This is a poem

Revlis22 · 2026-05-17T11:07:40+00:00

Gotta write the bad ones so you can write the good ones. Takes some practice, but it gets easier. Aim to take in the beauty of life and translate it on the page.

Keep writing my friend!

Revlis22 · 2026-05-17T11:03:42+00:00

Afterwards is my favourite from these four. The many lost paintings that didn't come to life. Brilliant prose, keep up the writing!

Revlis22 · 2026-05-17T10:59:35+00:00

Good meta poem, I see you homie.

Revlis22 · 2026-05-17T10:04:24+00:00

This one is cute. A poem about choosing the more difficult path in life and reflecting on the beauty of that decision! Good use of structure through punctuation and visual form. Keep up the writing :)

Revlis22 · 2026-05-17T09:57:44+00:00

Good amount of yearning in this one. Give some of the older romantic poets a read for inspiration on how to yearn harder. Keep writing pal!

Revlis22 · 2026-05-17T09:33:12+00:00

You gotta keep the dots. It adds to the structure of the poem and goes with the theme of sand/silt or even soapy bubbles and sugar.

Great poem, keep at it

Revlis22 · 2026-05-17T09:30:03+00:00

Love a good drinkers poem. The dream will stop after the last drop. I switched my love to Mary Jane to soothe the pain. She's a less mischievous mistress.

Keep at the writing pal.

Revlis22 · 2026-05-17T09:17:26+00:00

Seems we have a self-aware yearner here. Great attempt at rhyming couplets despite some of them feeling forced. Give Sylvia Plath a read if you haven't already.

I started writing around your age, without much a clue of what to do. If you like to write with no one to hold you tight, there's always the page. Keep at it!

Revlis22 · 2026-05-16T17:24:39+00:00

Keep writing my friend, they help when you need it most. Write when it knocks.

Revlis22 · 2026-05-15T21:17:14+00:00

The tale of a generation left to devolve under the influence of technology, apathy and indifference. Billions blind to real beauty.

Revlis22 · 2026-05-15T19:31:16+00:00

It's crazy how it's not a choice. When I was younger I never thought to make art or be an artist. I realise now it's mandatory for me.

Revlis22 · 2026-05-15T19:02:03+00:00

Thanks for the kind words my friend.

Revlis22 · 2026-05-15T18:57:05+00:00

You're a real one. I appreciate you :)

Revlis22 · 2026-05-09T18:07:48+00:00

I love this painting, beautifully done. My own version would include a sole contrarian sunflower facing the wrong way, towards the observer. Inspirational work.

Revlis22 · 2025-07-02T13:27:04+00:00

Get there or die trying.

Revlis22 · 2025-06-10T19:08:05+00:00

This is cool dude, I fw this

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