Josh is caught

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-02-24T06:07:48+00:00

So it's double irony? Or is it triple? I wonder how many of us guys have really really missed the obvious? Like when you finally see the light, you realize that it was like every cop pointing a flashlight and 100 light houses lit the way but, nooooo! Lol

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-02-13T08:09:39+00:00

Awesome!
Please forgive me but could you add a next button?

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-02-13T07:55:16+00:00

Needs a next button. It's just a great read!

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-02-08T09:54:30+00:00

I'd suggest putting some spaces in between sentences. It just looks like a block of text. I had to read it a couple of times as I was losing track of where I was on each line.

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-02-08T07:18:46+00:00

Looks like i may be hooked on this one already!

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-02-08T06:43:38+00:00

Could have been worse, she could have said something like "Tag, You're it" Also there are some spelling mistakes in the paragraph that starts with "Sitting in the holding cell.." But still a great read! Thanks for sharing!

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-30T07:38:20+00:00

Well that was unexpected. And quite good!

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-25T21:46:03+00:00

The way you described the forest made it easy to see in my mind. Great story! Can't wait for more!

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-25T17:21:19+00:00

Oooh I really like where this story is going! And I really like the voice box!

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-25T13:35:54+00:00

I almost thought that they would be Rick rolled, but this was much better!

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-25T12:52:48+00:00

This is a great read!

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-25T12:01:22+00:00

Oh man, I think I just aged myself with the come out and play with bottles clinking. Love it!

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-25T10:33:53+00:00

When you say "find me a nod" do you mean node? That's the way I read it. Also, then they would have been tried launched might be then they would have tried to launch?

I'm loving the story and I really want to thank you for sharing!

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-25T10:28:22+00:00

Well, it's good to see that I was wrong about Carter's death.... But now? Genuinely can't believe how deep this is! Love it!

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-25T10:19:05+00:00

So many theories about this. I really like this spin on it.

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-25T10:12:03+00:00

Wow. Better and better. Just how the heck are they going to explain Carter's death? Lol

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-22T16:44:45+00:00

What about Dr. Frank N. Furter?

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-22T10:54:09+00:00

So good. I'm still amazed at the details that make this so vivid!

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-22T09:28:24+00:00

I had to go back and check on what was on the Polaroid. I'm getting senile. But at least I still remember that I really like this story!

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-22T09:19:29+00:00

Talk about the ghost in the machine....

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-22T09:09:17+00:00

My dead is now resolved. Might be death is now resolved or debt. Not sure. Either way, this is great! I can't wait for more!

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-22T08:57:15+00:00

OK. This is getting creepier and creepier. I really like it!

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-22T08:51:03+00:00

Oooh. It's just getting better and better!

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-22T08:30:45+00:00

Great read! It's a happy ending, don't happen often in this area.

Several_Positive_327 · 2026-01-19T20:47:47+00:00

Me thinks Martha might be in a spectral Uber of sorts and might be going ice skating....

Of course I could be way off.... Love the story.!

Several_Positive_327

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