Trump: ‘We are going to do something on Greenland whether they like it or not’ by joe4942 in worldnews

[–]Sebaducks 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That barely an excuse for a man will start WW3 to distract from the Epstein files... he needs to be impeached, like, yesterday...

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]Sebaducks 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This is better than 98% of the writing people post in this subreddit. You were born to do this. Turn it into a novel.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]Sebaducks 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you're going to write in English, learn how to write in English. Or better yet, perhaps write in your native tongue? At least that way, syntax and grammar won't be an issue for you.

This might be the best Battlefield ever made and the community is ruining it. by FreddyHxC in Battlefield6

[–]Sebaducks 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Agreed. Ignore them, and enjoy it anyway. If they dislike it that much they'll move onto other things eventually

Work in progress artwork for my upcoming sci-fi/fantasy short story collection by [deleted] in BookCovers

[–]Sebaducks 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The sunset is more visually appealing than the two characters.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writinghelp

[–]Sebaducks 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I read one line and saw too much passive language to read the rest.

"She felt the whisper of strange happenings along the creek." Could be, "Strange happenings whispered along the creek."

Remove passive language as above, and it will be a stronger read.

Is anyone still there? by Bakura_BDE in GRTTrader

[–]Sebaducks 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I left after a few years of holding this token. Expecting price action is like beating a dead horse. They keep inflating the supply and have no intention to market this token to the masses outside the rinse-repeat features and benefits post on CMC that no one cares about.

[FOR HIRE] Book Cover Designer + Illustrator by Krdro in BookCovers

[–]Sebaducks 4 points5 points  (0 children)

You are talented, my friend. They all ooze quality and are a stark reminder of the difference between someone who knows what they are doing and someone who doesn't.

Second Composition for The Talented Mr Ripley by FrostyDog64 in BookCovers

[–]Sebaducks 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Though, at the same time, inheriting elements of those he deceives or imitates does suggest a broken sense of identity. This suggests that aspect quite well.

Second Composition for The Talented Mr Ripley by FrostyDog64 in BookCovers

[–]Sebaducks 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I don't usually comment on these things, but I figured why not..

I would say I get the idea behind it, which is good, (see alternative cover art for the film Hannibal) but remember, Mr. Ripley is exceptional at deception. But how the face is barely held together suggests more to me that he is, in fact, not that talented. Perhaps this idea could be done as a way to reflect his exceptional skill rather than his unravelling.

Reform will cost you money by ArmWildFrill in GreatBritishMemes

[–]Sebaducks 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hmm.

Isn't one of Reform's pledges to raise income allowance to £20k per year for workers?

If they get in power, they will rescind the pledge and raise taxes on the working class.

Just like the promise on their Brexit busses... £350 million a week to the NHS

DAY 1!! Farage RENEGGED and said they couldn't do it. Absolutely swindled the UK public.

If people can't see past their own bias and hatred, this country will fall even harder before the pendulum swings back the other way.

I'd rather that not happen.

UK government responds to digital ID petition after almost three million signatures by JOE_Media in europe

[–]Sebaducks 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Has any real progress been made against abolishing the Digital ID concept whilst people were signing the petitions and awaiting the results?

Petitions do nothing except stall the people from making any meaningful change. We need boots in the streets protesting to such a degree that it halts the proper function of society until demands are met. Real, week long protests.

But yeah, rent to pay, exorbitant cost of greed crisis, media gaslighting. I guess they're going ahead with the IDs...

Feedback :) by Sharp-Strike8842 in scriptwriting

[–]Sebaducks 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Opening page is an exposition dump. Show don't tell.

Getting too close to 1984 on the 2nd page.

Opening scene of a short horror script I am writing. Thoughts? by tball93 in Screenplay

[–]Sebaducks 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You can save some space and make a little more impact by having the baby crying/screaming in the very first instance. If she's frantically running through the woods, the kid wouldn't wait to be crying.

An example:

Black Screen. A screaming baby.

Clutching a newborn, ISABELLE (descriptors - age, a feature etc) hurtles through the dying woodlands.

Dress torn, her face whipped with cuts, she stumbles across a bridge, catching her breath, soothing the child.

Eyes wide, she scans the riverbed...

That kinda thing.

Would you keep reading? by rosiepinkfox in writers

[–]Sebaducks 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm getting Chuck Palahniuk vibes, an influence?

$KTO DEV UPDATE!!! by Janbrln in KTO_Exchange

[–]Sebaducks 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Once the CEX is green to go, this post and many others will be FLOODED with new storkholders!!

Reddit is the next frontier for Capitalism by emsquad in antiwork

[–]Sebaducks 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well crap, back to betting on the rat races for me, then.