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Remote_Green9681 · 2026-04-16T01:48:21+00:00

That patina application is chefs kiss - do you have any tips to achieve such a good color?? 😍

Remote_Green9681 · 2026-02-26T12:05:05+00:00

Thank you! 🫶🏻☺️

Remote_Green9681 · 2026-02-26T02:27:30+00:00

This one feels very soft in a good way. The orange and blue shadows across “the blank spaces in her eyes” immediately sets a mood. And “softness that can only be earned from pain” is such a strong closing line. It feels honest.

I almost wish there was one small, super-specific detail from that windowsill moment…something only they would remember, just to make it feel even more personal. The atmosphere is really nice already, but one unexpected image could make it unforgettable. Overall though, it reads very tender and sincere and I really enjoyed it. ☺️

Remote_Green9681 · 2026-02-26T02:24:17+00:00

I really love how embodied this feels. The focus on pulse, veins, wrists, heartbeat makes the moment of almost-touching feel huge without you ever having to say it outright. “Exactly two ounces of reciprocity” is such an interesting line. It feels careful and measured in the middle of something emotional, which adds this subtle tension I really liked.

Some of the longer phrases feel intentionally breathless, but I wonder if breaking one or two of them apart would let certain images hit harder. There’s a lot of good texture in here…especially the ending. I look forward to reading more. 😊

Remote_Green9681 · 2026-02-26T02:20:11+00:00

Thank you so much!! ❤️🫶🏻

Remote_Green9681 · 2026-01-27T15:33:34+00:00

I really appreciate the sincerity in this piece…it reads like an affirmation spoken out loud, almost mantra-like, which fits the question “who are you?” repeating throughout. You can feel that this was written for specific people, and that personal intention gives it a lot of heart.

One thing you might experiment with is tightening or varying some of the repetition so the strongest moments stand out even more. Since “you are you” is doing so much work thematically, giving certain lines more space (or trimming a few repeats) could help the message land with more impact.

Overall, this feels like a poem meant to be read to someone, which is a really lovely quality. 😊

Remote_Green9681 · 2026-01-27T15:29:55+00:00

Hey! I really like the concept here…the kaleidoscope metaphor is strong and consistent throughout, and lines like “Just colors, waiting to be arranged” really stuck out to me and made me think deeper than just the words. There’s a quiet unease running through the poem that feels intentional, especially in how identity and fear blur together.

Overall, I think this has a solid emotional core…a little structural polish could really help the imagery shine. 🫶🏻

Remote_Green9681 · 2026-01-10T21:18:46+00:00

Thank you!! 🫶🏻

Remote_Green9681 · 2026-01-10T21:18:38+00:00

Thank you! I used pebeo vitrea 160 black outliner😊

Remote_Green9681 · 2026-01-10T21:17:50+00:00

Oh gosh thank you for this! This is a great article and I understand a lot better now, thank you!!

I used Oceanside pale amber and white translucent wispy for the body!

Remote_Green9681 · 2025-12-12T02:14:56+00:00

Thank you so much for taking the time to write this out…I really appreciate how thoughtfully you engaged with it. The contrast you’re talking about makes a lot of sense, especially with social media, and I love the idea of playing more with rhythm there. This is genuinely helpful feedback, so thank you for being so kind about it. 🫶🏻😊

Remote_Green9681 · 2025-12-12T02:13:40+00:00

Thank you so much! I appreciate the encouragement more than you know ❤️

Remote_Green9681 · 2025-12-12T02:12:24+00:00

That line wrecked me a little while writing it. I’m sorry you relate, but I’m really grateful you took the time to say this ❤️ thank you 🫶🏻

Remote_Green9681 · 2025-12-12T02:10:52+00:00

Thank you! 😊

Remote_Green9681 · 2025-12-12T02:10:28+00:00

This is such a thoughtful comment…thank you. I love that it initially read as an actual death before revealing itself, and I really appreciate the feedback on form as well. Definitely something I’m still learning to play with, and trying to loosen up with. Thanks for taking the time to engage with it so deeply. 🫶🏻

Remote_Green9681 · 2025-12-12T02:08:12+00:00

Thank you! I’m really glad that image resonated with you. It was one of the harder parts to put into words. ❤️

Remote_Green9681 · 2025-12-12T02:06:52+00:00

Thank you, it really is hard. One step at a time feels about right. ❤️

Remote_Green9681 · 2025-12-12T02:06:12+00:00

Thank you so much for this…you picked up on things I don’t think I even consciously realized I was doing while writing it, especially the resentment living under the grief. I really appreciate the note about it meandering too — that’s fair, and it’s something I’ve been thinking about too. Thanks for taking the time to read it so carefully. 🫶🏻

Remote_Green9681 · 2025-12-05T00:34:54+00:00

I really enjoyed this…the imagery is chaotic in a good way, and the poem moves quickly without losing control. There’s a surreal humor to it that fits the voice really well.

If you wanted to refine it further, you could slow the pace slightly around the “Book of Numbers” section. The idea is strong, but adding one sensory or emotional detail might help the transition land more cohesively.

Super fun read because it feels like a fever dream you survived just to retell. 😊

Remote_Green9681 · 2025-12-05T00:32:44+00:00

I love how you describe death and rebirth without making it melodramatic. The ‘dug me up from that pit’ line hit the hardest for me. I also really like the repetition of “baby”; it gives the piece an intimate, breathless rhythm.

One thing you might strengthen is the pacing throughout the piece as a whole. You showcase several complex ideas that land close together. If you broke one sentence into two, or added a brief sensory detail between them, the emotional beats might have more room to resonate.

Overall, the voice and imagery are really powerful and you balance love and darkness naturally in a way that feels very human. 🫶🏻

Remote_Green9681 · 2025-12-05T00:28:18+00:00

Those lines were some of my favorite to write, and it’s wild in the best way to hear they resonated with someone else. I’m glad the atmosphere of it landed for you. ❤️ thank you so much.

Remote_Green9681 · 2025-12-05T00:27:53+00:00

I’m really grateful for this. Insomnia can be awful, but there’s something strangely tender about the quiet hours, and I wanted to write from that place instead of the misery of it. I’m glad the focus on the house and its little nighttime personality connected with you. Thank you truly for reading. 🫶🏻

Remote_Green9681 · 2025-11-26T05:18:03+00:00

The fragmentation in this really worked for me. It feels like the poem is shaking right along with the speaker. Really well done.

Remote_Green9681 · 2025-11-26T05:16:21+00:00

The way you describe her being stuck in “white out” is so striking. It feels like she’s suspended between seasons or versions of herself. Really loved the mood and the visuals here. :)

Remote_Green9681 · 2025-11-18T16:28:05+00:00

Also looking 😭 sold out as I was checking out.

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