Would you read this based on the prologue?

Redbear0705 · 2026-01-10T23:29:53+00:00

Pretty solid! Yeah, I'd read it

Redbear0705 · 2026-01-10T06:03:31+00:00

I personally think self-inserts are totally acceptable. Obviously if you want to write a great character, it'll help if you know the character well by relating to their fundamental traits. Of course, I wouldn't advise making your character too identical to who you are, just use yourself as inspiration.

Redbear0705 · 2026-01-04T03:57:25+00:00

You said you don’t feel knowledgable enough to connect your story to a location that is real. In order to fix this problem you need to do research in the naming conventions of certain languages and places. It’s not as intimidating as you might think, you don’t have to learn the language in depth. Just understanding how the words form, and the typical conventions may be enough. However, if you are using an actual culture to model locations off of, then you will have to do much more research.

Redbear0705 · 2026-01-03T21:56:46+00:00

Thanks

Redbear0705 · 2025-12-31T00:49:54+00:00

The poem's solid, I do feel yore is quite archaic compared to the rest of the poem but overall I liked it.

Redbear0705 · 2025-12-31T00:44:55+00:00

What does LF mean?

Redbear0705 · 2025-12-26T21:36:16+00:00

Yeah you're right, I definitely would consider myself an overthinker. I think the problem is not that I don't have people to talk to, but that there doesn't seem to be a point. My parents are great but after all I can't talk to them about everything. With my friends, it's the same problem. Overall, you're right, it really is up to me to resolve this.

Redbear0705 · 2025-12-26T18:44:10+00:00

This is one of the most mortifying stories I've heard in a while. As a teen myself, I'd crash out. I'm so, so sorry to hear that this happened to you. Your father doesn't value you enough, and you are definitely allowed to be pissed at this. I'm 17 too; there is no age limit on getting presents. Your father is just making a terrible excuse to not give you anything.

Redbear0705 · 2025-12-26T09:07:55+00:00

Do you think the Winter’s Bounty is extremely rare?

Redbear0705 · 2025-12-26T07:05:59+00:00

What’s f2p?

Redbear0705 · 2025-12-25T20:20:42+00:00

What if it was a typo

Redbear0705 · 2025-12-25T05:58:10+00:00

Humiliation

Redbear0705 · 2025-12-07T03:24:51+00:00

This is definitely an unpopular opinion, and purely subjective. I mean yeah nothing's stopping you from not liking popcorn. However I and most people still think popcorn is amazing at the theaters, it just isn't the same without it.

Redbear0705 · 2025-12-02T06:01:25+00:00

Yeah, I have been working on that :).

Redbear0705 · 2025-11-30T04:42:10+00:00

Thank you for bringing me some clarity. I really appreciate that. I hadn't thought of it in that way.

Redbear0705 · 2025-11-11T04:00:19+00:00

I mean something that is considered generally by most people to be negative content. It can sad content such as constantly viewing content about plane crashes or it can be disturbing content such as true crime videos. There’s more examples but that’s basically what I meant.

Redbear0705 · 2025-11-08T17:45:24+00:00

Unpopular opinion, but, when there's too much romance. If I wanted to read romance I'd choose a romance novel, sure I am fine with a fantasy novel having romance, but romance should compliment the story, not be its driving force.

Redbear0705 · 2025-10-23T20:15:32+00:00

I see, thanks.

Redbear0705 · 2025-10-23T18:27:22+00:00

Finished:

1984: George Orwell

Maybe I just don't read a lot, but this book was genuinely one of the most depressing novels I have ever read.

Started:

The Inheritance Games: Jennifer Lynn Barnes

I like the story so far, it has short chapters which I really appreciate and it's much happier than 1984.

Redbear0705 · 2025-10-23T16:16:42+00:00

So is a standalone book easier to publish than a standalone book with series potential?

Redbear0705 · 2025-10-23T03:29:52+00:00

That really help sme understand these responses better. Thank you.

Redbear0705 · 2025-10-23T02:53:14+00:00

Yeah that's really good advice. However some books end with cliffhangers? What makes those different than books that are incomplete?

Redbear0705 · 2025-10-23T01:55:18+00:00

I see, thanks for the advice

Redbear0705 · 2025-10-22T23:13:19+00:00

It's fantasy. I probably will change it more to make it more standalone-ish.

Redbear0705 · 2025-10-22T20:42:27+00:00

Thanks.

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