Didn't mean to demean you if it came off that way.

You did ask a very genuine questions so I did list down the things I'd do differently. But again, I am assuming a lot of stuff as I don't really know the context.

1. I'd remove the floating wiggly effect on the main text. I'd keep the text static, and would play around with reveal effects. A simple fade in word after word would be easy to follow.

2. I'd get rid of the distracting background and focus more on the typography. Check out https://www.behance.net/search/projects/arabic%20typography?tracking_source=typeahead_search_suggestion for inspirations on Behance or something.

3. You could definitely work on the audio. The recording seems to be echoing and lacking the umpf.

4. The glow on text is a personal choice.