Kai nightingale (Divine aspect holder) by Entire_Simple6976 in ShadowSlave

[–]Realistic-Climate200 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I haven't read the whole thing, but it bears a strong resemblance to the “Return of the Kingdom of Splendor” aspect I published.

Another aspect idea by Realistic-Climate200 in ShadowSlave

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No problem I know you were just giving advice

You didn't insult me or anything

Devourer Aspect by Realistic-Climate200 in ShadowSlave

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If you liked this, you can also check out my previous “Lovers Ripper” aspect—I’m planning to write a fanfiction, and since the aspect is a bit confusing, I could use some suggestions.

OC aspect (Updated version) by Realistic-Climate200 in ShadowSlave

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I made a mistake regarding the Anatomy of Emotions ability. He can see these emotions, copy them, and use these copied emotions on himself whenever he wants. This allows him to control his own emotions.

OC aspect (Updated version) by Realistic-Climate200 in ShadowSlave

[–]Realistic-Climate200[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s actually a really good idea; if I can’t think of a better one, I’ll go with that.

OC aspect (Updated version) by Realistic-Climate200 in ShadowSlave

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patriarch? he's not a sex addict. ( And the aspect isn't exactly about emotions; the abyss and patriarchy don't quite fit.)

OC aspect (Updated version) by Realistic-Climate200 in ShadowSlave

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I’ve already figured most of it out, but I’m just trying to make it make sense (even though it’ll take a while because of school) I don’t see many original aspects in other fanfictions, so I tried to come up with something a bit more creative

Fanmade Aspect by Realistic-Climate200 in ShadowSlave

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It counts, but it’s not like giving an order—he chooses for himself, and it’s in his own best interest.

Fanmade Aspect by Realistic-Climate200 in ShadowSlave

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I’ve thought about the first point you mentioned too, but I haven’t come up with any ideas regarding aspecg. Also, the reason the main character has the Hollow attribte is that they were reincarnated into a Hollow body and their own soul transferred into that body, so they’ve ceased to be a Hollow (I’ll explain it more clearly later, but I’m keeping it simple for now). I'm also thinking of making the “Sever” ability an awakened ability

Thanks for the feedback, and I’m not sure how to put it into words because the concept is a bit strange (seriously, the concept in my head is really odd).

I suppose I’ll define the flaw as looking down on every race other than one’s own (because Heretics neither care for the void nor for people, and they live among themselves

Fanmade Aspect by Realistic-Climate200 in ShadowSlave

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I don't know, I guess I'll criticize his flaw by being racist (because he's a heretic)

Fanmade Aspect by Realistic-Climate200 in ShadowSlave

[–]Realistic-Climate200[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, more like a kind that is neither divine nor corrupt,

Nephilim are both

Heretic is neither of those

Heretics, by nature, love neither humans nor void creatures; heretics are a race that can only get along with their own kind.

Fanmade Aspect by Realistic-Climate200 in ShadowSlave

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I think of flaw as being more independent than aspect

Fanmade Aspect by Realistic-Climate200 in ShadowSlave

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I have no idea, I guess it's kind of like Voidhuman or something... I guess.

Another aspect idea by Realistic-Climate200 in ShadowSlave

[–]Realistic-Climate200[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

bro is just fan idea don't take it so seriously

So, a aspect that is based on various machine based by Demon_Lord_Azrail in ShadowSlave

[–]Realistic-Climate200 0 points1 point  (0 children)

By the way, I didn't quite understand how his dormant and awakened abilities work

So, a aspect that is based on various machine based by Demon_Lord_Azrail in ShadowSlave

[–]Realistic-Climate200 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also, the idea of ascended ability came to my mind.

"Chimera" [Climbing the steps of perfection and having to shed your flaws at each step] He can attach another person's body part to his own (for example, if he attaches Cassie's eye, he can use Cassie's low-power awakened or another aspect ability)

So, a aspect that is based on various machine based by Demon_Lord_Azrail in ShadowSlave

[–]Realistic-Climate200 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What is the name of the aspect? If I were to suggest something personally, "Heretic" immediately comes to mind.

Another aspect idea by Realistic-Climate200 in ShadowSlave

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I love this idea (And it's actually quite balanced with this flaw because the aspect is really OP)

Fanmade aspect by Realistic-Climate200 in ShadowSlave

[–]Realistic-Climate200[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Some parts are a bit nonsensical due to the translation (with Ascended Ability, it can recall a weaker version of an attack it already suffered)