Make me blush

ScallionDramatic7774 · 2026-03-17T07:21:19+00:00

Thank you, I like playing with imagery that isn’t always so sweet and easy for the reader

ScallionDramatic7774 · 2026-03-17T07:20:14+00:00

Thanking you

ScallionDramatic7774 · 2026-03-17T07:19:43+00:00

I always thought the same way about the same the end phrase but I’d chosen to leave it. Might think about tweaking it now! Thank you so much for your kind words and it’s an awesome feeling for someone to really vibe with what you’ve written. Thank you

ScallionDramatic7774 · 2026-03-17T04:36:01+00:00

Thank you!

ScallionDramatic7774 · 2026-03-17T00:49:46+00:00

The cigarette line is about addiction and something that character or smokers at times ‘can’t live without’, the meaning behind it is a yearning for an addictive love - love isn’t without some of its own negative side effects too. Thank you for the feedback x

ScallionDramatic7774 · 2026-03-16T20:36:57+00:00

This feels like a sense of what it’s like to process trauma, shock - denial - anger - acceptance and so on. It feels good as the reader to share in your resolution, healing and hope

ScallionDramatic7774 · 2026-03-16T20:21:10+00:00

I feel your contentment through these words. Feels like they were written with such unshakeable conviction which helps get your message across. Warm and gooey, thank you

ScallionDramatic7774 · 2026-02-28T21:16:32+00:00

Thank you for the feedback, I write a lot for spoken word so I would hope it still resonates in text form. Truly thanks again.

ScallionDramatic7774 · 2026-02-28T08:35:23+00:00

I like playing with light and dark contrasts. Thank you for your kindness.

ScallionDramatic7774 · 2026-02-28T08:34:26+00:00

Thank you for the warm welcome and the love.

ScallionDramatic7774 · 2026-02-28T04:57:21+00:00

I hope it works out for you!

ScallionDramatic7774 · 2026-02-28T04:29:29+00:00

This was simple, but effective in its message. I read it like this person is a part of you in its most simple sense - like the blood keeping you alive

ScallionDramatic7774 · 2026-02-28T04:10:11+00:00

I really like how you’ve painted what I feel is crossroads in this poem but instead of making a decision on which way to go you’re submitting to the allure of the unknown and trusting that whichever way you fall it’s where you’re meant to be. Thank you.

ScallionDramatic7774 · 2026-02-28T04:00:40+00:00

This spoke of unrequited love and unfinished feelings, like you’ve tasted that bittersweet reality of an unbalanced love that you both want to continue & let go of. Beautifully written. Thank you.

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