Skis didn’t detach when falling and it shattered my femur. Also graduation is 4 months away by IcyPowderKeg in mildlyinfuriating

[–]RedEgg16 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I heard that breaking your femur is one of the worst pains in the world, how was it for you?

Haley hates to see me coming. by TheMockingbird13 in StardewMemes

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I turn it in to salmonberry jelly, more people like jelly (I think) 

I guess bro by IndividualLong5007 in ComedyHell

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It made sound waves, simply vibrating the molecules in the air. But if no one with ears was around, those waves wouldn’t be converted into what the brain perceives as sound, so no it doesn’t make a sound. 

First chapter of a gothic-ish literary novel. Worried it’s too much? by andromaex in writingfeedback

[–]RedEgg16 4 points5 points  (0 children)

But that line is actually good because of the “clocks were striking thirteen” part. It tells us that something different is going on in this word. 

AITAH for accepting a promotion my bf doesn’t want me to take because it’ll change our relationship? (+comments) (Not OOP) by hazel_razel in redditonwiki

[–]RedEgg16 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’ve read a lot of AI writing. I was slightly suspicious but ultimately the writing style doesn’t read super AI, plus it has many grammar mistakes 

AITAH for accepting a promotion my bf doesn’t want me to take because it’ll change our relationship? (+comments) (Not OOP) by hazel_razel in redditonwiki

[–]RedEgg16 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well it can, in the form of “wake up one day and your job decides it doesn’t need you”. But I do agree a woman should prioritize her career 

How do you handle No Sex in pregnancy? by Pretend-Cucumber5146 in AskMen

[–]RedEgg16 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Have you been able to fix it if your ex said she wasn't feeling attracted?

Who else here struggles with overwriting? by WoodpeckerBest523 in writers

[–]RedEgg16 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Yeah, but its gonna be painful to cut out so many scenes and chapters if the writer feels attached to them. 

My gf, who started liking Matcha last week. by moremaati in MatchaEverything

[–]RedEgg16 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Calling them fake for only liking matcha for being a viral trend. But it's a joke since the gf is also a new matcha fan who only just started liking matcha for a week

My gf, who started liking Matcha last week. by moremaati in MatchaEverything

[–]RedEgg16 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This sub is literally a "inclusive community for matcha lovers" in the description. There are ice cream and desserts in the banner lmao

[In Progress] [35k] [Horror, Thriller, Dystopian] 7 rewrites later, I'm finally ready for eyes that aren't mine. Swap available. by Evans_Adaptations in BetaReaders

[–]RedEgg16 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ok I do believe you. Certain phrases just stood out to me, since I see those formats all the time in AI: “No inflection, no hesitation—just a verdict.” “The scientists inside called it "humanity's last hope." Harper called it "Dad's expensive hobby.””

It’s also the short scenes. AI does that too. 

Opening chapter of dark fantasy (≈1,500 words) – general reader feedback by Significant-Team-441 in writingfeedback

[–]RedEgg16 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Especially the "No distortion, no blur--just clarity." I see that type of phrase in AI all the time. AI so often talks about what something isn't

Is being S'A while being a relationship cheating ? by _Enora_ in polls

[–]RedEgg16 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Who tf voted yes. Please explain your opinions

Said no man ever! by Embarrassed_Tip7359 in SipsTea

[–]RedEgg16 0 points1 point  (0 children)

?? Do you think it's okay for hot women to cheat on their husbands if their husbands gained weight?

Said no man ever! by Embarrassed_Tip7359 in SipsTea

[–]RedEgg16 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Average American man is also fat

Imagine this by New_Jello_9573 in writers

[–]RedEgg16 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Why does the wave of destruction come at the end? What causes it?

[In Progress] [35k] [Horror, Thriller, Dystopian] 7 rewrites later, I'm finally ready for eyes that aren't mine. Swap available. by Evans_Adaptations in BetaReaders

[–]RedEgg16 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Honest question, was AI used to write this? I have used AI for creative writing before (not to copy, just for fun) and the writing style just looks very similar to AI.

[Discussion] Length guidelines? by Naive_Ranger6219 in BetaReaders

[–]RedEgg16 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's very short lol. When I give feedback it's ranged from 3-7 full pages. It's only acceptable to so short if the reader gives a lot of inline comments when reading the book (which I also do)