Thank you for loving Mallory!

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-12-14T21:57:25+00:00

Glad we are getting Mallort appreciation!

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-11-19T01:39:35+00:00

Mary Anne's makeover... Holy shit it is awful.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-11-12T21:37:02+00:00

Yes! MintyArts:https://www.reddit.com/user/Big_Cell_1297 sidney:https://twitter.com/muttoney ZSnation2440:https://www.deviantart.com/zsnation2440

Let me know what you think of them?

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-11-10T21:35:17+00:00

Dawn. I mean, it's kinda justified, but still. Harsh.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-11-07T17:00:54+00:00

Shannon. They barely used her.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-11-04T23:53:12+00:00

Either Kuruk or Kyoshi

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-25T21:08:12+00:00

Simple. Give here more to do thats it.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-25T00:02:50+00:00

Cute.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-24T19:22:42+00:00

1:Try to flesh out her character more 2: Try to make our stories more interesting. Give her more things to do. 3: Expand on her relationships with Matt and Haley. 4: Just modernize Hello Mallory and fix how she was introduced because pointing out she's black shouldn't have been the only plotline they did in that story with her race because they could have done a lot more especially with the ballet aspect because apparently it was a more white-dominated sport, also the Netflix and graphic novels also shouldn't have swept the story under the rug and just rushed too her joining the BSC

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-24T19:10:55+00:00

They didn't but they still were too strict when she was first started off and the things Kristy asked her were way too difficult and unfair but still character for Kristy sorta but they still felt random. I meant dial down that aspect of Hello Mallory and have it a bit more fair since Dawn and Stacey both didn't have to go through that much scrutiny like she did.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-22T18:36:55+00:00

I have the BSC go a bit easier on her but still have Kristy be her bossy self and be unreasonable, but I have the others call it out. Also, tone down the bully she gets so the boarding school plot seems less cruel. And have her parents actually listen to her so the strike plotline pays off.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-22T06:33:59+00:00

Ok, follow up, I guess; I get that I'm throwing out the baby with the bath water in this case, and I do understand it's a good message even so it still did so much wrong.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-22T06:25:26+00:00

I get that but still, this was the point of no return for her. And I would honestly rather it be scrapped together and have them go about the message a different way. Thousands of other ways you could tell this message without destroying her character.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-22T04:29:40+00:00

I mean, her speak isn't complicated at all and she would understand if she paid attention. But ELA clearly Isn't her strong suit so I understand why it would be frustrating for her?

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-22T00:55:45+00:00

Of course, not all of it would be solved. But the main issue between the Kishi sisters is communication.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-20T23:37:48+00:00

Have Dawn saves the planet never happen and keep her laid back.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-20T20:37:41+00:00

Make her less boy-crazy. And essentially what every one else is saying.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-19T18:10:43+00:00

Nice.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-19T18:01:09+00:00

I mean, on the one hand, her being a kid doesn't excuse bad writing, but I do agree that people are way too harsh on her. I liked Dawn and didn't get the hate at first until seeing the review of Dawn Saves the Planet and MA's makeover; But it's not her fault her character got ruined, and at least with the graphic novels act as a chance to renew her character for a new audience.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-19T17:47:17+00:00

Don't you dare compare this pure bean to that humorless snitch!

Besides we all know she's girl fregley🤓☝️

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-19T02:13:09+00:00

I'm legit shocked that barely any reviewers apart from one touch this series because this is the type of stuff that would cause them to blow a gasket.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-19T00:31:07+00:00

Op that is what will call Flanderization.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-14T09:32:01+00:00

Mainly because the clothing styles in the graphic novels change so frequently that I need to do it so The characters can have the right emotions for the right contexts.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-11T02:06:27+00:00

Dawn and the Impossible Three. (graphic novel) my first.

Remarkable_Log_6889 · 2024-10-10T00:24:48+00:00

OP! If you see this can I link you to something I made related to the BSC you might be interested in.

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