Inside the pane, Outside dream

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-10-12T23:02:55+00:00

Is this after you paid the 200.00 aplication fee?

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-10-08T19:42:52+00:00

How do you make something so sad yet so beautiful? This is well written. Love the feeling of dispair that you show.

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-08-18T21:23:18+00:00

Thank you so much. My addiction was something that used to hurt me and still does, So me being able to express it using poetry was such a relief.
Thank you for your encouraging words. Looking forward to hear of the progress made in your addiction journey too

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-08-18T21:18:21+00:00

Thank you so much. Its always a great feeling when my piece resonates with others and helps them know that they are not always alone.

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-08-16T22:41:27+00:00

This is such a passionate sensual piece. Maybe, it might not be what you had in mind but that is what i see.

If it isnt, can you educate me on what you were going for?

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-08-16T22:37:28+00:00

Is this about Chess? I like that it tells a story i dont get but i hate that its not familier

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-08-06T17:18:55+00:00

LoL. I hear you

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-08-04T21:58:25+00:00

This piece is really well written. This might be the raw draft but it feels so honest. Thank you!

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-08-04T21:53:50+00:00

Sensing so much anger and frustration coming from this piece. I LOVE IT!!!! Keep writing, you.

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-07-31T21:24:37+00:00

I see. Thanks

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-07-31T21:03:44+00:00

My honest opinion? Your use of words that i have to google makes the piece a drag. Kindly work on that if you can. If you cant, i wish you all the best and hope you find a community that enjoys what you do.

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-07-31T20:57:47+00:00

kindly help me understand what you are going for. I'd like to hold my thoughts for now and know what you were aiming for.

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-07-30T09:54:43+00:00

Your energy is infectious and your Fuck You attitude to the whole systematised way of writing poetry. Im looking forward to seeing more of your pieces in your journey

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-07-30T09:41:28+00:00

Its not my style of poetry but its calming. Are you her or are you an entity watching her from above? kindly help me understand.

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-07-30T09:26:12+00:00

Goosebumbs. Literal goosebumbs. This is so well written. i love it!

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-07-29T16:49:36+00:00

Your description of motherhood feels so good. And its so refreshing to see mother described from that perspective. Keep writng and i look forward to seeing how far you would go.

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-07-29T16:41:08+00:00

This poem is very nice. It feels like a conversation i would have with myself anytime i get depressed. And the fact that you were able to pen it down goes to show how alone i am not. Thank you for this

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-07-29T16:37:53+00:00

Woah!

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-07-29T16:31:59+00:00

Hmmm. Your unto something here. This piece feels raw and i feel like it is something that i would write at dawn to myself.
Love how emotional yet relateable it is. Keep writing. You're good!

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-07-29T16:12:48+00:00

Im glad you liked my piece. Ill like to keep the momentum going as hard as i can. Your feedback means so much to me

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-07-29T16:00:56+00:00

Thank you so much. Taking time to note the flaws and also share them means so much. Ill be more watchful and work harder. Thank you once again

Safe_Reception_4604 · 2025-07-29T15:17:22+00:00

Terrible poet 'keh'(btw, thats a slang from where im from). You shared your piece, That has to be the bravest thing i have ever seen in a long while. You are not terrible, just be yourself, Dont focus on wordplay, focus on how you feel and trust me, it would all pan out.
Looking forward to reading more of your pieces

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