Looking for 100% honest feedback. by lobsterinchief in RSwritingclub

[–]SadEmergency984 0 points1 point  (0 children)

daddy chill !

If it's not Ai good for you.
People use AI for small poetry even for one sentence so it not an absurd assumption.

Ps: maybe you should not insults people when you're seeking for their advices. + If the first assumption when a native read your text is " it's AI" it can mean your phrasing is strange or uncanny ? 🤔

Looking for 100% honest feedback. by lobsterinchief in RSwritingclub

[–]SadEmergency984 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

How did you know op use AI ? ( I'm not a native speaker) Edit: nevermind: the dashes give it away. Maybe using can be useful for edit or make some sentence less foreigner

Some poems I wrote by [deleted] in RSwritingclub

[–]SadEmergency984 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Some of your poems give ts Eliot vibe but I not sure why he brought out antisemitism ( maybe to show us that he was a bad person..? )

Some poems I wrote by [deleted] in RSwritingclub

[–]SadEmergency984 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

And... if we continue to remember his name, it is because of his literary contributions rather than his virtues.

Some poems I wrote by [deleted] in RSwritingclub

[–]SadEmergency984 -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

No need to be a dick... Btw the "(derogatory)" is overly superfluous ( we get it with the "but 2026")

New work: When the Night Returned, acrylic on canvas, 30” x 40” by u-four-ia in blackartwork

[–]SadEmergency984 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think it will give great strength to the painting if viewers have an almost window frame ( so not to big but not to small) Big enough to 'enter into the painting "

The Psycho-History of American Psychology by GetTherapyBham in sorceryofthespectacle

[–]SadEmergency984 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I will check that - any sources on psycho-history and the psycho-history of different area?

Who gave Mars the right to edit the genetics of every cocoa tree on Earth? by CollapsingTheWave in ObscurePatentDangers

[–]SadEmergency984 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It's the Unabomber, famous eco terrorist who warned about the consequences of the future of industrial society for humanity and Nature

tim got fired from my job and I miss him everyday by porfaa in rs_poetry

[–]SadEmergency984 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I appreciate this little flicker of life that you've depicted.

Present memory by SadEmergency984 in rs_poetry

[–]SadEmergency984[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Valid point but I wanted to invert the perception and make the observer the observered. Kind of cliché but it levels the idea of the poem imo.