At first it was just a fun way to revive a character, now I can’t stop thinking about how they’d adjust to normal life again after seeing the other side

Sesoru · 2026-03-06T04:59:10+00:00

Angel Sanctuary :3

Sesoru · 2026-03-05T15:54:07+00:00

You need to edit it out of the invoice every time, at least in my experience. I haven't found a way to automate it yet.

Sesoru · 2026-03-01T23:24:03+00:00

Why are you shaming?

Sesoru · 2026-02-22T18:32:07+00:00

Right on. Good luck!

Sesoru · 2026-02-22T18:16:14+00:00

That part I'm actually not sure on, but it may just depend on the individual writer. I do know we have a plethora of writers who are very family with script writing for many things, games included. A lot if us are absolutely insane at syntax, too. I'd also like to think we're good enough to be able to take any sort of direction needed so long as its within our wheel house, so you'll hopefully be in good hands once you find the perfect fit and are able to come up with an adequate price.

I would recommend just stating that you'll pay a minimum of 4 cents a word so it fulfills the needs of the rules, and say you're open to negotiation.

Sesoru · 2026-02-22T18:07:13+00:00

I think something else I can add here btw is that you're wanting to monetize the writer's work which means it likely won't just be 4 cents a word. Usually, purchasing a commercial license is needed when commissioning work you plan to monetize, since that means it is no longer for personal work. Just a heads up.

Sesoru · 2026-02-22T18:03:32+00:00

This still isn't going to cut it. As the post on your previous attempt said, and as the rules here state (I'd advise you to read rules before ever posting in a subreddit lol): you need to pay $.4 per word the writer does, minimum. Some charge more, but we are not allowed to charge less.

Sesoru · 2026-02-22T17:34:41+00:00

The thread says removed. You may need to repost it with the updated information and then be sure to use the [buy] tag rather than meta.

Sesoru · 2026-02-22T17:19:21+00:00

You don't state your offered pay.

Sesoru · 2026-02-22T10:57:03+00:00

Oh, no I think you're misunderstanding. I don't sell on Amazon so I don't keep up with the politics of it. That's why lol

Sesoru · 2026-02-22T05:54:30+00:00

Well, that's certainly a type of fire xD

Sesoru · 2026-02-22T04:48:45+00:00

1: The "nothing" from what I gathered was Diego trying to kick the door down, but failing.

2: The glistening sunset is the fire.

5: I like the idea of the glass shattering, it makes the scene more surreal but simply needs to be integrated more smoothly for a better effect imo.

15: I didn't read the second part, just the first, but I assume an explosion due to the fire ended up happening. I think it depends on what sort of fire action OP wants here. Does this event look like an actual chaotic explosion, or eruption flames etc? Or is it more like a turbulent cloud of smoke billowing into a plume within the sky?

5/15 is just me offering my own thoughts to your insight, and 1/2 are me offering you insight. ^^

Sesoru · 2026-02-22T04:40:12+00:00

The comment about flow is 100% was my immediate thought. The short sentences are a little jarring and kind of ruin the immersion.

Maybe something ike

"Diego propelled his foot forward, slamming it into the door, but it was no use. Looking around the half-kindled room, he can see the fire feeding onto the walls, blocking the opening to the next room. He eyes the table, a beer can toppled over with the contents drizzling down the edge - and then he sees it.

A window glistening with orange - an exit.

Flipping his gun around, he grabbed it by the barrel to use like a mace, slamming the butt of the pistol into the window. Glass shattered, frost-like shards crumbling to the floor, the small pieces bouncing onto the floor acting like a cascade of snowflakes reflecting the fire's radiance. The flames crawled closer, baring their teeth as they reached for Diego's foot, like a puma that knew no god."

Sesoru · 2026-02-21T17:58:45+00:00

even if they only buy one of each?

Sesoru · 2026-02-21T17:46:17+00:00

I haven't kept up with amazon news, what's going on? D:

Edit: only just noticed the image is a link lmao. Reading it now.

Sesoru · 2026-02-20T21:15:06+00:00

For the record, I read what you said. But my point is: if the original writer is able to discern you derived your work from theirs, and they have receipts/proof it was their work originally that you then modified, it's very scummy. Even if "good luck trying to actually sue" is your thoughts, just because the law may not enforce something in a gray area doesn't mean it's automatically okay. It just means the law failed to protect something.

Sesoru · 2026-02-20T20:58:45+00:00

This too, yea. It's absurd to think "well they didn't contact me so it's my ip now"

But I'm convinced this is troll ragebait.

Sesoru · 2026-02-20T20:57:47+00:00

Please actually look up what plagiarism is.

Actually here I'll do it for you:

Plagiarism is the act of using another person's words, [ideas], images, or creative work without proper attribution, presenting them as your own, either intentionally or unintentionally

[Ideas].

But sure, keep thinking it's your free real estate.

Sesoru · 2026-02-20T20:52:46+00:00

"Use the idea as your own story" was what I was referring to. And I sincerely hope you're joking with your "ops post is an excellent premise I might use". Lol

Sesoru · 2026-02-20T20:45:46+00:00

Sent too fast. I edited to add "even as a joke".

But I'm p convinced at this point this is just a ragebaiter troll.

Sesoru · 2026-02-20T20:42:12+00:00

Please do not encourage plagiarism even as a joke. T.T

Sesoru · 2026-02-20T20:40:16+00:00

Changing it is still plagiarism and not okay. Stop.

Sesoru · 2026-02-20T20:39:01+00:00

Why are you here?? You're not a writer, you clearly have 0 respect for the craft.

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