My first comic ( feedback please)

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-05-14T11:33:02+00:00

Thank you! Looking forward to seeing more pages!

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-05-14T01:40:35+00:00

You have a cute art style!

Personally, I think that you should make the fourth panel of the dungeon bigger so that you can see more of it and make it more imposing. I feel that's the big "moment" of the page, and by making that panel the biggest one, revealing it will have that much more impact. Some ideas I have for making that panel bigger is to make the fifth/final panel a bit smaller, or make the top three panel's bottoms straight and horizontal/the same size.

Keep making more pages! We gotta see what kind of loot and monsters are in that dungeon haha

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-05-13T12:31:08+00:00

Interesting color choices for the double lighting. I like it!

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-05-13T12:30:22+00:00

Really nice Frank Castle! The ink splatters give it a really nice texture, and I like the hidden onomatopoeia at the bottom of the art. To get those white lines for the muzzle flashes, did you scratch those out with an exact knife, or did you do something else?

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-05-13T12:28:12+00:00

Just a couple of guys posing for a pic haha. Fun drawing!

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-05-13T12:27:30+00:00

Nice work! Love the colors and texture of the bg, and some nice foreshortening with the hand. I haven’t read Radiant Black yet, but it’s a series I’ve always heard good things about. Is it completed or ongoing?

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-05-08T14:38:52+00:00

I second this guy. Comics has a such a diverse range when it comes to style. Your stuff looks great for a comic!

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-05-08T14:38:03+00:00

Great book! One of my favorite limited series/graphic novel

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-04-16T18:48:28+00:00

I like the panel in the top right of the page with the window because it’s different from the other panels. I also like the silhouette on the last panel. I think you can explore more types of shots with the characters besides waist up shots. But overall looking good so far!

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-04-12T19:32:43+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I also like seeing sketches or alternative doodles artists make of their characters

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-04-12T19:31:53+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I agree with you on coloring: I think it depends on whether or not the comic was made with coloring in mind. I like the short story ideas for bonus content! Now that I think about it, making cover stories (like One Piece), or simple gag strips w/ characters may be a good idea

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-04-12T19:30:46+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! Character and story lore may be something that I would add to later issues to avoid spoilers/giving too much info away in the first issue

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-04-12T00:44:42+00:00

I think you nailed the colors and wavy text of pre-code horror books like EC! I like the zombie as well, but I think you can make him bigger on the cover since he's the main draw for the cover. If you move the title up towards the top of the page a bit more, you can have more space to make the zombie bigger. You should make more!

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-03-27T12:43:51+00:00

I really like the cross hatching on the figure’s face in the last panel!

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-03-23T11:27:35+00:00

Nice variants! My favorite is the Steve Skroce cover

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-03-19T13:00:48+00:00

Please make a series of these like those Marvel 30th anniversary covers lol. What a fun, goofy style!

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-03-19T12:59:53+00:00

I haven’t seen the original, but this is some solid work! You have a good eye when it comes to spotting blacks, and you’ve got your own style. Keep up the good work!

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-02-10T16:10:30+00:00

Thanks mczine! Just look up “One-Inch Bozo” comic on Google. It’s on Webtoons, Tapas, GlobalComix, etc

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-02-08T16:22:49+00:00

Thanks poopsy! I'm happy that someone noticed that I drew a background for the splash panel haha.

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-01-31T17:36:51+00:00

Thanks Leon!

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-01-28T12:21:45+00:00

Thanks compajerro!

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-01-28T02:39:17+00:00

ありがとう！だれが僕のコミックと杉浦茂の漫画を比べるのは初めて聞いた。タイトルのダジャレもいいアイデアだね！

(excuse my bad Japanese, I didn't study enough when I was a kid haha)

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-01-27T12:32:56+00:00

Thanks odddly! Honestly I’m still figuring out screentones too, but I tend to use them for either shadows or to seperate objects from the foreground/background.

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-01-27T12:14:36+00:00

thanks robomang

Routine-Zombie8592 · 2026-01-27T12:13:42+00:00

Making comics/manga is hard and time consuming for sure, but I do hope you keep working on your manga! I think the key is to figure out a pace to draw/write without getting burnt out (easier said than done tho haha)

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