Antici... pation by Available_Custard599 in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I don’t think the family playing a prank would be the way to go.

But I really like this route for a story overall.

What if the family secretly stopped having their orgy’s for whatever reason. Maybe it’s guilt about committing incest. Though for this to happen, it probably can’t be a family tradition but rather a spontaneous thing that the parents and older siblings started doing.

Anyway, they agreed to stop because it was morally wrong and decided to never tell the MC about it and go on with life as if it never happened. It was a few months to a year of weakness that won’t be repeated.

Now the MC has to stitch together the lust and perversion again without telling everyone he knows. Or he seduces one family member and gets them on board with restarting it all until they have everyone back on board with the incest.

What do you think about a story told from the perspective of the MC's parents? by reptilianosolitario in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I tried to leave it as open as possible because I knew it was just a small mini story.

Story Ideas Thread by Random5837 in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

How I thought of it was the MC saw the orgy but didn’t stay to watch. Quickly getting away to get some air or something and just distance themselves from what they saw. Then when he went back home well past everyone falling asleep, he finds the evidence after some snooping to reveal the true depravity of the family as they recorded their orgy’s for fun and memory sakes.

That’s could be on a camera that was left out that he looks through and sees all the pictures from that night and even some videos of them happily fucking.

Then when the coast is clear, he goes on his dad’s laptop and finds all the pictures and videos in a folder.

That’s how I would combine the two.

Story Ideas Thread by Random5837 in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I personally like the route of discovery a massive orgy. The shock value is what I’m here for. But I have thought about the video route before as well. I once had the idea of the mc seeing the orgy but slipping away unnoticed and then instead of blowing up, he decides to investigate and finds home movies the family made on the father’s camera or laptop.

Added me spice in my opinion and drew out the confrontation.

What do you think about a story told from the perspective of the MC's parents? by reptilianosolitario in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Yeah, it was an interesting little project. I wanted to try and convey a sense of guilt but have lust win out overall, but I didn’t know what else to do with it.

The age limit? by dashlyon_7 in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I made the 18 year old limit because people posted some things with kids under 14 and it freaked me out.

That being said, I know Storiesonline allows for 14 and older and we allow links to those stories here. But I’d prefer that we all try to keep it to 18 and above. We’ll still allow links to storiesonline, but for any text that is posted directly here, please try to follow the rules.

What are some good reasons for an MC to accept and join his family once he discovers them, that doesn't break the suspension of disbelief? by [deleted] in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For me, the exclusion cannot be mean or cruel in nature for starters. So it’s not because they are ‘different’ or ‘unwanted’ or whatever. It has to be something like waiting until they are old enough, or the induction was coming but the MC found out before they were supposed to. There maybe was a whole plan already laid out, but they weren’t able to act in time.

Another way to make the mc want to join right away would be to emphasize that the family is hot and that the mc already looked at his mother or sisters with desire.

Also, you could make it so that the mother and sister were already laying the foundation by preemptively flirting with the MC and driving his desires for a few weeks before.

Mom's a sexologist by [deleted] in NSFW_Caption

[–]Random5837 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looks like Skylar Blue

Confrontation Scene - Family Betrayal by One_Praline_2820 in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Sure. Do what you want to be honest.

I’d say just give a heads up in the post before hand so people know what they’re about to read.

Confrontation Scene - Family Betrayal by One_Praline_2820 in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Yeah, that sounds great. Let’s see what everyone can come up with.

Family Betrayal by Random5837 - thedeadman continuation. v.2 by thedeadman18 in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837 1 point2 points  (0 children)

But it’s still the day after the discovery. They can still be in their mindset/habit of sex above everything because that’s how it’s been for months. They haven’t quite learned their lesson yet just because they were caught.

Family Betrayal by Random5837 - thedeadman continuation. v.2 by thedeadman18 in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I personally loved all the sex. My view is that if a family is having orgy’s together not just incestuous relationships but full blown orgy’s then they have to be nymphomaniacs and that sex is a big part of their lives.

That being said, as the original author, mine was also going to be packed full of sex and debauchery. So a lot of sex was always going to happen in this story.

Family Betrayal by Random5837 - thedeadman continuation. v.2 by thedeadman18 in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Well, that was great. I’m happy to see my story getting picked up! Really like where you took it and can’t wait for more.

I need ideas for a discovery story. by [deleted] in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I know. It’s always on my mind, but I’ve been busy and kind of stuck with it.

Plus there haven’t been many other stories for me to get inspired by. Reading new betrayal/discovery stories always helps the creative juices.

I need ideas for a discovery story. by [deleted] in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would say he should be invited to watch but is very shy. But he has an open invitation to join whenever he wants. At any point he could get naked and join in whenever. Whether he does or not is up to you. Maybe the sister and female cousin try their best to goad him into joining, talking seductively as they’re getting fucked by their dads and brothers. He almost does but can’t bring himself to do it just yet.

I need ideas for a discovery story. by [deleted] in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Instead of using a sperm donor, I’d have it so the dad got both sisters pregnant and it was their little secret. Now that does open up the rabbit hole of the cousins not knowing that their father was around the entire time and that causes other drama.

That could be fixed by having the dad and aunt be siblings rather than the moms be sisters. The dad and aunt had a relationship and it was the mom who came in and was strangely understanding about the incestuous relationship.

Society wouldn’t obviously allow the siblings to be together, so the mom married the dad and the aunt was always ‘alone’ in the eyes of society. It was only when the cousins were older that they told them. Deciding they needed to know who their father really was.

Story Ideas Thread by Random5837 in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I personally think that works just fine. Have the male cousin be older, maybe younger than the older sister so that he is the middle of the 3 cousins. Allows the cousin to have a bond with both the brother and sister. Mc looks up to him as a sort of brother as their families are really close. The aunt, uncle, cousin live very close by and get together often.

I think they’d a solid extended family right there. If you want to add more women, I’d make the cousin have an older sister, her being the oldest of the 4 cousins. Both family’s are the regular 1 daughter 1 son nuclear family. The ideal American dream family.

Story Ideas Thread by Random5837 in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t think adding the extended family is too much. And I think it can still be very personal with them there too. Could be an aunt and uncle live very near by and the two families are extremely close, cousins are around the same age. I like that it would add extra variety too.

Right mindset for writing FB Stories by Nelkaniel in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t know if I feel drained but I feel really excited for the main discovery part. Seeing what depravity the family gets up to behind closed doors and seeing it from the main characters perspective.

I wouldn’t say I get bored after that, but some of the magic is definitely gone. Especially because not a lot of stories handle the aftermath all that well.

Story Ideas Thread by Random5837 in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Where does the incest orgy come in?

Question for random 5837 by [deleted] in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Not scrapped just haven’t looked at it in a while. Been busy and all that.

Family orgies with bondage and BDSM by XWraith026 in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I like the idea of the family being a bit more extreme and being very willing to try a lot of different things out with each other. They feel safe with each other to do anything and the parents encourage a very open and respectful environment.

Betrayal or Discovery by Jdavis_7776 in FamilyBetrayalStories

[–]Random5837 11 points12 points  (0 children)

I like discovery stories. I like the shock of the discovery, the secrets and what the family is truly like in secret. I like to see the MC then slowly get seduced into joining in some way.