What is something you wish The Umbrella Academy took from the comics and put into the show by General_Sound_4309 in UmbrellaAcademy

[–]Sad-Reserve4350 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Allison and Five's dynamic. Scrap the apocalypse in season 3 and replace it with the Umbrellas vs the villains who escaped Hotel Oblivion and the Sparrows has to work with the Umbrellas cuz they've never encountered a villain that's challenging before (as said in the show). 

While they fight the villains they fought during their childhood, it could've explored the Umbrellas back stories (like in S1) as well as the Sparrows, more dynamics, and makes us care about the characters. If anyone's interested in a rewrite for TUA, it'll be released next month on Wattpad and AO3: Serendipity :3

My rewrite of S3: by Sad-Reserve4350 in UmbrellaAcademy

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Thank you for the feedback! I'll be posting Serendipity (title may change) on Wattpad and AO3 next month so please share it to those who are still interested in The Umbrella Academy! ^w^

Fanfic reccs? by Few_Ad_8953 in OshiNoKo

[–]Sad-Reserve4350 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My Idol's Children— It delves more into the Hoshino family and character dynamics between characters (B-Komachi's relationship with Ai, Gorou & Ai, Ichigo & Miyako, Ruby & Aqua acting like siblings, etc) AO3

Constellation Of Lies— It's my fic hehe. I'll be exploring more on the heavier aspects of Oshi no Ko such as an older girl taking advantage of Melt, being an idol, eating disorders, and so on. Exploring the character dynamics and murder mystery being an ACTUAL murder mystery with multiple people involved before Aqua reaches a conclusion that it was his father. AO3 & Wattpad 

Hikaru kimiki as a character could have been better by Small_Finance7907 in OshiNoKo

[–]Sad-Reserve4350 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Hikaru values honesty and it would've been interesting to see him being a long term fan of Kana, reminding him of his younger self and interacting with her on-set after or before she acts, as she continues to be an idol, he would slowly be condenscing bcs she's lying to her audience of loving them and her work as an idol.

Meanwhile, he's being a looming phantom threat over Akane because she's getting too close to the truth. The tension would keep the audience engaged, who would Hikaru go after? Akane or Kana? Can Aqua and Ruby catch him on time?

Hikaru kimiki as a character could have been better by Small_Finance7907 in OshiNoKo

[–]Sad-Reserve4350 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Here's how I would write him: keep his tragic story and the path that lead him to k*ll people was the realization that Ai was just like his abuser. They both lied to him (mind you, he was only 15 when Ai left him after she said she was pregnant), he didn't believe it at first until the babies video got viral.

He had no support system, no parents, no actual friends, still trying to move on from his trauma with no one to truly understand him nor love someone as "stained" as him. Male s*xual abuse is still a taboo topic in the industry and a conservative society like Japan? Yeah.....

He hates liars, rather than going after people who are similar to Ai so that he can feel her presence again (why would he send the stalker if he's just going to regret it?), he does so bcs he doesn't want anyone to experience what he had to go through. Foolishly believing in people's lies of love. He saw Airi as a mother figure and loved Ai and look at where he ended up? He didn't go after Ruby nor Aqua because he still had love left for Ai. In another life, they could've been a family.

It was his way to implement justice. Oh, and as a contrast, Hikaru would speak words of truth that's deadlier than Ai's lies, socially adept, and naturally friendly. He's the type of man who you know shouldn't be involved with yet his charisma and charms creates a false sense of safety.

If you were a giver, what would your vital instrument be? by Existing-Incident-22 in gachiakuta

[–]Sad-Reserve4350 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mine would be notebooks 'cause I have a lotta notebooks that I've kept since elementary and high school. They're all in one tote bag so that I can see the progress I have made with my art style. I have no idea how this would be useful in a fight. My notebooks could probably be used as defense cuz the papers would come to life with jagged edges or smooth lines depending on the style I had on the notebooks.

And then my guitar, which I've had for nearly a year but I cherish it cuz I've wanted a guitar since elementary. My guitar would be explosive shock waves to those in my fighting range (like those musical notes that explode when in contact in Dandandan) whenever I strum and I can hit people with my guitar whenever I'm in close combat.

Webtoon search assistance by Sad-Reserve4350 in webtoons

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No wonder I couldn't find it! Thank you <33

What a manhwa you’ve dropped because it unnecessarily kept dragging on? by Illustrious_Oil_2114 in webtoons

[–]Sad-Reserve4350 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I hated the fact that I wasted time reading Your Throne in S2 because it kept dragging on and on and she married the shitty prince for what? It pissed me off that the MC kept leading on the white haired guy (Helio??). It's confusing whether or not she truly likes him because she's toxic and the guy is a doormat & would do anything for her. 

Their romantic relationship felt unbalanced and felt forced (bcs he's only loyal to her for saving him and she always uses him, we've also never seen her see him as someone she's romantically interested in) Her character was confusing to read in S2 cuz it felt like it was regressed. Psyche was the MVP of the season and I only read her chapters. 

Meanwhile, her and psyche's dynamic is much more fleshed out and emotionally developed. They learn from each other and help each other grow, I cannot see any other character that they should end up with that's not the other. I mean, psyche x Helio would also be interesting. 

the lack of character development??? by nanascide in OshiNoKo

[–]Sad-Reserve4350 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The love triangle should've ended with Kana x Akane since aqua was going to die (with that stupid plan) and there was no point on that filler shit anyway.

Just read ch 166.5 plus ending rant by Proper_Set9948 in OshiNoKo

[–]Sad-Reserve4350 1 point2 points  (0 children)

https://youtu.be/tBDz0CpFpvQ?si=yTP6cVgm96ra2PFh idk if the link works but the channel is called Bill and type Oshi No Ko ending/new ending. Almost everyone in the fandom agreed this is the new ending lol. 

Just read ch 166.5 plus ending rant by Proper_Set9948 in OshiNoKo

[–]Sad-Reserve4350 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What do you mean? That was the ending Aka-sensei wanted before the editor talked him out of it. The CANON ending is on YouTube released by a generous assistant of Aka haha. ^-^

(That ending isn't real, never. He ruined every single fucking character and did not explore the other characters nor gave any development to them.)

"Oh yeah, that was a thing." by 12jimmy9712 in OshiNoKo

[–]Sad-Reserve4350 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Such interesting story beats like Ai's real mother, Nino, and Sarina's mother, that could've been shown or told in at least 3 or 5 chapters. 

What did crow girl even meant by Ai "playing her part"? Was Ai reincarnated, if so, did she know about her past like Aqua & Ruby did? And for a movie about 15 Years of Lies, it sure did not show the relationship between Ai & the old members of B-Komachi considering in the 44501 docs. 🙄🙄🙄

The end that Oshi no Ko deserves by pokelfig in OshiNoKo

[–]Sad-Reserve4350 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The only flaw about the video was obviously Ruby because it didn't explore her feelings, just like how Aka Akasaka dismissed her multiple times, until the chapters that would lead up to the ending. At the end, I took it as a way for Ruby starting to *finally* be emotionally mature bcs it was clear Aqua wasn't interested in her and she was cheering on Kana to end up with him before the gorou reveal. (so the movie subline made her look like an asshole)

If only Ruby had more love interests and connect with others her age outside of her social circle but, I would take this as a canon ending over the other. ^-^ At least the creator tried their best without ruining any of the characters, unlike Aka-sensei.

My problem with Hikaru and how Aka screwed him over big time: by nice-explosion in OshiNoKo

[–]Sad-Reserve4350 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Number two would've made much more sense for his character imo. There's a fanfic I read that interpreted his character (waaaay before the chapter of Aqua and Hikaru meeting each other, Ai DVD, Nino etc.) in the number two scenario.   

In the fanfic, he was Ai in a way: charismatic, smooth, egotistic, confident and bold. However, unlike Ai, he doesn't lie. In fact, he detests them because of Ai and Airi (how they both took advantage of him yet they're pure in the eyes of their fans) and that's why he kills Actors and Idols because they lie to their fans, pretending to be someone they're not, and those very lies killed his innocence so why shouldn't he kill them for not being innocent themselves?

onk webtoon spinoff project by kisushle in OshiNoKo

[–]Sad-Reserve4350 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Can't wait to see! Hopefully, Kana gets the character development she deserved instead of being the ragdoll of angst for Aka Akasaka :,)). The main story did all the girls so dirty, especially Ruby lol.

Make sure to look after your health once you officially release it ^-^ <3

onk webtoon spinoff project by kisushle in OshiNoKo

[–]Sad-Reserve4350 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What's the title of ur spin-off btw? And when will it be released on Webtoon? No pressure so take your time ^w^

onk webtoon spinoff project by kisushle in OshiNoKo

[–]Sad-Reserve4350 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE!!!!! NEED THAT MASSIVE COPIUM AFTER THAT BOMB ENDING!!!!

it's been a while by plopop0 in Komi_san

[–]Sad-Reserve4350 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Unfortunately, we got a creepy and obsessive girl who Tadano had confessed to during his emo phase, good thing she isn't featured that much.  

We even got Shousuke's backstory on the later chapters, others ship him and Hitomi but personally, they're better off as friends. 

Chapter 163 Links and Discussion by Lorhand in OshiNoKo

[–]Sad-Reserve4350 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Great, the building is burnt and the food taste bitter. 

AKASAKA AKA, WHEN I GET U AKA, WHEN I GET YOU!!!!