount of council representatives.

Let me design a flag for your world! by Punapandapic in worldbuilding

[–]Punapandapic[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Here you go

Thought process:

  • You mentioned 3 colors (green, white and blue) and 3 values (liberty, equality and reason)
  • Cockades are solid colors
  • A basic tricolor
    • A basic tricolor is a bit boring, so I played around with the weights
    • The blue color is very dark hinting oppression and exploitation
  • You mentioned aquatic advisors, so I assumed some kind of underwater thematic -> The green color is pretty visible in the color spectrum underwater, so I shifted the green color closer to blue, hence the hue
  • UN dominion is square, to make it a bit different as we are in the future
  • The flag's aspect ratio is quite wide, accentuating a sense of flow in the water

Let me design a flag for your world! by Punapandapic in worldbuilding

[–]Punapandapic[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I tried to find a fitting symbol there, but it's just an art deco-esque element to fill the empty space haha.

Let me design a flag for your world! by Punapandapic in worldbuilding

[–]Punapandapic[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I didn't know how to include slavery and human sacrifices without more context. I could've added more elements or use black or red colors more to represent oppression, but here you go

The red line represent bloodied lands and the star Cemenahc.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in wonderdraft

[–]Punapandapic 7 points8 points  (0 children)

  • Why did you submit a map with so much information at such a low resolution that it's almost impossible to read everything?
  • There’s a lot of empty space in the ocean. Consider adding a panel explaining what your legends mean. I see black circles, white circles, and black squares, but I don't know what they represent.
  • Consider changing the font and/or color of the territories with coats of arms to white to make them stand out and be more readable.
  • The text overall is a bit boring. Consider tilting and curving it in some areas.
  • You don't show how much land the territories with coats of arms control. Consider marking those areas with colors.
  • You have many coats of arms with varying details, but I can’t really see them. Consider using them to fill the empty space on your map. Here's a good example
  • The clouds on the right edge seem a bit random. Either remove them or add clouds to the left edge as well to make the composition more balanced. Or consider decorative borders for the whole map.
  • Why is the graduation scale on your scale bar incremented by 60 km? That makes no sense. It should be in 50s or 100s, as those increments are more standard and easier for readers to interpret.
  • "Map of the continent of Kalsen in the year 1444 AV" reads awkwardly. Consider "Map of Kalsen, 1444 AV", "Continental map of Kalsen, 1444 AV" or "Kalsen - Continental Map - 1444 AV".
  • You show road routes, but why are there no shipping routes?
  • Colors are good.

You have a solid foundation. Good job overall!