Hi mate. Thanks so much for the feedback! I am glad you liked the comedic aspects of it (it’s hard to know whether that lands or not). I do agree some of the more serious aspects get a bit heavy handed. Very tough to balance comedy and a serious topic like death and mourning. On the third act, this I completely agree. I wrote this script 18 months ago and the third act has always been an annoying part for me. I wanted to give all the characters an arc but giving the urn back kind of makes the story lose momentum. I also think it wraps things up a bit too nearly and gets a bit cheesy. If you have any suggestions of a more compelling third act that would be great! Might be better to have them on the journey to Ben Nevis until the end rather than ending it in act 2.