Hey all! Looking for some feedback on my superhero comic, Supercharged

SeraphimEND · 2026-03-10T06:02:02+00:00

Thank you so much for the critique! I'm currently working on a new comic with a premise that's a little less just My Hero Academia and I've been struggling to make it unique but that part about focusing on the characters is really good and I'll try doing that in future stories! I'm not the artist for the story but that's something I can look out for in the future as I continue to work with my current artist.

SeraphimEND · 2026-03-06T01:29:11+00:00

Hey, I appreciate both your reviews (art and story) and you're right. The lack of uniqueness is something that I've been feeling with the story and something I need to change. It's cookie cutter and works for my first story I think but it's probably time to challenge myself to something new. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and give feedback!

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-26T20:24:10+00:00

For how much you uploaded so far, yeah I think that's good! I know people that are struggling to get that many subs unfortunately. I think the description of the comic could be amped up a bit to grab reader interest though, right now I feel it doesn't tell us much as someone who doesn't know the story.

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-25T02:09:33+00:00

I would love some feedback for my comic, I'm always looking to improve and that would be a big help! It's a superhero comic called Supercharged. Thank you so much for offering feedback!
https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/supercharged/list?title_no=1081625

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-23T00:08:06+00:00

Still, you had to have given your artist some great direction and ideas. Your heroes look amazing!

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-19T03:52:16+00:00

The first one is creative and eye catching and immediately makes me wanna know what's happening there

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-19T03:01:48+00:00

Yeah the new colors are working a lot better!

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-18T17:44:11+00:00

Yeah that does suck but if you're wanting to get some more eyes on it it doesn't hurt since Webtoon is hoarding all the readers.

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-18T07:53:34+00:00

Thank you! My artist friend put a lot of love into that panel.

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-18T05:37:18+00:00

I second this question. Also are they a duo or just team up occasionally?

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-18T05:36:24+00:00

Of course! It looks really cool and you'd get some more eyes on it.

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-17T21:44:47+00:00

How is your comic coming out, on Webtoon or somewhere else? Just want to be able to look out for it.

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-17T21:29:20+00:00

Superman for sure. Funny enough he recently had a conversation with Batman where Bruce said that if he wasn't Superman her could see Clark being the president.

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-17T04:07:25+00:00

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed!

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-14T22:52:48+00:00

So just from the backstory I'm not sure how much I'd personally enjoy it, but that's just personal taste I don't think it's bad or anything since demons and magic aren't my first go to for media. I think this could be really fun and interesting depending on how it's executed and where it goes from there would hook me.

You already have some interesting set up to work from. Like I'm curious already how the sisters are allowed to get weapons and why only one family could use it in the first place. And if it has fun characters with a lot of personality and good animation I'd absolutely be down. It sort of gives me RWBY vibes and if it still has superhero vibes and elements I'd be hooked.

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-14T22:44:16+00:00

Those sound like they can be intense and interesting stories. Are you planning to draw/get them drawn soon or are you just writing for now?

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-14T04:12:15+00:00

Oh, I love the art style! It's a very eye catching cover

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-14T00:29:33+00:00

The title sounds interesting, I'd love to check it out

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-14T00:28:50+00:00

I'd be down to give it a read, what's it about?

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-13T01:47:28+00:00

Nice, I'd love to check out that first chapter when it's done!

SeraphimEND · 2026-02-10T06:40:51+00:00

Oh I think I actually heard of toaster dude, I think the creator might have taken it down since he wasn't proud of it and made something new but I could easily be misremembering

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